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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rabba Ve
Prologue.
16th May 2012, Delhi.
Mommy yells a small boy running through the house to his Mommy Arms. My Baby, How was your day in school Aryan? says His mother. It was fab mommy, i got so many gifts for my B'day. Haha. I love my B'day Mom. and I love you also. I love you too Aryan says his Mom. Heeerrr someone yells. Yes Nihal Bhaiyya, Aryan Baby Mamu is calling me, you go and get fresh ok. muaah. Yes Mommy.
16th May 2012, Canada.
Its been 7 years that I have Left Heer. I still can't belive it was Heer who left me for the Rajveer. who could she? I still think that the love we shared was fake? How could you Heer? You might have Moved on but why can't I? I Hate you Heer for what you did too me.
16th May 2012, Delhi.
Its 16th May today and its Aryan's B'day. He has turned 6 years old today. Its been 6 years since Aryan is born and 7 years since Prem left me. Wish i could go back and make evrything perfect. every year on Aryan's b'day he misses his father and i can see that but he never says to me because he knows i may feel bad. Aryan truely ressembles My Prem.
So Guys Tell me if i should Continue? If i get good response than only i will Update it. coz my last OSs didnt get well response so before posting the whole OS i want to see Deshians Response.
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Ms.Raizada thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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divya!!! chup chap update kar.. prologue dekar hume heart attack mat de!!! i love it.. and feel bad for the mom and son... update soon!!!! jaldi se jaldi..plz...zzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waahhh kiya baat hain apki😃...waiting for the OS

Reserved!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I saw this post earlier when you had reserved it, and was wondering when you were going to update. Just came to IF and got your PM...😛
Poor Aryan (I love that name by the way)...birthdays are bittersweet for him and Heer. And Prem doesn't even know he has a child.
It's a great start Divya...Please do continue...😃...and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ...waiting for the update ...
newt2007 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Writing OS on Premeer and waiting for response.
How dare you Divya?
We love to read it don't you know it?
Hear breaking prologue. Three different hearts pain.
Hope this year Aryan gets his father's love. Heer fulfills her heart desire.
Waiting for your update
Comeone fast now our heart started paining.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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divz update kar rahi hai ya nahi??????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start
eagerly waiting 4 nxt part
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pleae yaar.. kam se kaam.. o/s ke liye toh wait maat karwo..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome prologue...
plzzz
update soon...
and thanxx for d pm!!!!!!!

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