FF Shades of love-Renewing & Newborn

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy kriyaansh friends...

So meow(snigdha) & i r here wid a new FF in our favourite coupl Kriyaansh


& a new cuopl which all of u wil surely lyk 2 enjoy ShiTa...


D idea of dis FF goes to dilkriyarey who gave us d promo..
promo-tanni and shivam entry ,shivam revealing the truth of kriya and kriya back in st. louis.
continue guys...😊

So snighs thot of continuing it & pm'd me to join..

its my 1st work wid sum1 in d forum so i m enjoying a lot & snighs 2 enjoying
hope we ll make u all also enjoy 2 much...

So friends do hit lyk button if u wanna us to continue & u 2 get pm's of d updates so dat we can make pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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reservd 4 index

hey guys koi mujhe shivam ki pic ki koi link bhejo..
i hav searchd a lot 1 bhi shivam ki pic nahi mili..
Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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harsha and shings i rezd it a;lready and want u both to cntinue it soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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we will love read the new by two tallented writers
lookin forward to it
please continue and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res 4 pm list if we make..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter 1

Rey was in d rehearsal hall in d early morning busy doing some steps.Kriya who listens to d music, taps her feet slightly to d rhythm n starts walking towards it.She was mesmerised by him n keeps looking at him thru d door
.Taani who was coming for d teaching by rey was in a confused state noticing someone peeping into d rehearsal hall, she becomes angry n jealous n walks fast.As usual she was above to slip, a pair of strong arms caught her in d mid-air preventing her from d fall{LLHH spell new bg music}.

It was shivam.

LLHH going on in between ShiTa .

kria on d othrside cudnot control hr feet as d music was forcing hr 2 dance lyk a swan..She tried 2 stop hrslf, bt d passion of dance dominatd hr mind , she strtd dancing & joined Rey,
Kriyaansh dance lost in each othr & dier biggest passion dance .Dey 4got d entire world, d surrounding , d incidences took place in past betwn dem remebrd only 2 thigs-1st Dance 2nd.Kriyansh unconditional luv...

It was d dance of their hearts, though they're bodies werent patched up together, deir steps moved accordingly to d other.Eyes filled wid d passion for dance n love.It was a deadly combination, d tune changed from a simple to a romantic one.He pulled her to him.Her left hand on his shoulder n her right hand circling him.

Rey & kria loked up in each othr's eye, dier eyes reflect not only luv 2day bt d earnest passion 4 each othr, d desire 2 dance & 2 b wid each othr , it had pain, anger ,trust , betrayal,truth, lie evrything combined all d emotions which was circling in dier heart & soul 4 d days dey had been apartd 4m each othr.


d situation was lyk dis jst rey's eyes were not blindfolded dey were wide open interlokes wid kria's eyes.

Rey liftd kria up abov( a symbol of lifting up kria away 4m all d pains & suffering she has to bear dese many days) & den brught hr down wid hr body leaning over his body (a symbol of keeping kria close 2 him away 4m all dangers)& hr hands circling his neck(a symbol of a complete trust ovr rey).

They danced like there was no 2morrow.He held her by d waist more closer with her hands on his chest n she did a semi-circle movement bending her upper part of d body n came to d starting position.His hand circled her waist completely while d other hand moved on to her face touching d forehead to brush d hair back to its place.They were lost in their deep blue eyes.

Taani was still in d same scene.

Taani in shivam's arms , shivam drooling at hr wid 1st true luv's passion in his eyes.
BG-Mera pehla-2 pyar hai.. wooo ooo..

Taani closes hr eyes & breaks d eye lok.
hr bubbl cums telling hr-Taani ye tu kya kr rahi h , yu yaha h aur wahan rey tere prince chrming kisi aur ladki ke sath' no no taani u cant let dis happen jst rush & go 2 rey.
Buubl thots end.

Ta:plzz hlp me 2 stand.

Shivam stil loking hr.

Ta:O hello , r u lost ?? Maine kaha hlp me 2 stand.

Shivam hlps hr stand erect.

Taani strts rushing 2 rehrsal hall stops in midway turns around wid hr hairs shifting & hitting gently ovr hr face, says: mai toh apko thanx kehna hi bhul gayi, thanx 4 preventing me 4m falling.

Shivam's heart starts feeling a special joy which he has nevr felt till now on seeing any gal'


Taani leaves to d rehearsal taani.She was shocked to see rey holding kriya.Her eyes moistened a bit.(entry of bubble taani)

BT-Taani kyun ro rahi ho.Rey sirf aur sirf apka hain.Shaayad uss ladki ko bhi dance seekha raha hain.Uss jagah sirf tumhari hain taani.Uss ladki ko wahaan se hatadho.

Taani nods her head n walks upto dem.Kriyaansh were quite busy in their looks spell.They dint notice d third person's eye.
Taani waits 4 sumtym so dat KR wil b apartd, bt KR lost in dier own world...
Taani's patience ends, she thinks: kya karu jisse mai rey ko isse alag kar sakun??

Taani(circling around KR): Rey!! rey!! .
she tilts hr head to luk rey & waves hr hands b4 both of dier faces bt no reslts KR still lost ..

Finally Taani increses d volume of music system 2 d fullest & now she succeds.
KR eyelock breaks. kria steps backward.

Taani:rey aapne toh mujhe dance sikhane ke liye yaha bulaya tha toh fir ye kaun hai??

Rey:Taani wo ye ..
b4 he cud cumplete she interrupts.

Taani:Achha meri tarah koi nayee student hai!! ye bhi aapse dance sikhna chahti hai??

she continues(luking 2 kria): apko pata hai rey bahut achhe dancr hai , St.Loius ke bst male dancr aur dancer hi nahi ye bahut achhe insaan bhi hai aur rey mujhe team weakling ki 6th dancr banne ke liye train bhi kar rahe hai.

kria:Oh toh team Weakling ko nayi dancer mil gayi aur use rey train kar rahe hai..
Taani:Mein hun Taani aur aap??

Kriya:Kriya..

Taani:Toh rey practise shuru kare..

No reply from Rey, rey was busy glaring at Kriya.

Taani:Rey..kya wo bhi humare sath practise karte hain.

Rey was busy not Kriya.She quickly snaps out d question.

Kriya:Nahi mein jaa rahi hun.Tum dono kar sakte hain.

Kriya leaves him n was going but stops in middle when rey calls her.She turns around questioningly.

Rey:Taani ko aaj se nahi ab se dance tum sikha rahi ho..

Kriya was all furious now.Why was he trying to involve her??Y cant he train her as he used to??.She maintained some peace n gave d answer.

Kriya:Mein Kyun??

Rey:Kyun Ki woh weaklings team ka sixth dancer hain.Jab tum aayi toh mujhe sikhane ka zaroorat bhi nahi hota.
Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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di i loved 1 st chapter to core .
please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing one.
Its nice to see kria back and Kriyaansh so close.

do continue soon and add me to pm list.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice promo and love chapter 1...
please continue soon and add me to your pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved the first chapter plz plz pm me

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