Heyy MKAPians! Im absolutely in love with this show and my favourite couple KRIYA ❤️ They are just too cute!😳
Well i have been reading many OS/SS/FF lately as i have been addicted to this forum 😆, and i decided to write one myself. ( btw all of u who have written them, you guys are AWESOME! you guys have inspired me to write 👍🏼 , so thank you for that! ) i am new to all this, but i hope that you guys will like it. I am open to feedback, whether positive or negative it doesnt matter. You guys can also give me points on how to improve also- that would be a great help! 😊
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So enough of my blabbering, please do read it and tell me whether to continue or not. Hope you guys like it! 😃
Btw this is an OS of when Krishna and Pratigya meet after the long parting when Pratigya went to the haveli to save the property as a servant in disguise.
NOTE: this has no connection to the actual show and is just a fan fiction😊
The day had finally come. The day where Krishna was finally, after so long, was going to meet his Pratigya. It seemed like forever, since he had last seen her. He had missed her, missed everything about her; her smile, her sweet smell, her gentle touch. His lips curved into a smile. The thought that he was finally going to see her was enough to make his heart skip a beat. He reached the front of the house at last, to see the doors opened. He walked straight in, his heartbeat quickening. His eyes turned in all directions, searching for her. Kahan ho tum babu?
"Krishna!" He turned around to see her running towards him. He opened his arms and embraced her tightly. They stood like that for a while, locked in each other's arms. Krishna breathed into her, devouring her sweet smell. He could feel his eyes tearing up; he couldn't believe that she was there, in his arms. Pratigya already felt warm tears sliding down her cheeks, and then she broke down. "Krishna...humne tumhe bohot miss kiya'" she said, finding herself sobbing harder. "Eh Babu humka bhi tum bohot yaad aayi 'hum tumre bager ab nahi reh sakte, hum kehdete hai haan." Pratigya smiled and gave a small laugh. They both moved away, and their eyes met. And so they stood there, for what seemed like forever, lost in each other's eyes.
(Scene shift: Night time)
Krishna walked towards his room, thinking about Pratigya. Today was their first night back in the house, and he wanted to make it special. He couldn't stop smiling; reminiscing about their reunion earlier in the day. He stopped in front of their room's door, lost in thought. Aaj ki raat humre aur tumre liye bohoteespecialwa hoga. He opened the door to find Pratigya in front of the dressing table, in a yellow sari, drying her wet hair with the towel. She looked at his reflection in the mirror and gave a shy smile. He turned to close the door behind him, and then walked up to her. They stared at each other through the reflection in the mirror, the colour on Pratigya's cheeks darkening.
Krishna slowly moved her wet hair to one side; Pratigya felt her heart beat quickening. He leaned his head into the arch between her shoulders and her neck, and breathed in her sweet smell. A chill went down her spine as she felt his warm breath on her bare skin. Just as he leaned to kiss her, she pushed him back, laughing as she tried to run away. But Krishna was faster, and so he grabbed her by her arm and pulled her back into his grasp. "Krishna! Choro na! Kya kar rahe ho tum? Choro na!"she said playfully. Krishna in turn grabbed her more tightly, pulling her closer to him. "Kabo nahi chorunge tumhe Babu", and with that he began tickling her. Pratigya laughed uncontrollably, trying to break free. "Krishna bas karo!" she cried, still laughing. With that Krishna picked her up smoothly and put her onto the bed. "Ab tum kahan bach kar jaogi Babu?" he said, giving a cheeky smile. Her cheeks flushed a deeper red, as Krishna leaned his head down, their lips softly touching'
ok so thats it guys! hope you guys liked it! please do comment and let me know how i went. Thanks! 😊
