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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi😊 imback but with a new story , i just had the idea and i thought i should share it , i hope you guys like it 😊
rashi was strolling down the room restlessly ,she didnt know what to do , just then gopi came into her room ,she closed the door and, sat next to her " rashiben , what did anithaben say to you" rashi looked at her , feeling more guilty and depressed than ever , she remembered her conversation with anitha that afternoon ,
*FLASHBACK*
gopi told rashi all about anitha and she decided to go and talk to her , she was about to knock when she saw anitha looking at a picture of aham , rashi stopped and decided to see what she was doing , " aham , you dont know how much i missed you , after all these years , i thought we'll never meet , but look , here i am in your house , so close to you , i know aham , how much you love , and how much you hate gopi , i know , she was just a compromise , but now you dont have to make any compromises at all , because im back , and very soon im going to be the new Mrs. Anitha Aham Modi
after i get rid of the gopi and throw her out of this house and your life" she finished and kissed ahams picture and started to laugh like a maniac , rashi stood there stunned by her actions , how could she after all gopi had done for her , rashi barged into the room and snatched the picture out of her hand , " what the hell anitha !!!! how could you " " rashi , tum?" she looked at rashi bewildered, " haan mein , how could you , after all gopi has done for you , you do this to her , try to snatch away her happiness her love, her life from her , " " snatch ? no rashi , it was gopi who snatched , she snatched away MY LOVE , MY LIFE , MY AHAM , and now i am just taking what was mine all the time ," " no it wasnt , aham jiju never was never yours ,he just liked you once but he always belonged to gopi and thats why he got married to her" " married?" she scoffed ," that was never a marriage , it was always a compromise , a compulsion , gopi is not worth aham , shes a bloody orphan , a dumb cow and an illter-" before anitha could finish , rashis threw her hand across her cheek , leaving it all red , anitha turned to look at her , she was fuming with anger , " SHUT UP!!!!! " " how dare you?" " oh no , how dare YOU , you will never EVER be mrs. anitha aham modi , because jiju already has a mrs , and that is gopi , she is and she'll always will be , no matter how hard you try or plan against her , they have the strongest bond and relation , a husband and wife's relation , that can never break , but you will never understand that , i just cant believe that i sympathised ou but no i felt bad because i thought that you were a helpless , alone girl , whos life was ruined just because of m-" rashi realized what she said and stopped herself before she could say anything else , anitha stared at her ,silence captured the room and made it still and as quiet as ever
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the silence was soon cut by anithas voice , ," dont be surprised i know everything" rashi was stunned ," yes rashi and you know what im going to do next , tell all of this family about your "kalakaari" " " no..." " why not , after all it was you who broke my marriage , you must be surprised that how i found out , oh let me remind you , see rashi , every marriage no matter how it is always has a marriage video that captures everythng and turns then into memories , in your case your destruction ," anitha gave her cocky smirk , rashi didnt know what to do , she would be ruined again if anitha told anyone , she finally gained the love the trust that she always yearned for , but now it was going to destroyed by her single mistake , " please don't" rashi begged , tears streaming down her face , " tell me why not rashi? " rashi couldnt say anything she didnt know what to say " i'll tell you what? 'i'll forget everything if you just do one task for me " " what task" rashi asked , she had no choice but to go with what anitha said or else... "reunite me with aham and seperate gopi away from this family and aham , " " what!!!!" rashi was shocked how could she do this , no she couldnt ruin her sisters liife to save hers no , " no i wont" " suit yourself , i'll just go downstairs and expose you to your beloved husband , your innocent sister and famly " anitha was about to leave when rashi stopped , " can you give me some time to think" anitha sighed " ugh fine , 24 hours , no less , think fast or else... you know ... now go " and with that rashi left anithas room her mind filled with thoughts , she had mixed feeling inside her but mostly negative , she couldnt do this , what would be the difference between her and anitha , she just slapped anitha , but it would have been better f someone slapped her , she felt awful for what she did but she had one option , and that was tell the truth herself so atleast shed feel less guilty , but in both ways she'd be ruined , but gopis life would be saved , but anitha would still stay in stay in MB , each of her thoughts was fighting with eachother , but not more than her mind and heart , she didnt have a clue what to do next , she sat on her in her , tears rolling down her cheek , she looked at the picture of her and jigar and hugged it to her chest crying " im sorry jigarji , im so sorry!!" she spoke , as her eyes fell on another photo that was of the whole family including gopi , " im sorry gopi , " she whispered and layed down on her bed still hugging the photo


tell me what you think and if i should continue , plzz!!!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i know im being impatient but plzz feel free to comment 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aish3003

Interesting!!


Very Interesting!!




thank you!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was an interesting start and Rashi is in a dilema!! loved it! continue soon!
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I guess this his how the cv s will go with the story:-) pl continue. Interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice story! 😊 Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting start 😉. Please do continue...
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interesting twist 2 story.plz do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi 😊
thank you so much for all the comments , and likes
heres the next part 😊
FLASHBACK
just then rashis phone started ringing , she picked and saw that it was jigar , " hello?" " hello my dear wife , you finally got time , to pick up my call" " jigarji , its nothing like that ...i was ... busy " jigar could sense there was something wrong "rashi are you okay" " yes why" " no your voice" " nahi , its nothing , so why did you call" " kyun , do i need a reason to call my wife" rashi could feel his smile at the other side and a smile automatically spread across her face , " nahi"

" arreh wah , i must be dreaming , rashi modi didnt talk back to me , wow , rashi , gopi bhabhi has influenced you , very good" he teased , but the thought of gopi brought tears ino rashis eyes again , " haan , well she is my sister" " haan theres no doubt in that " rashi sobbed , " rashi? are you okay " rashis could hear his concern in his voice , her husband cared so much about her , if he found out the truth he'd be shattered , no she couldnt let this happen , she couldnt , not again " yeah im fine" " acha so now your lying to me" " nahi jigarji , it nothing like that , i just , i ... have to go , kakijis calling me , bye " and with that she disconnected her phone , and broke into tears , " im sorry jigarji , " she sobbed

soon after , rashi heard kokilas voice , she was calling her name , rashi fixed herself and ran down , " ji kakiji " rashi was hit by kokilas thousand taunts " rashi what is this, even gopi vahu is not at home today , and you are in your room resting and talking to your mother " now that was a false accusation , rashi hadnt talked to her mother since ages , mabe that was a reason why rashi had become so positive , " now go and help meethi in kitchen , if you are done , resting " kokila ordered , rashi left and started to vent out her anger for anitha on the dishes she was washing , but she had to stop eventually , when kokila shouted at her for creating such a rackus , rashi was cooking when anitha came to her and reminded her about the task , rashi got more tensed than ever , she started feeling sick and told kokila about it , surprisingly , kokila let her go , up in her room , rashi started to think of ways to get out of that horrible situation when gopi came to her
REALITY
"rashiben , rashiben , rashiben kya hua ,what did anithaben say ,tell me na ?*gopi asked rashi , impatiently , well you couldnt blame her , there was a woman living in her house who wanted , to marry her husband and throw her out of the house ,she needed to find out what she was plotting , rashi thought that gopi could be the only person in the world who would understand her and decided to tell her everything , " gopi , tu meri best sister hai na " gopi gave her a confused look , " yes rashiben , why do you ask that? " " you'll always be there with me na ,no matter what i do" gopi got worried ,

" rashiben what happened , is it related to anithaben" i was about to answer when i realized something , if i tell gopi everything she would probably agree and leave the house , shes gopi , she'll always want other people to be happy than herself , she'd do anything for them , even a stranger or an enemy like anitha , then rashi is her OWN sister , she'd even give up her life for her , no she couldnt do it , " gopi woh ,, listen forget what i said and what that witch anitha said , you remember , jiju is yours , hes your husband , he loves you and only you , you need to speak up for yourself , stand up for yourself , dont give everything up no matter who it is ,...

.dekh kakiji and i will be there for you but , you need to fight your battles yourself ,okay , its not that we dont want to be with you or anything okay , iits just that , its between you , jiju and anitha , a forth person can only help not replace you and do all of the things you should do , gopi this is why anithas here today , this habbit of yours to put people before you needs to stop , or else one day , by putting so many people infront , you might get lost in the crowd , and by this you might lose jiju forever , and it wont be anyone elses mistake , but only yours , because hes your husband , gopi im telling dont give away everything so easily , maybe you can give up other small *things* but jiju is a person and most importantly your husband , he is YOURS and only yours, you cant give him away , do you understand what im saying" rashi explained to gopi , gopi listened to her very carefully and tried to disolve each and every word of rashi in her brain , " i will rashiben , thank you , you know your the best sister in the world" gopi hugged rashi ,puting her in the biggest dilemma , rashi hugged back , because she also needed support , and courage and motivation from her apne, " no gopi , you are " gopi pulled back and smiled brightly at her , their sisterly bond was interupted by a familiar voice ,

" arre wah dono behne ek saath , kya baath hai " rashi and gopi looked up to find jigar standing at the door , arms folded s, miling devarj aap ? that means ahamji is home too na?" " wow bhabhi ,it looks like someone missed their husband very much " jigar teased , rashi smiled at gopi , gopi blushed " jigarji stop teasing my sister , gopi tu jaa before someone else barges in there and does your work okay" rashi told gopi , giving signals about anitha , gopi understood and decided to leave ,jigar didnt have a clue of what that was all about " oh okay rashiben , i'll leave , jai sri krishna" " okay "rashi said , " jai sri krishna babhi " and then gopi hurriedly left , what she didnt notice was that someone was listening to their conversation the whole time

plz like , comment and tell me what you think 😊

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Intresting story loved the Update!

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