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Posted: 13 years ago

Jst want to see them as a happy family with lovely scenes😉 with old bubbly geet.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Well Di I feel Geet's recovery is more important but Maan should play an important role in it
I mean he was the one who destroyed Geet's innocence and was the reason behind her heartbroken state hence it will his responsibility to get her back as well
mere hisaab se yahi uski sabse badi punishment hai kyunki dil todna bahut aasan hai par dil jodna aur bharosa jeetna uthna hi mushkil

Armaan Malik 😳 will b waiting

waise Di I remember IL par maine comment nahi kiya hai don't worry I will comment on all the updates and that too a big one just thodi beemar hoon kisi bhi tarah se apne ffs ko update kar paa rahi hoon but I want to read ur updates peacefully issliye abhi tak update par comment nahi kiya

aur haan Ritzy Di ko mat baiyega k man beemar hoon wo khamkha pareshan ho jaati hai

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Posted: 13 years ago
geet recovery is priority for me maan ko to geet khud punish kar hi rahi he geet ko dukh de kar maan bhi to remorse feel kar raha he i think maan mko punishment ki nahi ye samjhne ki jarurat he geet ko usne kitna hurt kiyA HE PAST ME AUR GEET KO WO PYAAR DE K HI SAHI KAR SAKTA HW
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet coming back to herself
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'll go for Geet becoming well!! then she can punish Maan as she wants..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan getting punishment is needed but priority goes to Geet getting back to old self.
Edited by Saams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
Thanks for your response t my question.
I got views on both but majority goes on getting Geet well. But as you all said, Maan is still going thru punishment himself... when he have realized his love for Geet and his mistake and to see Geet this way is his biggest punishment. More over he is ready for toughest punishment. But this will not help Geet's condition.
Yes, as most of you suggested, I will go with Geet's health as priority adn along with it Maan is already going thru punishment.
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Part 29
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He held her shoulder to shake her "Please stop this' kya ho gaya hai tumhe'. I am bad I was bad per meri wajah se tum kyun khud ko badal rahee hoo'. You know our relation was so pure'"

She jerked his hand away from his shoulder'. And left, leaving him all alone to search for his old Geet who has been lost somewhere' he has lost her in his own pride.

Geet again returned late' whatever party she went Maan now never questioned her just sent the bodygursa with her' all women commandoes and nor did they ever enquire with them about where she had been'. The guards were purely for Geet's security as she would be late night party'.

Next morning, when Maan returned from Gym he found Geet was awake and in washroom' he was so relieve,means she didn't drink that badly'.Actualy after talk with dadima, Geet has promised herself to take medicine propery on time and no bad habits that would affect Mohit' she only wanted to believe she lived only for Mohit' and she did these activities was to show down her husband but somewhere within her heart was still waiting for something'. There was deep yearning'.

When she came out he was waiting for her

She looked at him and ignoring him went to the dresser.. he went behind her

"Today is the board meeting for new project" she did not give any answer'

"You are 51% share holder' your vote will be important" she kept on doing what she was doing without even looking at him

"Meeting is at 11:00. I want us to take this project but some members think I should not take it"

She got up and went to the wardrobe to get her clothes ' he walked behind her

"I just wanted to say' if you can mak it there, your vote will make difference"

At last she turned "I have a kitty today and I need to go to parlour too' I will see"

It was 10 am in the office, Maan was just hoping if Geet can make her mind to come to office. Since realization of his mistake he has been in so much guilt as to not force her for anything' he could just request her' he had transferred 51% of the companies share to her' he wanted to gove his everything to her but he needed some power to run the company as Geet would not do that for him or else everything was hers' Anything he did for her he felt was less'

Adi came to his cabin

"Geet mam is asking the file of project"

"Then give it to her"

"But sir, she don't know anything about this project.. if she does not get clear idea of project and she votes against you"

Maan was happy Geet had come on his request'. How could she not'. Howmuch she hated her husband for his deeds her heart could still not let him down in front of others.

"Just give it to her."

The board meeting was held and the vote passed in favour of Maan, offcourse Geet voted for him'.

Maan saw her in board meeting directly, she looked so elegant but when she got up he got the view of her her sexy back'he gulped his saliva but soon his eyes went on other members who were too feasting on her beautiful back' Maan could not take this and Geet knew this very well and this was her other way to trouble him'.

Without thinking of her reaction her held her from her shoulder covering her back from his body and took her out'

Geet got angry and jerked him'

"What is this Mr. Khurana"

Maan made a sorry face but pleadingly said' "Aise kapde pehenker office me' everyone sees you with wrong eyes'"

"So what does it matter to you" she asked sharply

"I can't bear this' you know' koi tumharee taraf dekhe I can't bear.. pata hai na tumhe" he said touching her cheeks lovingly and fixing her pallu on her shoulder to cover her back.

"Don't you understand, I don't care what you like or not" she again said with sharpness and dropping her pallu' Maan shied and left and the moment he left she covered her back with her pallu'.

Maan was sitting in his office' he worked in office like a machine, just using his mind his heart was with geet and his son al the time'

Maan who never wanted to be a family guy today was dying for a happy family and he would not get it.

He took out old picture of Geet from his desk' and started remebring his olden days but soon his mind drifted on how he has ruined her from his own hands.

Past:

After knowing she was pregnant Geet felt very guilty of her deed' though there was little pinch that Maan married her only for his child, yet she was thankful to him 100 times for saving there child'.

Days passed and her guilt increased' she went on realizing more and more how a sinful act she had done.. she wanted to please Maan but he avoided her like anything but nurses and care taker would be all time with her' she was fed up with them'They would not llet her have anything other than nutritious and being pregnant she so much wanted to eat something chatpatta'. But Maan did not care' he just wanted to concentrate on healthy child.

When all women, during pregnancy are pampered and all their wishes are fulfilled, for Geet it was just routines that she has to follow'. In guilt of her own she would never think of her wishes' did as Maan wanted her to do, anyways he would not let her do anyother ways'.

Sometimes when she would see Maan she would rush to him'.

"Maan' I know, it was big big mistake'. I will never forgive myself for that' but Maan you need to trust I did not do it on purpose, how could I'. maujhe kuch nahi pata tha, sachi"

"I can't take risk with my baby by believing you"

As for Maan, he had known the pain of cheating from a parent'. How broken he had been when his dad left them for a woman' that pain was still alive in his heart' he did not want to take risk of Geet hurting his child' his own lonliness as a child made him over protective about his child'

His mother had all been lost in his father after he left and gave her life'he thought, no one thought about him as a child and he in no case wanted that to happen with his child'.

Geet was doing same thing'. For his fault she punished his child, now he did not want to trust her and risk his child'.

One day Geet so much wanted to eat some chatpatta' eating dietry food throuout the pregnancy was taking toll on her' She saw Maan that day

He was having breakfast

"Maan" he did not reply "Maan' just for once, bohut dil ker raha hai chatpatta khane ka' pregnancy ka he asar hai' please ek bar allow ker do na'"

"No" he had said and left' Geet not even once thought of denying him' after all he was the saver and she was the sinner'

Then one day Geet got into labour' she was rushed to hospital' maan left everything immediately'

Geet in labour room heard the cry of baby and they showed her the baby's face'. She hugged him and then the baby was taken to Maan'

And after that Geet did not get to see the baby' Maan placed it in nursery'.

Geet asked him about Baby

"Now you have given birth to him, that's it' jiskee jaan tum lene wali thi, do you think I will give him to you' nahi' he is my son and I am enough to grow him up"

Geet had been shocked to hear this'.

"Maan,nahi' please don't do this' main khud itnee badi guilt me hoon'. Mera baccha hai Maan"

"Now let me tell you' you can stay in house' but stay away from me and my child' and no more Maan' I am just Mr. Khuran' samjhi tum, koi rishta nahi hai hamara'"

Geet was broken that day' her guilt of being a sinner increased' but whole one month she spent pleading maan and everytime he would say harser and harsher words'

Her mothes body ached to feed her baby' Maan did not realize it' first baby' her body was responding to motherly feeling' she wanted to feed baby and relax'. But he would not allow.. he could never understand what she was going thru'

But slowly slowly Geet started to become numb due to his harsh word' countinously telling her he was just Mr. Khurana to her and nothing more' she could not see her child'

Her pain and guilt made her sink' slowly she lost all hope of Maan letting her see her child' she could not believe then that he was so heartless and did not care a bit about her'

"I really never meant anything to him' so many times he have told me..that day when he humiliated me infront of everyone, he cleared his intentions' shadi ke baad meri he jhutee umeede badh gayee' he is true Maan is no one to me' all that happened between us was nothing for him"

"I gave my whole self to him when he clearly said everytime it was just lust for him' he was playing game' why somewhere I took it for love'. Now he has Maaried me' Geet is no more alive for him' he has forgotten her' he is just Mr. Khurana and I am Mrs Khurana'"

These thought started deepening in Geet's mind with each day and more than this the pain of not seeing her child and even more,one thing that Maan had instilled in her her' she was sinner'

She slowly sunk in a room in the big Mansion' her life was hell' she wanted to punish her for all her deed' for loving him, for cheating on her family for him and above all her guilt towards her child'.

She started finding ways to punish herself' she started to change day by day' Maan didn't even care for once where she was in that big Mansion'. He just knew she was there' did not want to see her'

He was lost in his child' giving his love to his child'.

One person who was observer of all this was Dadima' she was seeing the pain Maan was giving geet since he had married her' she has continuously tried to explain him but at last seeing his heartless side she started hating her own grandson'

This old women has seen so much, her own sone leaving his family and now her grandson torturing his wife' her life was so painfull' never did she get to see a happy family in this mansion.

Next to be continued

Precap: Maan seeing Geet in Pain😭😭😭😭, realizing his mistake

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful heart wreanching update pls do update the next part soon it will be too hard to wait for long @ the point where you left ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
What goes around comes around..its maan turn to pay, love the plot
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...feel so bad for geet...

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