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hello peoples hope u will like this its my first time and i got help from my besties so hope u guys like it
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Arnav is already kidnapped by shyam. arnav is locked up in a dark isolated cottage in middle of a forest.
RM: kushi is sad and living on the memories of arnav ji sitting on her bed when she hears shyam talking to someone in the garden. She creeps up to the door and listens and she hears him talkin to one of his agents about him kidnapping arnav ji she also hears him say that he will be going to see him now to feed him. Shyam: ubb humme toh janna parenga kuyke hum salle sahb ko buke toh nahi rak sate hai na.
Kushi shocked hearing this decides to follow shyam to see arnav ji and save him
On the way to the forest. Kushi: yeh kaise jaga hai ethni dore ethni sunsaan jaga hai koi avase hi nahi suna raha hai
kushi sees the cottage and goes in through the back as there are guards at the front. She sees arnav half beaten and tied up in a char it the middle of the room. She runs to him forgeting that shyam is in the room.
Shyam: Toh aap ahhege mein tera entziar kar raha tah...kushi ji...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey peoples if u hav read this please comment should i continue or not
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Second Part
shyam sees kushi there and gets excited.
shyam: kushi ji toh ap ayhege
kushi: aap aap arnav ji ko ko chordo, mei apne haat jorte hoi
Shyam: Asie nahi, hum chordey den ge sale sahib ko
Kushi: Kya chatey hai aap !!!!!!!!!!!!
Shyam: Jo hum chatey hai wo aap jante hai kya hai...aap kushi ji
Arnav: Shyam dooor raho kushi se
Aranv head: why am i hepling kushi i hate her nafrat hai humme uss se ku oska side le raha ho mein
Kushi: please arnav ji ko chordo hum kuch bhi kari ke liye thayar hai
Shyam: teek hai shadi kar lo mujse let me put sindoor on your maang
Kushi: Crying teek hai agar ye shadi meri aranv ji ko bachayege toh mein karonge.
Aranv: KYA
Arnav anger is rising his blood pressure so high cant do anything because he is tied up in a chair.
Shyam takes kushi hand and takes her to where he alreday hat the sindoor ready.
Kushi crying tears making puddles shyam picks up thi sindoor in his finger tips and slowly starts to put it on her maang.
Before one drop of sindoor lands on her forehaed he is stopped by someone by the wrist and gets a tight slap hard across his face...
who stops him why does that person stop him if u want to no then please comment then i will continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its lovely
is it anjaly
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its definitely anjali
Pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my god u are such a bad person ...ended it when it was getting interesting...plz continue want to know who it was...
u know whenever i think khushi finding arnav i always think abt andaz apna apna scene where salmaan khan and aamir khan finds out paresh rawal ...as this serial also has comic approach...
if u haven't watch the movie i strongly recommend, its a classic comedy...
Edited by binimoti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PLEASE add me to your PM list I would love to read more!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thankyou sooo much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: star_fan1

its lovely

is it anjaly
plz update soon

thanx i will update as soon as possible it mite be read on to find out
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: taniks

Its definitely anjali
Pls continue

thanx will update asap

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