Originally posted by: ..Ashi_KaJen..
I cant believe u actually targetted me for not edittng my reserves :O
Im pathetically busy Afiaaa! Hmmphhh I iz Gussa with Juuu
Badda Waalaa..Jaa Katti!
and im not edittng but qouting the res. since my phone is acting gay with edittng the comments. dont mind..tere hi comments zyada ho rahe hai :P
Okay So like always I loved the part...
from them meeting in the Cafe to the walk..the confession ..the dropping off to home..
especially the window scene was really cute :)
just a lil suggestion...
Just slow down the pace of the story a bit or make the scenes more descriptive so the pace of the story will be balanced.
like in the first part itself Riddhima first dislked Armaan and they bickered. then the show down in class and then he asks her for a walk and she surprisingly agrees and whatever happened after that..u getting the point?
just make the scenes more descriptive of their feelings and whats going on in their minds..give more reasoning for the acttons and reactions.
the plot will look much more relatable.
sorry if that was a lil harsh. bt since ur putting so much into this ff so i thought of suggesting u this to make it even more better
take care :)
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