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Posted: 13 years ago
GEET KO DEKH KAR SAB USKE DIWANE HO GAYE
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PART 10



Hi friends here is the next update...in this update i m introducing some new characters as geet new friends...

Maan – YE GEET HAIN...

All – whattt

All stand shocking and look at maan...

Sam – ye geet hain???????????

Maan nodded in yes cutely...

Pinki - ye tumhari angel hain????????

Maan blush hearing my angel...

All smile seeing maan blush and karan dramatically...


Karan – are yaar mere sath hi aisa kyu hota hain jo ladki dekho maan ki deewani hoti hain aur aaj ek ladki mili jo maan ko drool nahi kar rahi thi to wo geet nikli...

Maan slap him on his head and say nautanki..

Adi – maan agar geet yaha hain to tum dono sath kyu nahi ho don't tell me ki tum dono ne abhi bhi baat nahi ki...

Maan cutely nodded in yes yes with baby face..

Maan –(with baby face) mein kya karo wo mujhse baat hi nahi karti... ab dekho mujhse help bhi nahi legi...

Sam – but maan u know na ye college uske liye new hain aur...

Maan cut her

Maan – i know sam that's why i need a favour from u all...

Karan – ya tell us dude what u wants???????

Maan – wo geet mujhse to baat karegi nahi plz sam pinki plz tum dono jaona uski help k liye...

Pinki – maan tum geet se itna pyar kaise kar lete ho ki use dur rehkar bhi humesha uska khayal rakte ho...

Maan – geet mein to maan ki jaan basti hain aur aapni jaan ka khayal to har koi rakta hain ...

Sam - waise maan ye to kehna padega ki she is very beautiful tabhi to humare Mr.MSK ko uske alawa koi aur najar nahi aata...

Maan – ok ab bahut hua ab tum aur pinki jao aur uski help karo...

Sam and pinki went to geet ... And rest were watching them from far..


Geet is quite nervous as whole college is looking at her in nervousness she bump in to a girl say

Geet – oochhh im sorry mera dhayan nahi tha..

Girl – its ok , i m sorry too... waise hi i m meera... MBA last year student , u looks like new students i didn't see u before here..

Geet – hi i m geet handa yaa i m new admission in MBA last year... wo today is my first day... so

Meera – it's ok geet come i will help u... in mean time sam and pinki reach their...

Sam – hi meera how are you??????????

Meera – o hi sam, i m fine. How are u and hi pinki??????????

Pinki – we are fine meera...

Meera – o sam she is geet new admission in our class

Sam – hi geet!!!!!!!!!

Pinki – hi geet!!!!!!!!!!

Meera – (to geet) geet sam and pinki se friendship karlo ye humere

college ki Mr.Hot ki best friends hain???????

Geet (innocently)- Mr.hot??????????????? sam and pinki give her a weak smile pray for maan and mumered maan ab to tum gaye geet se tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta...

Meera – hann Mr.MAAN SINGH KHURAN he is so hot yarr isliye mr.hot...

Geet – whattt she get shock of her life and mumered maan what the hell is going on mr.hot ghar par batati hu mr.hot ko...

Sam – (try to save maan from our sherni) wo aisa kuch nahi hain meera...

Meera – sam tum to aisa hi kahogi na tumhara friend hain ye to pura college janta hain ki saari ladkiya us par drool karti hain...

Geet mumered drool wo bhi saare college ki ladkiya... she become hell angry now she funning in anger and look to maan's direction... maan looks her and gulp hard mumered ab isse kya hua itne gusse mein kyu hain... babaji bacha lena... lag raha hain koi storm aane wala hain...

Pinki – but meera tum janti ho na maan kisi ko nahi dekhta wo to...

Meera cut her and – hann yaar ye to pura college janta hain ki maan kisi ladki se pagalo ki tarah pyar karta hain , lucky girl...

Geet get another shock whole college knows their love story all her anger vanish in friction of seconds and love and respect take place... maan looks her and confuse with so many changes of emotions in her face...

Sam – hann meera lucky girl and looks geet...

Meera get call and excuse herself... Leaving sam , pinki and geet..

Sam – geet tum bahut khubsurat ho...

Geet – thanks sam..

Pinki – ab humein pata chal kyu maan tumhe deewano ki tarah pyar karta hain... geet again shock and looks both...

Sam –ok samjh nahi aaya , mein batati hu maan ne humein bheja hain tumhari help k liye so let's be friends...

Geet – thanks sam wo i .. we .. u know humne...

Pinki – hann geet hum sab jante hain tum dono ki silent love story hain... and giggle.. geet blush hear this..

Geet – ok friends...

Dev adi and karan too come there and introduce them...

Dev – hi geet i m dev!!!!!!!!!!!

Adi – i m aditiya but u can call me adi...

Karan – and i m karan...

Geet greet to all...

Karan – waise geet now we are friends tumhe mujhe maan se protect karna hoga abhi bhi thappad kha ke aaraha hu use...

Geet (innocently) – thapad kyu?????????

All giggle while karan gave them an angry glare...

Karan – wo bas aise hi... chalo tumhara admission procedure complete karate hain...

All leave for college office and maan stand and see their retairing figures...

After procedure geet leave for home as her dad send her driver because maan has his class...

Geet send msg maan that she is leaving(blank msg)...

As maan is in his class he couldn't reply...

In Khurana Mansion

All elders are except dad and papaji in living room

Dadu – harjeet ab humein maan aur geet ki sagai karwa deni chaiye kya bolta hain tu????????????

Darji – jaisa tu tik samjhe waise bhi geet to maan ki hi hain ...

Dadi – to tik hain hum pandit ko bolte hain aur koi aachsi date niklwate hain...

Beeji – ye aacha rahega par pandit kyu agle mahine dono ka birthday hain kyu na usi din sagai kar de dono ki...

Both mom and mummyji are on cloud 9 after listening this...

Dadu – ok to agle mahine dono ki sagai pakki...par koi un dono ko nahi batayega ye unke dono k liye surprise hoga...

All agreed dadu call sanjay and raj in office both are more then happy as their wish going to complete...

geet reach khurana mansion goes to dadi and sit with her...

dadi caressing her hair – geet bte kaisa tha aapka din admission ho gaya??????????

Geet – ji dadi sab kuch ho gaya...

Mummyji – chal puttar aaj ja lunch karle..

Geet – ok

After lunch she went to her room...


Next – maaneet together 😉


Thanks for like and comments..🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
wt 2 say...m nt gettng words to cmnt...😊
it was fab...superb...awesome...super duper hit...😊
Plzz Plzz continue soon...wtng eagerly for next part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update
abi tak no talking between maaneet
kya hoga babaji
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear..
loved the college part..nice..
wow elders are thinking about their engagement...
continue soon dear...
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN TO BAL BAL BACH GAYA, NAHI TO MEER KE KARAN PIT HI JATA GEET SE
MAAN HAS GOT SOME GREAT FRIENDS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope to see soon geet talking with maan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update n cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hot maan..geet angry on him
maans love whole college knows..
poor maan confused with expressions of geet
super part dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
lovely...
hai kitna cute hai yeh dono...
cont soon dear...

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