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Posted: 13 years ago
aww felt bd for him
osom 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mayank past was so painful
felt sad for him
but now nupur is with him
hope she will b able to faded away mayanks pain...
and last part was magical- really loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayeee awesomest update
i loved it loadsss.
awww mayu...
felt bad after knowing his past...
bt nupur is ri8 he is running 4m reality..
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt fiza
loved mayur moments
cont soon
thanks for the wishes & pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

it was just awesome

kiss was haye 😳
i have a question did mayank parents kick him out of his home to not to get a scholarship




thnks dear

kinda... mayank parents ditch him as he was claimed to abuse his prof.. plus was loser... was not at all any help to family...

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Posted: 13 years ago

This is kinda filer.. hope u like it….after this I will be back on the racing..


Chapter: 11

The nigh he knew she isn't going to cum back..neither its time to confront her or ask her anything..lying on his bed he was actually smiling, going back to the moment, were not only he but she kissed him with so much passion.. he was getting too much imaginative and was actually enjoying the feel.. Smilingly he drift into sleep

Morning was weird for her, and amazing for him

Mayank: good morning amigos..

Samrat: good afternoon dude… gr8 someone is in delighted mood…

Benji: I though u must be in urge to kill everyone…

Mayank: nah I am planning to love everyone…

Samrat: ahaan…so should have been with us last night …man u missed all the fun…

Benji: so right dudu…u don't imagine wht time we have…

Samrat: so hot chicks..

Benji; to much of ur type…

Mayank: really grt… gosh I missed it ..

Samrat: ya u missed it.. and that's so for a bad lonely night…

Mayank: don't imagine wht time I had …

Benji: not better than us…

Mayank: the best I can had…

Benji: ahan…how cum

Mayank: come on I mean I almost won … after like 4 months I was feeling the power of winning… ahm..bTW..were is my navigator.. I even wasn't ablt to thank her..

Samrat: donot know… I saw her cuming home in morning ..must be sleeping..

Benji: but she left the pub quite early …than wht she was doing..

Ask me wht we were doing he said in his mind with smirk..

Mayank: oh so why she didn't have fun with u all….

Samrat: she is never comfortable with all this kinda fun… neither we would have been so much in fun if she was around…

Benji: ya her glares would have killed saint.. she seems to be ur mom saint… not ur younger sister… but the girls we had very…wao..

Samrat: donot worry clear the second round and we will have more of it… right mackz

Mayank: ya right…for surely….do tell me when she wakeup… I have things to discuses…

Saying so he got up from there

It wasn't difficult difficult for her to face him, but she wasn't even liking the kinda weirdness just has surrounded them, specially her.. finding her out of the house, enjoying the beach view…he moved towards her, he was dying to see her.. somewhere back of mind repeating his acts..

Mayank: thinking about me…

Nupur: ur over estimations…

Mayank: oh really ..he stood close to her smilingly…

Nupur: listen… before u start and get over imaginative…. Let me clear u something…whtever happen last night was just a weak moment..that is it…

Mayank: crossing his arm…really…

Nupur: yes.. and I certainly donot want to repeat a mistake again…

Mayank: okay..and how many times u had those weak mistaken moments…

He went near and brushed his fingers on her arm, she shrugged his hand off….

Nupur: donot think in a night ur getting rights to know everything about me…

He came close to her grip her hand and turned it on her back..making her clasped on his chest..

Mayank: listen sweetheart… u have already given me right to know everything about u… and if u thing that was just a moment… I actually think the same.. and just beware…there are many more.. … leaning close stoping just an micrometer away from her he smile looking in her eyes,…….. more closer moments cuming up

Whispering it he left her moving out to beach…

She felt like him right there, or rather killing herself…errr he cant just beat her like this ..noway….

Mackz had a different plan to set her, what do u think he will change in love and will use more descent words and thoughts towards her…no not at all…

Make it simple and normal was his funda now.. going to much towards her, was what she has expected, so why not do something she hasn't… the unexpected attack will be better than anything…

Car needs repairing, as side was hited badly, tires were in not so good condition ..and the need NOS refilling and engine clearing to…

The sides were removed and Samrat and mayank were on it, nupur and benji… he wasn't liking it ..not getting any chance to get close to her….

Samrat: mackz.. its done almost…he was finding something need to attach it…when he saw it lying beside nupur…. ben give it to us…

Mayank: wait … I'll get it…

Smirking he went beside her, brushing himself with her, she glared at him, yet he didn't look at her, completely being normal… he made his hand stretch from her front..he get it.. just when he was right infornt of her face, he turned to her..gazing at her… she didn't have any place to move away…. She moved forward to him .. such tht she was an inch away from him and he was stunt..and took wht he was finiding… and place in his hand… looking straight in his eyes…

He moved back and went away… ans she was laughing in her mind…

Nupur: I told u have to do something new…old fashion flirting…not gonna work on me… she said in her mind…

Mayank was actually feeling his style not at all gonna work on her… what the hell….

Benji who was actually looking at all that was happening , was holding his laughter observing his expression…

Benji: hmm so what mackz is upto…

Mayank: what what…

Benji: donot belive I donot have eyes..wht u were doing in garage…

Mayank: what ever I was doing…flop…

Benji: lol… u know ur expression were waoo…a girl was laughing on ur flop plans….. man ur handling a different girl…who knows ur all flirting way too much….

Mayank: u know me…I never ever had made a girl go wao on me…girls do that…

Benji: I know…but here… tables are turned..

Mayank: that's the problem n ben… wht to do… she ran away saying it was just a mistake….huh..he mimic her and ben drop his jaw..

Bneji: what happen…. Donot tell me amigo.. u n her.. haaa

Mayank: donot get over imaginative… just a kiss.. he said annoyed

Bneji: mackz getting just a kiss….lol… ahaa…. Best of luck… ur in trouble dear… why I am feeling like ur moving towards a permanent pleasure…

Mayank: my dear amigo… ur absolutely right…

Benji: tu tell her

Mayank: what tell her..pls no cheesy idiotic things… forget it… its mackz..i 'll do it sumthing in style

…………….

Mayank: nupsi we didn't get the track details…why…

Nupur: still 3 days to go… track for the second around…u will be informed a day before the race…

Mayank: and for third..

Nupur: an hr before race….

Mayank: what…

Nupur: yes… why are u getting close…cant u just stop all this…

With evry word he was speaking he was moving a step towards and she was standing there..just not effect..atleast showing so…

Mayank: no.. I donot want to stop all this… he said brushing his finger from her hand to arm to her shoulder….

Nupur: get ur hands of me..

Mayank: donot tell me u donot get effected with it… he whispered huskily leaning more close to her…

Nupur: no I donot….. just get off…

Dipping his head in her neck… she closed her fist tightly… he didn't kissed her..but his closeness and feathering of his breath was making havoc in her… reaching her ear..he whispered..

Mayank: if that is so…ur hands are free sweetheart… u should have pushed me away… kissing her ear he went away…celebrating his a plan successfully… she was lost n controlling her breath

She looked at herself.. and hit the chair nearby… what the hell.. he was right she always have pushed him back, she even have space to move away.. but she got frozen at her place…

…….

Benji: mackz why ur not driving car…u have to …chk the car

Mayank: hmm I am thinking that so….but not in mood to go alone…

Benji: aha… shall I help…dude..

Mayank: plsss amigo…how u will…

Benji; wait n watch…..saint where is nupur…

Samrat: she was planning to go to her frnds place…probably getting ready…why..

Benji: nah nothing were planning to go on car ride… anyways.. mackz u move alnoe...okay

He whispered…

Mayank: ur helping me..

Benji: u know how to make car..

Mayank: wht a question

Benji: do u know how to make the car out of work …

Mayank: aha…. Ur genius… gota go…winking him he left

And went straight to the garage, quickly replacing the plug of the car with old one… he was done…he has to do sumthing that she cant make herself….

Moving out he himself went to his car when he saw her going towards the garage.. he heard her trying to strt the car…she open the bonnet whn heard his car..

Mayank: dressed so beautifully ur repairing ur car..

Nupur: I m nt nuts…why the hell my car is not strting… she removed the plug and put it near the metal…mackz try to strt..the car didn't showed any current….

Maynk: wht no current.. at ur car

Nupur: dam..how can be it possible..

Mayank: u need to go somewhere… I can drop u…

Nupur: she raised her eyebrows and looked back to the car…. taping her foot

Mayank: what…fine suit urself I was going for drive thought can drop u …

Nupur: really…well… no other options..drop me…

Mayank: gr8…

Nupur: where are we going,..

Mayank: to a quite place….

Nupur: wht the hell I was right u did it..

Mayank: yes nupsi I did it… need to talk..else I will get burned…

Nupur: if u didn't stop the car right now…I will burn u right here..

Mayank: ur wish dear… car stoped..and he went out so as nupur came out but he blocked her way pining her to car.. removing his hand ..

Listedn

Nupur: I wont…

Mayank: nupur pls..cant we just stop behaving like stupid idiot..sum asian ahh so touch me not couple

Nupur: who said we are couple

Mayank: okay fine don't say it… but why ur doing so… u cant run away like that

Nupur: I am not runig away ..i told u it was just dam moment….

Mayank: and I have told u that that was not a dam moment.. n if it was…wht happen that in garage and in ur house ..huh… even that was mistake

Nupur: nothing happened… stop making it so big..

Mayank: nupsi..comon u know u felt sumthing… pls…he said brushing his fingers again

Nupur: stop taking out ur needs on me..got it mayank Sharma…u cant man handle me..understand

This was it…he pushed her on the car…

Mayank: ur not kid ms nupur ..that u donot know who is kissing u and whos touch ur enjoying… and if I really wana get my needs out of u…than if that night I would have stoped u …u were not in ur sense to fight ur needs…got it…

Nupur: she shrugged his hands off... that's it.. enough of u..

Pulling her back in his arms..he slowly brushed his lips on her….

Mayank: stop it dear… brushing his fingers softly on her arms…he soflty caressed her neck…he was whispering in between kissing her very softly..making her breathless…. I am not ur frnds boyfriend who will throw u in hell.. ..u know it….he looked in her eyes…...donot u..

With that he kissed her deep, molding her body…making her clam down while rubbing his hand…on her arm…. feeling her body relaxed,… he pulled back..still holding her close..caresing her cheek with his knuckles…slightly pecking her…

Mayank: clam down…

she pushed him back slightly and he smiled..

Mayank: okay fine I am droping u…

Nupur: I am not going anywhere

Maaynk: o really so u wana stay with me here…

Nupur: shut up n drive back home…

He chukled and without making her more angry …droved back with slight flirting with her…as she was too silent and he wasn't like this…but didn't got to much fight against him expect the galres…she was silent not at all responding to anything.. with weird expression as per his analysis…like girls blush, get turn on… and many more things to him….but she… cold…to cold... but than she was clam… and that is good sign so finally he knew he has got somehow a little grip on her..


Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
i loved it to d coreee...
so Mayank is serious abt Nupur n he admitted it OMG!!!
dat was Awesome..
i loved dat to d coreee...
well...Nupur is still worried for wht happen to her frnd..aww
bt hopefully Mayank will remove dat fear for ever...
loved der all Romance thing...
it was awesome...
loved it to d coreee...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗

ps: sry for d late reply...😳

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res

nice update ...but i was not clear about the end!!!

did the became couple or just aysehi nupur responded in his kiss n allowed him to come close to her!!!

mayank seemed to know that he is feeling deep for nupur but still his behaviour is more like a flirt than a true lover .

😕😕😕
😕
Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Aj no reply???

n han can anyone tell me whts
Wid a file extention .PNG (most important)


yeh PNG kya hain...🤓




PNG foramt hai files k

aj no rply sorry jani... aj koi as such questions nhi thy coments mein... aur mein lazy hogi hoon


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Aj no reply???

n han can anyone tell me whts
Wid a file extention .PNG (most important)


yeh PNG kya hain...🤓



PNG :Portable Network Graphics (Comparatively better then JPEG and support binary transparency and alpha(b/w) channel transparency)

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