Gulsar 'WEDDING NIGHT...';) Part2 updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello frnzšŸ¤—,so as we all know tht our Gulaal's CV didnt show such romantic chappi that we all want😭.Yeh concept Ekta ka nahin tha na islie😔,bt no worries ekta mayya se kuch to sikha hi haišŸ˜›,or wahi aaj paish kar rahi hunšŸ˜‰..srush ki post read karne ke baad control hi nahi hua😳..or chalaya apna kut** dimaghšŸ˜† k yahan gulaal ki ending nahi honi chahie thi,so i add more😊..so plz do read nd dont forget to tell weither u like it or not😃...

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Love was in air. . .Most handsome Bride Groom of universe was sitting between yogesh nd kunal,who was showering their stupid tips on him.Wt to do nd wt to not.Nd He was simply nodding on every tip.Atlast he load sm courage nd asked in nervous tone "Ab mein jaun,agr wo so gai to kisi tip ka koi fayda nahi hoga na..He passed fake smile"
kunal:han han kiun nahi, ja,or thank you wank you mt bolna mujhe,ab tune or gulaal ne mere or tali ke lie itna kia hai to kuch tips for lovely SR daina to mera farz tha na.
He grinned in excitment nd was about to go, when 7th time kunal made him sit again by pushing his arm down, while kesar became frustrated bt he again listened quitely."or sun,ziada tarifein mat krna."yogesh continued "han or jate hi mun dikhai mat dena,thora bhav khana,vrna sari zindagi biwian nakhre dikhati hein"
Rewa nd Talli who were listening the whole conversation from behind now felt pitty for kesar nd atlast cm as an angels to save him from their devilish tips.
R:kya?Kya kaha?
Yogesh jumpd:kuch,kuch nahi.Meine kya kaha.
T:kiun bitha rakha hai kesar ko,kya patti parhai ja rahi hai?
Kesar looked at them wd full of hope in hz eyes.
Ku:nahin kuch nahi,bs ye khud hi nahi ja raha.Hum to kb se ise jane ke lie keh rahe hein.
Y:han han hum to kbse keh rahe hein,shayad thora nervous hai.
Kesar mouth opend wide "kya kunal, yogesh bha,mujhe to itna lecture de rahe they or khud ki biwion ko dekh ke tayen,tayen phis!"
This time he stood up nd gv flying kisses to hz angels before leaving, for freeing him from their torture,whch was continue for more than an hour.Atlast he reached hz destination,only a door between him nd his most beautiful bride.He put out hz warmala,corect hr red shervani and run hz fingers in hz hairs for smoothing them.He cleared his throat nd was abt to open the door bt his angel became devil,nd came between door nd him,spreading hr hand.
Rewa in teasing tone:andar jana hai?
Kesar noded yes in confusion..
R:abhi?
K:han.
R:kiun?
K:ab ye bhi tujhe mei btaun rewa?
Rewa laughed,"acha theek hai ja,bt pehle mera naig"
k:naig?Kya chahie?
R:"ab ye bhi tujhe mein btaun kesar?"
Kesar took out 100 rupees note nd kept on hr hand,chal ab ja.
Rewa shocked:u idiot,yeh kia hai?
K:rewa plz abhi is se kaam chala le,pakka baad mein jitne mange gi,utne dunga.
R:nahin,i want now.De warna..
K:warna kya?
R:Bhabi se shikayat kar dungi...She warned him.
K:dheere bol,he took out hz wallet nd kept on hr hand.
Rewa grinned "thank u"
k:utha le fayda,tujhe to mein baad mei btaunga.
R:acha bas bas,ziada atitude mat dikha.Warna bhabi se keh dungi, she laughed nd winked at talli,who was standing behind him.
K:acha to tum dono ne islie mujhe yogesh bha or kunal se bachwaya..
T:han to,ab ja,gulaal so gai to humein blame mt krna.They both laughed again nd ran.
Here gulaal's heart was beating fast,as she could easily listen to the whole conversation.Nd was waitng for his coming.He pressed the door's handle down and entered in the room.
to be continue...šŸ˜‰


kya???want to know more???😲
ermm ok..bt pehle do cmnt nd tell me kaisi lagi..picture abhi baki hai mere dost😊...
Hit like nd Do comments to let me know weithr u want me continue or not???šŸ˜



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rsk16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really loved it n plz do continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

really loved it n plz do continue.


thanx dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AngelšŸ¤—,

New os... wow....

do continue yaar..

want sum passnte, romantic scenesšŸ˜‰šŸ˜›





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Posted: 13 years ago
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šŸ‘Gud one but i think CVs would have gone with two year leap and should have directly shown their son. Reason? It would have looked odd to show such scenes between them. But any ways its a good try. I am posting comment about your write up for the first time although I have read all your write ups and enjoyed each one of them. I am waiting for the next episode.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice os update.loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What happened Ayu ???? šŸ˜”
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyalibose4u

What happened Ayu ???? šŸ˜”


nothing yar,bt what happened to u??why u upset??

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