MGFF Sajna Tera Pyar Mein Note 114 dt 25/02 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
I finally read all the parts darling now update soon so that I can start commenting 😛
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Originally posted by: piya-

I finally read all the parts darling now update soon so that I can start commenting 😛

I start writing next update with in hour i wil surely update ...
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Part 13

Maan : Chalo mera saath ab he holds her hand

Geet : Nhiii

Maan : Tum ne promise kiya tha na

Geet : Tum mera husband nhi ho

Maan : Par maine toh kiss kiya tumhe abhi

Geet : Nhiii Husband apni wife ko yeah kiss karte hai ..she point towards her lips yeah nhii ..

Maan shouted : Dekho geet

Geet : Nhiii tum stupid husband

Maan : Stupid ?

Geet : Ha Stupid Stupid wohi bade wala stupid '

Maan confused what to do , he once again tried to convince and hold her hand but geet she literly smacked it '

Maan : GEEET

Geet : Ahhh ek tum mujhe kiss nhi karte aur mujhe dant bhi ho ..stupid , idiot , donkey ..

Maan replied very politely:Geet chalo ghar chalet hai .

Geet : Nhii

Maan : Par kyo ?

Geet: Kyunki tumne mujhe dant aur kiss bhi nhi ki Isliye

Maan scratch his head to think how can he convince her: Hmm dekho geet sorry ab nhi danto ge aur ha movie mein husband 'wife ghar pe kiss karte hai ne ,mein tumhe ghar ja kar kiss karo ..pakka

Geet think for while : Right tum itne stupid husband bhi nhi ho .chalo ghar chalte hai .

Maan (st ) Stupid kahe kar dimag ki dahi kar di par chalo maan toh agai 'He holds her hand and walked towards car .

Geet : Nhiii she shout in his ear .

Maan : Geeet ab kya hai meri Ma .

Geet sadly replied : Mein tumheri Ma nhi mein toh kiske Ma nhii , Mein tu friend aunty ho .

Maan : Friend Aunty '??? Ha friend and aunty maan thought .

Geet start crying and sit near the foothpath ..

Maan : Sorrry ro maat ..kya hua tumhe kuch chaiye kya ?(maan don't asked )

Geet :Mein bore ho rhi ho , tum dance karo meri liye

Maan : Road par ..

Geet : Ha hero karte hai na jaise movie waise wala ..

Maan (st) Maan beta tug aye aaj kaam sae ..Babaji rakash karne ..

Maan : Ghar ja kar dance karega yeah music nhi hai na ..

Geet :hmmm mein gaati ho na tum dance karne thik ha she asked inconnetly

Maan : Nhhiii Ghar jaker who sab karoge jot um kahogi par abhi chalo ..

Geet : Nhiii plsss mera liye plsss plsss

Maan : Ok phir tum meri baat sunagi thik final

Geet : done done

Geet ; chalo dance par mein kaun sae song gao ..

Maan : Car mein sochte thik chalo .

Geet : Ha mujhe yaad a gaye ..

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Maan Died after listen the selection of her song ..babaji agar kisne The MSK road pe dance karte who dekhi liye woh bhi ise song par toh kal ki headline hogi

Geet : Dance karo na

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me

Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me

Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah Zara Zara .. Ooo Ooo Ooo

Maan Just do up and down his hand and shake lit bit legs like he doing some warming exercise .

Chalo gee tab dance hogaye na 'maan hurdiley scooped her in his arms and made her sit in car before she demands anything .

Maan Start driving the car on full speed and geet keep looking him and busy in her thoughts .Maan Confused by her behaviour but thought my she got tried .

After some time Geet put her head on maan shoulder and said tum bahit acha husband ho mera maan ki tarah .Maan heart beat increase after listening mera maan from his geet but his happiness left not more than minute with the other word of her ..Mera Maan nhi supriti ka Maan hai .Maan hamesha na supriti ki baat manate hai aur usne yeah bhi mana liye ki maine uske paiso liye use dosti kit hi aur uski beti ko bhi marne chaha .Par yeah sach nhi hai aur sargam toh meri beti hai na.

Maan Stop the car and put his hand on her cheeks ha sargam tumheri beti jaisi hai aur tumhera maan stupid isliye usne supriti ki baat maan li .Geet smacked his hand nhi mera maan stupid nhi hai ha par thoda idiot hai par stupid nhi samaje ..

Ha samaj gaye .

Very good , tumhe pata hai woh kitne badhe idiot hai .Mein 4 years (geet count on finger and show him 4) kae baad ayi .par usne mujhe recognize nhi kiya kehta hai mein koi Miss Raita nhiii Miss Mehta nhiii Miss gupta ho .Pagal hai bilkul mein toh geet ho sirf uski geet ..Maan ki geet .Par who idiot mujhse phele jaise baat hi nhi karte sirf woh file yeah file who project karte rehata pagal kahi ka ..Haina ..with this geet dossed off on maan shoulder .

Maan caressed her hair ..yupp your maan is too idiot to understand you , but I promised you will get your friend maan ..Pakka wala promise ..I am sorry meri pagli 'I lo.Maan controlled his emotions and start driving again towards Malthore house ,..

Precap 1:Well Done Mr Malthore ..What is difference between you and Maan Singh Khurana .

Precap 2: Maan : Hi Geet we are friend now ?

Geet : Friends ???

Maan : Ohhh sorry Best Friends ..

Hi Dearies ..Sorry for Short Update after long time but i will surely update next part tomorrow night .Hope you liked the update ..Please do comments and press like button ,,

P.s For PMs send me buddy request .

Next Part https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56931190
Edited by --Fairy-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh i read ur ff its justtt amazinggg
oh i m first tooo bohat hi zabardast the update plzz
update next part soonnn

Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet said that sargam is her daughter but maan failed to realize its meaning...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update :) eagerly waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt...
short but sweet.
yeh maan ko kyu nahi samajh aya ki sargam geet ki baby hai???????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i m sure that sargam is maan and geet's daughter and their is more past which only knows by geet and rahul plz reveal that past so maan comes to know about geet's love and sacrifice plz update soom thanks for pm waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
geet said that sargam is her daughter ...so looks like there is more past to come...
waiting to know the next...

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