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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#901

Comment updated on pg-124
plzz check..

--indu

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
res-- 😭 😭 tanzie i missd commenting dis tym!! Damn 😡 😭

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brilliant, terrific, magnificient update tanzie!! 👏 👏 Thanks dear

the story is totaly n a dark path nw!!
Hm..sid is behavng lyk an insane!! Infct hs love 4 pia hd made hm mad !! He wants pia by hook r crook nw! Evn he wil nt hesitate to kil her if he fails to gt her!! I knw sid ws evil bt donno y i really felt bad 4 hm! Mayb i thot once he hs changd so mayb there's hope for hm! Bt nw i cn v.wel see hs doom is near!! Love is insane itself.
his heart nd cnscinc is telng hm nt to harm pia nd follow rudra blindly! And dis shows tht sumthng hs realy changd insyd hm!! Though he isnt listening! Mayb he wil realise wen its too late! Or wil he try to save pia?? And If tht hapns i wil b really happy!! lets see...

Jay-misha convo ws cute nd sweet! Their way of confession was really unique!! 😳 it added a light moment n dis othrwise dark update! 😊 yes, Jisha was bound to happen in this update..

so rudra knws tht abhay wil cum to save hs pia,no mattr what!! Tanzie dis thng i nevr realy undrstnd! I mean dis villains..evrywhere u see..wethr its..movie,tv.soap, books..thy always knw tht the hero wil cum running 4 hs love at any cost! Stil it didnt strike thm fr once tht y thn harm such awesum,pure heartd,brave soul in d first place wth no reasn at all! Cz wat thy cnsidr to b a reasn,is utter foolishnes!! I knw u wil say tht ths is hw it works nd i knw its true! Bt stil..u knw..! I feel dis vilains r nthng bt dumb nd foolish!! Haha..u myt b thnkg wat hapnd to me! Nthng its just cme into my mind aftr readng dis updat, though i alwys thot abt it,so tdy thot of sharing it wth u!!
Once again it was truly a lovely update!! 😳 If they have the conscience of feeling others as good or even consider the good ppl's deed then they would never be the villain right? 😆 n if everyone is good then thr wud be no fun n life wud be boring... world need balance... once the good ppl make realize the bad ones whats so wrong abt them...they r no longer included in the villain list...
And i will miss dis ff very much!! Nt nly bcz i lovd dis bt also cz dis one was d very first stry of urs thru whch i gt the chance to read nd cherish ur works!! Nt to mentin thru dis ff nly i gt to knw u! And also it reminds me of pkyk days!!
hm..i thnk m gttng emotnal nd thts so nt me!!
So i bettr stop here!! 😉
k..dear am waitng for the final 1 !!
And is there any faint hope of gttng anthr ff frm u n near future?? Ofcourse i knw u'r hell busy bt stil cudnt stop myself frm askng!!
Tk..cre..and hwz ur eyes nw?
And hw is ur mom? Hope she is bettr nw?
I too hv went thru similr situatn myslf,so i nw hw it feels!! I know.. I will miss it too dear... this is my 1st FF in this forum.. in IF and i got more attached to PKYEK bcoz of my FFs... so it means a lot to me.. i will continue to write till the end of beautiful disaster... i have another plan about a FF but no idea when i will have time to start that... lets see. mom is recovering now... thanks for asking... im greatful to everyone for all the love they have given me 🤗

A/w..do tak..cre..of urself dear! 🤗
awaitng d nxt update..

--indu

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#903

Thanks a lot everyone 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#906

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

How could you do this Tanzie. Why did you kill Mayank 😭 I hope you make him return back in epilogue maybe 5 years later, but just bring him back please.😭

Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#907

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awesum update...n mayank😭😭Loved each n every part❤️

waiting 4 d epilouge...wil miss dis FF😒

Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#908

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😭😭😭 Tanzie I know and agree that everything comes with a price but I am still unable to come on the grips that Mayank wont come with Muskaan😭😭😭

_Please bring him back this is heartbreaking i cant write my hands shaking 😭

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#909

Tanzie tune kya kar di? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Dont tell me Abhiya n their babies are dead, NO please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Loved the update but right now can't comment much since I am 😭 Waiting for the epilogue. Hope u post it soon. Coming to the update it was brilliantly written but I am still 😭🥺

--Edited again on 9th May 2012 Such a heartbreaking update 😭 I loved it 👏 Brilliantly written Tanzie. You sure know how to tug ur readers heartstrings 😭 Feeling bad for Mayank but I am glad that Pia didn't lose both her children. Hopefully Mayank will be back like he promised and complete their happy family again 😊 Will miss this FF a lot 😭 Has been one of my fav 😭 but will cherish it forever 🤗

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#910

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I cried! and still having tears! My baby has come to an end with a happy note!! You already knew how I love this FF!

If you had put your soul reading this I had put all my love and excite in this one. It showed me a whole new world which was a much needed distraction for me!

This FF will deftly hold evergreen memories in me! I had been a silent reader for this FF and you PM'd me saying it is going into FF section this is the link! It made me respect you so much! Only then I started commenting here!

This is one story that has too many shocking twists and turns and too much of darker side and relishing love side! The light moments are less in ratio here when compared to darker side but still it is in my memory afresh!

Their intimate moments at Dobriyal house when they used to go to college, the kiss scene at the palace where they all went for a picnic, their first love making at the cave and then at the Raichand's house! And final touchy one after their reunion after the blood sacrifice! It's still lingering in my mind fresh as green.. It is actually making me feel blushing all time whenever I remember!

In twists and turn section - The Ex-girlfriend of Abhay and how she used him for the stone.. She finding him to be the possessor of last stone that will open the well..

Panchi actually killed by Metz! And during the first holy ritual how Pia's mom helped her to break her curse.. How Sid has been innocent for Metz's actions! Most mattered was Chand's death!

memorable moments - Haseena and Chand still felt for each other even after long time and how she felt after Chand's death.. How Jeh held Misha when she broken down for truth.. How Pia shattered the glasses at bar since because she was angry at Abhay.. Vikram helping her to fake the queen post.. Nandhini helping her at the masquerade.

And who can forget the rules of holy rituals and the blood jeopardy! I held my breath many times when I read the updates! I had a fear creeping in me all time when you wrote something on rules.. Really!

And the last update was bang on! I came all way nervous thinking what will happen to Pia, Abhay even Sid.. I didn't want any of them to die..

And it was tragic more than I expected.. Sid being influenced by Rudhra and his bloody hell past.. His wife was that loving him? No wonder she too is evil.. When Laksher died he did one useful thing is to pull her soul along with him..

Abhay actually jumped for Pia in the well? Omg.. How romantic it could get when he's in death bed!

I had a new respect on Sid now! All my anger has been vanished!

Though Pia's son is not there! But still as promised he would be back.. I'm feeling better.. The way the twins fought on whom to be sacrificed.. They are not kids any more!

Tanzie! I would miss this FF for sure!

Thanks for the PM dear!

P.S: Don't bother about long comments if you made it till here! I can't stop myself!

Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago