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Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update loved mayur moments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nic update di...
so finally mayank ooopppsss mackzz is in love wooo
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed




thanku

yes they are a couple... i certainly don't want k the way she is woh confess keray and all...
woh mayank hai..u think woh kneel down hoker us ko kuch kahay gay.. his words that he isnt her frnds bf n threw her in hell.. made it clear tht he is serious abt her...

imagine this stroy not as an asian.. as a person living in states



imagining a western lifestyle ios lil um not very difficult for me .

hmmm ...i know mayank is serious n he himself knows dat too .but donoka mutual koi understanding hua k nahi ye samajh nahi aya tha .😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
I see some improvement in their relation... and got to see the hidden side of Mayank... now, some from Nupur's side...

Nicely written, Fiza 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the way confesses her ...and make her understand...

that was amazing..
could able to see a side of mayank..
and also.. loved the fact that
nupsie.. aka..nupur

current ran through her spines on the brushing of his hands of her arm..
that means his touch actually affects her and she tries to deny this fact..
but before she could do..
mayank... caame and made those hovoc of emotions to flow in a
proper speed and shape...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update.Especially I liked " I am not ur frnds boyfriend who will throw u in hell."
It show that Mayank knows that there is something that is bothering her may b something in her past.Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago

For all those who forgot her past.. her navagitor her friend remember her..is sumhow was still in her mind.. hope u now understand her…

Chapter: 12

Mayank: why u were saying that with jack u need to get dirty

Nupur: he is very sharp in his reflex…u have to be very very tricky with him to get the lead….

Mayank: how u did it…

Nupur: burst his tire..

Mayank: WHT…thts cheating

Nupur: oh really… he do all such things than it isn't cheating…when we do its cheating….

Mayank: noway that's not at all my style… no cheating

Nupur: than no wining…

Mayank: it cant be true..there always a way to win rather than just cheating… huh…ur cell is ring..i don't mind u can talk to ur ex boyfriend..

Nupur: n who need ur permission to talk to my current or ex bf..

Mayank: current u don't need to.. I am all ears… ex.okay I will tolerate…

Nupur: how many girlfriends u had..huh..

Mayank: none… I do have girls in my life… who were just ot serve the purpose..but no gf…I am so a one woman man…

She burst into laughter…

Nupur: wao…mackz one woman man… hell.. its an email… we got the track for 2morow..

Mayank: open it… now where it is..

Nupur: wait a min… dam it…

Mayank: wht…now were it is… we have to drive on sea,.. or

Nupur: sand…

Mayank: wht the hell… SAND..

Nupur: ya and that's so with all hurdles… who the **** has design the tracks this time….

Mayank: sand with hurdles… we donot have jeeps, or such cars..

Nupur: we have a day ..we have to make the car perfect.. it is a short track…. As nobody have such cars…. Though the top three can change there cars…and jack will I am dam sure…

Mayank: we don't have one.. wht about renting…

Nupur: do u have money to waste in all that…

Mayank: no..

Nupur: so do it all in this car … it will work.. have u ever drive in sand…

Mayank: I have.. but not for the race… I mean it very tricky.. u cant put low speed the car will get stuck in sand..and with hurdles in high speed…my car… will be in sure pain with all the bumps n jumps she has to do..

Nupur: aha…. But what kinda hurdles… we need to see…. She was taping her cell and thinking

Mayank: so check it…

Nupur: they donot give u the whole track… its just an out line view.. about miles.. abt the track…and location

Mayank: n how cum we are gonna see…

Nupur: my bro can do so…

Mayank: what…

Nupur: there is a system through which the best of designed the track completely and at night today they will upload it in there system so that it can be transferred to al the linked cars GPRS.. its networking…

Mayank: and saint can

Nupur: hack it…

He grin.. siting on table he pulled her close in his arms…

Mayank: gr8.. whole family is bad bad…. Get him,..

Nupur: at night.. she said looking at her cell… checking the track that sems to be interesting.. and he was busy playing with her hairs…

Mayank: ..he tack her hairs caressing her skin…..that I was thinking to have u.. what say..

Nupur: pushing herself out of his grip….ur not getting ur track tonite…race on the spot….with all the surprises….. bye..

He chukled and moving towards her hugged her from back..kissing her neck.. moved out with her…

…………..

Nupur: saint… need to crack there network…

Saint: sure… lets get on it…

Mayank: it isn't cheating.. he thought scraping his head..

Ben: grow up pls mackz….

Nupur: plsss…

Mayank: I really want to.. ur just not giving ur consent…he said so innocently and pouted.. and received a dead glare from her….

Saint was busy cracking the track, and mayank was irritating nupur, or rather seducing her… moving his fingers on her back..he was actually making her lost her sences… she griped his finger and turned them harshly

Mayank: ouch… he shriek and saint and ben looked at him

Ben: what happened…

Nupur: ya what happened,.

Mayank: ur sister is cruel lady I tell u..

Nupur: ya that I am … get ur hand off me… got it…

Ben and Samrat chuckled.. knowing them a lot…

Saint: hey guys down… and what kinda track it is…

Nupur and mayank went to him ….

Mayank: holy..***…. Which way we hve to see this…its this way or that way… he said Turing his head left n right….

Nupur: phew… sand with so many hurdles …we will have fun…

Ben: speed is the most difficult think to maintain… u have to mackz..

Nupur: wait a min…saint zoom in…

Samrat: sure…

Mayank: what..

Nupur: ur seeing the cross at the lights all around…. Its in nite… without any extra light of the area..so the only way u can view the track is

Mayank: the cars light… Gosh

Benji: its dam tricky…. And difficult to.. there are so many turns and mostly the hurdles are just after the turn..

Nupur: plus they haven't still told wht kinda hurdles

Mayank: n only cars light mean.. u r gonna view them, just when they will appear…

Nupur: will be need extra lights on head…. Its in nite..without any other supportive lights..we definitely need one that can spot distance….

Samrat: and u know wht… its isn't locked yet…

Mayank: means

Samrat: they can still modify it…

Mayank: freak…get on it we have pretty few hrs….we have work

………….

The whole night they modified the car and slept afterwards to get there brain in high alert position…

..

I know its short and bit boring… with the race it was getting tooo long .. so next will be quick .. with the race…

Pardon errors

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
well written
P.S...Fiza ji where is update of Mohabbat yun
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes...dis was a short update...
bt i loved it to d coreee...😍
Well...dis MayUr r really differnt n so der romance too...😆🤣
bt i loved dis MayUr a lottt...😳
wow...damn Exciting race...😎
now m waiting Eagerly for d race part...😳
loving it to d coreee...
update soon...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗



ps: me too Agree wid Mari SIS whr is our "MY" update!!!!!!😳
i was Actually hoping to get an update of dat Toni8...

😔
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago

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