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Posted: 13 years ago

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Maan just smiles…….. and they both lay on the bed………. Geet keeps her head on his chest and both drift to sleep………..

Morning rays make Geet wake up and find herself sleeping completely on Maan…… His one hand was on her waist……… She feels shy remembering what happen at night…….. She sees Maan sleeping peacefully………. She removes his hand and from her waist and slowly goes gets up from the bed and gives a small peck on his forehead…… and was about to move towards washroom but suddenly she felt a pull and just landed on the hard chest……….

Geet: Maan Sir……..

Maan started nuzzling at her neck from behind……..

Geet: Please jane dijiye na……

Maan: No... because this is a punishment………

Geet eyes became wide……: Punishment??? Why what I have done………..

The sweet torture was still on…… His hand was roaming around her waist……..

Maan: Your 1st mistake is that you have forgotten my name again by calling Maan Sir……… and he bite her on her shoulder

Geet (moan): Maannn

Maan: Hmm that's better and your second mistake is that you kissed me only on my forehead…..

Geet just turned herself facing Maan with a open mouth and a little shy: you were awake……..

Maan When such a beautiful girl is beside me how would you expect me to sleep and when she was giving me love……

Geet just get shy and was about to move….. Maan hold her and said: abhi punishment to baki hai……..

Geet: What punishment……..

Maan: Complete your task……..

Geet: What task???

Maan: Which you left it when I was sleeping….. Should I show you and then you will return it back to me or will you give me (looking at her lips)

Geet understood his intension and looks down and nods her head in no……

Maan: Ok then you stay in my arms for the whole day I don't mind……..

Geet: Maann we need to go…..

Maan: First comply with your punishment……

Geet (self talk): He never told me where to kiss I will give a kiss on his cheeks and run away……

Maan: What are you thinking???

Geet just lifts herself and was about to kiss him on her cheeks….. Maan suddenly faced her and she kissed it on his lips…….. She felt a shiver and immediately looked down and was wondering what happen a second back and Maan had a smirk smile on is face…… Her face was red with embarrassment and Maan felt like just eating it up…….. He could not see it more and he was about to capture her lips with his suddenly someone disturb them on the phone…….. They both came out of the trance and Geet pushed him and ran to the washroom………

Maan gave an irritated look to the phone for disturbing them…… Without looking at the caller he said it in a irritated tone…..

Maan: hello….. who is it……….

Vicky: Looks like I called at a wrong time…… Someone was very busy…..

Maan: Vicky………

Vicky: Chalo shukar hai awaj to pehchani…… warna mujhe to laga tha ki……..

Maan: Shut up Vicky…….. Why did you call???

Vicky: Yeh lo…….. don't you guys want to come home…… I don't mind but don't you think mom will be bit angry if you guys have your honeymoon before marriage……..

Maan( fake angry and shy): Vickyyy……..

Vicky: Ok ok don't show me your fake anger…… I know

Maan: Tell mom we will be there for breakfast……… and cuts the phone……

Maan looks at Geet who has just got ready and come from washroom looking as a fresh flower….. He just wants to touch her, feel her……

Geet: Kiska phone tha……..

Maan comes back from the trance: Who Vicky ka……

Geet: See I was telling you we will be late now get ready fast we will have to go…… What will they think……… What will aunty think…….. We are already so la………

Before she could speak further Maan just takes her lips with his and start nibbling and kissing it….. Geet was first shocked but later started responding to it…… The kiss turned into passionate one… They broke the kiss after some time……..

Maan (huskily said in her ears): Mom will think that her son and would be daughter in law were having good time…….. He just kissed her cheeks and goes away with a smile on his face………

Geet just kept on standing not realising what to say…. She became shy and hide her face with her palms………

They reached home but it was not easy for them especially for Geet….. Vicky and Aniee teased them to no end and to help them out even Meera had come……… Geet became so embarrassed that she did not know what to say………. And even Maan was not supporting her….. He was smiling at her………

But to her rescue Savitri devi came…….. and said

Savitri: Bus karo abhi kitna chedoge use………..

Vicky: Mom…… We are not teasing at all……..

Savitri: Ya Ya I can see that…….. By the way Geet will you be my bahu……

Geet was just shocked to hear that…………. She had tears in her eyes…… She was actually missing her family who never understood her…..

Savitri: Bolo Geet….. kya tum mere is pagle bete se shaadi karogi……

All were early waiting for the answer……

Aniee: Bolo jaldi bolo………. I want to say Bhabhi to you……..

Vicky: Bolo na yaar……

Maan was eagerly waiting for an answer………

Geet becomes shy and just nod her head……..

Savitri just hugged her and said chalo aaj mujhe dono bahue mil gayi……

Savitri: I will call a panditji and fix an engagement for both Vicky and Maan as soon as possible……..

Savitri looks at Maan: Kyu Maan…..

Maan just smiles and goes away saying he needs to go to office………

Days started passing by……… The love was completely in air. They would always be together…. Maan would not a single chance to romance with Geet in office……… and Vicky would not leave a single chance to tease them……….

All were very happy with the way life was going on………

Geet use to meet Raj in between………. Geet and Raj bonding was a very cool bonding…… They would tell everything to each other…… They use to miss Pari a lot……….Raj was going out of city due to his work……… So they both decided to meet once….. Geet wanted Maan to meet Raj as he was her good friend…… Many time she tried telling him about Raj but some thing or the other would come in between and the talk would just not happen………

Geet met Raj………

Raj: Hey Geet…… Hiii…… How are you??? And yeh kya aaj phir akeli……

Geet: sorry yaar……..

Raj: I think you don't want that we should meet…..

Geet: Shut up yaar…….. Why would I do that…..

Raj: May be you will feel that you are being left out………

Geet: Very funny……….

They had all sort of talk and enjoyed it…….. It was the time to part away…..

They hug each other……….

In the office Sasha was fuming in anger seeing Geet so near…… She cannot even say anything to her as she was very well aware that Maan would no longer listen to her and throw her out of office…… She has to be very careful while playing a card…….. Her thought process was broken when her phone rang……..

Caller: The time has come to play our card Sasha……… So be ready now……

Sasha: I have been waiting for your nod……..

Caller: go ahead……….

Sasha: Ok……..

They keep the phone………

Caller to (himself): Geet tumne mera rishta thukraya tha sab ke samne and Mr. Maan Singh Khurana you insulted me in front of everyone…….. you insulted Vikram…….. Now you both will pay for it………

In home………

Geet sees that everyone is very tensed……..

Geet: What happen???

Vicky: Geet actually we had to urgently go to London……..

Geet: baat kya hai………

Vicky: Massi is not well and Mom wants to go but the problem is what about here??? Aniee will be all alone and we cannot leave her alone……..

Geet: Don't worry I am here…… I will take care……… you go with Aunty……. And anyways Maan is also there……….

Vicky: No Geet Bro has to urgently go to Japan as there is some problem which is arose…….. and he wants you to go with him………

Geet: But he never told me……..

Vicky: He is been trying your phone but it was not reachable……..

Geet: The phone is been discharged…….. Anyways I will talk to him……

Maan just entered but was not aware about the situation……

Maan: What do you want to talk Geet……..?? and he notices Savitri devi is crying…… Why is mom crying??

Vicky tells Maan everything…. Geet goes near Maan

Geet: Maan I will not be coming to Japan with you….. Here Aniee will be all alone………

Maan understands the situation and is happy that Geet treats his family as hers….. He just nods her head………

Precap: Geet: I don't believe this…… This cannot be true……….





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Posted: 13 years ago
yeyeyee...me first...😊

Its just awesome...😊
luvd it to the core...😊
Plzzz continue soon...wil be wtng for the next part...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i was sure it was vikram
i hope nothing happens to maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
plz yeh caller nd sasha ki planning jaldi khatam karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

loved maaneet romantic moments...

i think u are going to put a twist now in the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW
LVD IT...
LVD MAANETS' RMNTC PART..
BS MELE MAANEET KO KO PRLMB MT DENA...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it loved the cute moment between geet and maan misunderstanding coming up sasha geet never told maan about raj and they will use it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it..maan going japan nd sasa nd i think caller is vikram..
Alag kiya na maaneet ko.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update dear...
Thanks for the pm..

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