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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

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wow just loved it...
poor mr.lover.. bechara kya haal ho gaya..
baat maaneet nahi kar rahe hai kaan uske pak rahe hai...
arey jaldi se maaneet ki baat karao na..
i can't wait..pls...
haaye thier silent talks... and all pulling maan legs..then teasing..
awww i just loved it...
precap is nice...

pls continue soon...



maaneets talk not so soon u have to wait for that...
i just love their silent talk😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby3



maaneets talk not so soon u have to wait for that...
i just love their silent talk😆😆

ok ok dear u r the writer..so mujhe to wait karna hi padega na...
chalo mai wait kar lungi but their silent talks are also interesting...

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Posted: 13 years ago

dont be upset dear... their silence going to be very romantic i promise that..😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
Awesooommmeee...😊
Fantastic...😊
Superb...😊
Marvellous...😊

Luvd it very much...😊
Plzzz continue soon n PM me wenever u update next tym...😊😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved ur ff dear
its beautiful...
plzz pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 9



Hi friend here u go next update... enjoy and do hit like button and do comments it means to me alot...


Maan waited for geet in car geet come down and say bye to everyone and went to the car... on the way she thinks...

Geet (st) - geet puttar aaj to tu bura phasi ye maan to tujhse baat karwa k rahega dekha nahi jab papaji ne college sath jaane k liye bola to kaise smile kar rahe the... kya babaji mein aapki fav bachi huna fir aap kyu humesha us dust danav ka sath dethe ho...

Geet get in car in back seat... she didn't notice maan on driver seat , maan get furious to see this... but geet is so lost in her cruising , to take her back to reality

Maan - Miss chatter box agar aapki aapke babaji se discussion puri ho gayi ho to aage aakar betho mein koi tumhara driver nahi hu...

Geet open her mouth to say something but suddenly remember that she will not talk with him she is angry on him... geet pout her lips and come out from car and sit in front seat , maan start the car... while driving maan stealing glance on geet but geet is watching out of window... maan stop car at a deserted place and turn to geet , geet look toward him when he take her palm softy in his palm and cares it softy looking directly in her eyes... geet lost herself in his eyes...

Maan - geetu mein jaanta hut um mujhse bahut naraj ho par kab tak mujhe aur aapne aapko aise saja deti rahogi , kyu aapne aapko itna tadapa rahi ho jab tum janti ho ki mein tumse baat karne k liye bechain ho aura b to tum har time meri aankho k samane hi rahogi.. plz geetu mujhe maaf kar do . agar maaf nahi kar sakti to koi aur saja dedo but plz mujhse baat karona...

Geet is so lost in his eyes and voice that forget that she is angry with him and when she open her mouth to say something...

Suddenly maan's phone start ringing and they both come back to reality... geet turn to other direction and maan frustrating receive call without seeing it caller id...

Maan - (scream) who's that???????? (me god bless u maan ab tumhari khair nahi hehehehehe)

Other side his dad on line...

Dad - maan why ur screaming its me didn't u see my name on display...

Maan - wo dad...i ..wo..mein...

Dad - now ur stuttering maan tell me what happen?????

Maan - (st) o god aisa mere sath hi kyu hota hain babaji this is not fair...

Dad- maan r u there??????????

Maan - yaa dad wo i m sorry wo credit card wale call kar rahe the bas isliye nothing eles aap batayiye aapne kyu call kiya??????

Dad- wo noida site k bare kuch kaam tha kal tum kuch files sign karna bhool gaye mein saasha ko bhej deta hu college tum sign kar dena ok... waise tum dono college pahuch gaye na..

Maan - (st) agar bola nahi pahuch to mujhe bahut tease karenge wo bhi sabke samane.. no i cant afford it...

Maan - hann dad bas pahuch hi rahe hain and maan start the car and leave for college...

Geet all the while looking toward him , mutely giggling seeing his changing expression...

After reaching college geet try to come out but maan hold her wrist and pull her to him and say

Maan - aaj to bach gayi but mein bhi MSK hu mein tumhe mujhse baat karne par majboor kar dunga... and he peak on his forehead.. he try to come close geet's cheek but geet is too fast she push him and run from their giggling... maan also come to college after signing the papers and go to his friends he looks very happy...

Dev - kya baat hain maan aaj to tum bade khush lag rahe ho????????

Adi - hann dev dekho to jara Mr.MSK is smiling wo bhi bina matlab..

Maan - guys stop it yaar...

Pinki - maan tum to bol rahe the geet bhi isi college mein admission legi fir aayi nahi wo????????

Sam - hann maan hum bhi to dekhe kaisi dekhti hain wo angel jisne MSK ko aapna deewana banaya hua hain..

Maan - guys i need a favour from u all...

Karan - kya maan hum friends hain na to favour kaisa tu bol to sahi tere liye to jaan bhi hajir hain...

Suddenly whole college went silent and everyone only seeing in one direction , maan and gang also turn to their to see what happen suddenly all were seeing a girl who isn't looking less then an angel ... karan eyes pop out and he say

Karan -what beauty man isko to pakka mein pata ke rahunga...

Maan get a minor heart attack after listen to karan... karan is telling about patofying geet in front of maan... maan get frustrated and say

Maan - guys are u listening to me aur not??????????

But all are busy drooling to geet boys because of beauty and girls because all are jealous from her...

Maan (scream near karan's ears)- karannn

All come back to reality,

Karan - what maan tum to kisi ladki ko dekhte nahi ho mujhe to dekhne do..

Maan - (grinned his teeth) tum meinse koi use nahi dekhega samjhe aur specially karan u use dur rehna samjhe..

All were shock on maan authority... and look's maan is he alien..

Dev - maan kya hua tum bhi us beauty ko dekh kar geet ko bhol gaye kya????????

That's it maan lost all his control on his anger and blust


Maan - WO GEET HAIN...

All - whattt

Next - ????????????


I know this is small part i really held up in office work🤢

Sorry friends...😒

Thanks a lot for ur comments and likes..😊

Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
M FIRST
awesome dear
loved it
continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...
loved it...
ohoo geet kabhi kabhi maan ko bhi dekho... hehehe...
she is busy talking with her babaji...
oopss maan kya kiya tumne dad pe chillaya... par u managed...
karan tum tho gaya kaam se... u r drolling geet infront of maan...
continue soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 9
awesome part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part i just luv wen maan got call 4m his dad n den geet entry worth watching

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