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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy Rachana 😃
look as I promised... I hav read all of d parts at one go 😳
its reallyyy nice yaar 👍🏼 MAAN is sooo goody-goody boy 😆 itna gud boy hona bhi sahi nahi hota hain zindagi mein 😔 kyun ke life mein humein har tarah k insaan se milna padhta hain... angel... devil... grey shaded 😕 par shayad yeh bechara bhola-bhala MAAN iss duniya k achhai aur budhaiyon ke bare mein kuch bhi nahi janta hain 😭 aage bohut badha jhatka lagne wala hain re isko baba 😉
so mee waiting 4 d nxt updt of SHART 😃
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SHART : Rang gaye tere rang me

Part 5

Geet & maan both talked for some time , about their likes-dislikes ,

But after that talking they both findout

If one is from south , then other is from north

If one is as cool as ice ,then other is as hot as fire

If one is so innocent ,then other is cruel

If one likes peace , then other likes noise

If one is down to earth , then other is so egostic

In short both is exactly opposite to each other ,

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Geet(to udayveer) : UV ,car is puncherd ?

Sam : oh tumhari car kharab he , its ok I ll drop u

Geet hits sam on his arm

Geet : idiot , car punkchar hui nahi karni he , so maan can drop me

Sam : oh I got I , you want to spend time with maan so he can fall in love with u , bt what is u ll also fall in love with him ?

Geet : esa nahi hoga na me esa hone dungi

(rachana- geet , aage aage dekh hota he kya)

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After collage

Maan sees that geet standing beside her car with sad face
maan called her

Maan : what happen geet ? why are you standing hear alone ?

Geet : then what should I do ?

She said with baby face

Maan : but hua kya , ye to batao

Geet : wo actually , my all friends go back to hostel

Maan : so what ?

Geet : and my car is not starting

Maan : that's not a big deal yaar

Geet : but now how can I go to hostel ?

Maan : okay , you told me that I am your friend , right ?

Geet : hmm right '' so what ??

Maan : so I ll drop you

Geet get exited ''but however she hide her over joy

Geet (sadly) : will you ?

Maan : ofcource yaar

Geet : then let's go

Both sit in the car

Maan indicate her to tied the sit-belt

Geet : abe yaar ,iski koi jarurat nahi

Maan : geet its goverment rule , and its our duty also

Geet : oh my god !!!!! you are really obideant

Geet tied the belt with baby sad face , maan smiled on her expresin and he looking her lovingly

Geet : what ?? ab to bandh lia

Maan nodded his head to no no

Maan : kuch nahi let's go

Maan started driwing , he was driwing so slow ,

Geet : maan what are you doing ?

Maan : (innocently) driwing the car

Geet : I mean why are you driwing so slowly ??
maan : geet it's a more then enough range

Geet : 60 is enough ??

Maan : of cource

Geet didn't say much remambering UV's word that if he spend more time with u he must fall in love with you

But she is aware of that this rule can also apply to her own self

After some time maan sees the gola stole

He stopped car immediately

Maan : geet (he said excitedly )

Geet : what happen ??

Maan : look , there is gola , muje gola khana he

Geet : are you mad ?? is vaqt , u want to eat gola ?

Maan : yup , you know I was really missing those things in London

Geet shocked to hear that he was living in London

Geet: you were in London ?

Maan: yup, since 6-7 yrs I was in London

Geet : WHATTT ??????

Maan : isme itna shock hone ki kya baat he ?

Geet : shock to lagega hi na yaar ! tumhare cloths , behavior and ye fav dishes '..yuk

She said by making faces

Maan : ya I was in London since 6-7 yrs but I born in india , and meri MAA kehte he ki ham kahi bhi jae hame apne tradition nahi bhulne chahiye'..hame apni maryada(limits) me rehna chahiye ,hamare sanskar hi hamari pehchan he

Geet : wow , your MAA is absolutely right ,

Maan smiled listening that she is agree with his thought

Geet smiled back,

Geet : par muje kuch samaj me nahi aaya (LOL)

Maan gives her 'u-are-impossible' look

Maan : achha ye sab choddo (forget this all ) let's go there

Maan point out on the stole of gola

Geet : maan are you serious ? pata nahi ye sab kese pani(water) se bana hoga , it's unhygienic yaar , may be u fall sick

Maan : nothing will happen to us , chalo

Maan held her hand,

Geet : no maan you go and enjoy your gola , I am fine hear

She said gola by making annoyed face

Maan : offo !!!! nothing ll happen to you , I promise

Geet : no maan please

Maan : please mere liye , please

He said it making cute baby face , how can she said no to him , she also don't know why she don't want to say NO to him ,

She fall on her cute baby face and she agree to go with him

Geet: ok but I am coming for only giving you accompany , I will not eat it

Maan : okay baba , pehle chalo to sahi

Both goes there

Maan : bhaiya , 2 gola dena

Geet : maan , I ll not eating ha

Maan : ha baba , both are for me

Geet by golgappu face : hmm pir theek he

Maan was planning that geet ll eat his fav dish

Maan : geet really you don't like to eat gola ?

Geet : no I never tested it, ese raste par ki cheese unhealthy hoti he ,

Maan : oo , I can't belive this ,how can u say that its not good without testing ?

Geet : and I don't want to test ..okay

That boy : baiyaji aapki gola

Maan took tat

Maan : please geet mere liye ek baar please

Geet : maan no ways

Now maan get to know that if he makes baby face geet ll surely melt ,

He makes baby cute face

Geet : no ways , ab ye tumhara chahera(face) dekh k bhi me nahi khaungi

Maan disappoint '

He started eating gola with baby sad face '.

Geet noticed that , she don't knw but she don't like his sad face ,

Geet : maan

Maan didn't answer

Geet patted his solder

Geet : maan

Maan with half heartly :hmm bolo

Geet(with puppy face) : muje nahi khilaoge ??

Maan shocked to hear that , but he is so happy to hear tat,

Maan made her eat gola by himself , geet is enjoying each & evary bite , it's not because she likes gola , it's bcoz she was eating from maan's hand ,

She don't know why she is so happy , she just knw to enjoy this movment with maan , she felt that "kash ye vaqt yahi tham jaye aur ham tumhare rang me rang jaye'

Maan also so happy that geet is agree to eat that just only for him , bfor came hear he was so happy that now he can eat his fav dish after so many days , but now he is not eating it and just feeding to his princess

Maan is feeding her and she is eating , both lost in each other's eyes ,forgetting the whole world even geet also forget that she cames hear for her shart(bet) , both don't knw about their fellings , but they both wanted to be with each other

They both was so happy with each other '.. aware of destiny's plans

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They reached to car

Maan : I told you , you would like it ,,

Geet :ya it was so good , I really liked it

Maan smiled , she smiles back

Maan : achha to tumhe kaha jana he ?

Geet (naughtily) : tumhare ghar

Maan : but I am living hear in hostel

Geet : yup so let's go to you hostel

Maan (with shock) : pagal ho gai ho kya ?? it's boys hostel & girls are not allow '

Geet gave him look , like she is telling ufff

Geet : maan , tum bilkul buddhu ho ,I was just kidding yaar , me tumhare hostel me aa kar kya karungi ?

Now maan's turn to be naughty '.

Maan : vese tum chaho to bahot kuch kar sakti ho vaha aakar !!!!! he smirks at her

Geet's mouth went O , and a deep blush came on her cheeks listening to her naughty thought

May be it is first time when MS. GEET HANDA is blushing,

Maan noticed her blushing

Maan : now stop blushing

Geet hits his arm,she hardly control her blush

Maan : ouch geet ,its hurting

Geet : itni jorse nahi mara ki lage and agar pir bhi lag raha he to bahot accha he

Maan : achha ji !!!

Geet : dekh rahi hu me ha !

Maan (trying to be innocent) : kya ?

Geet : dekh rahi hu , when you was came you was looking so nave & innocent but now you are changing and being naughty

Maan (with a big smile): ab ye to sangat ka asar he

Geet :lo ulta chor(theif) kotval ko date

Both laughed

Maan falling on her diffrance from other girl (because she is just like tom boy) and geet faling on his innocence ,

They reached to hostel

Geet steped out from car ,

Geet : maan , come , it's not only girl's hostel , our whole gang is in hostel

Maan : no geet , aaj nahi

Geet : look , mene tumhari baat mani thi na , now it's your turn

Maan : geet

Geet : maan

Maan : geet

Geet : maan

Samrat came from behind

Sam : ab ye maan & geet ki mala japna choddo nd come inside

Geet : maan come na

Maan about to steped out from car , but the same time geet's cell beeped

She saw the text message from dev , it's written "SHE CAME "

Geet shocked to read that

She wishpered in samrat's ear : she came

Sam also shocked ,

Sam : kyaaa ?

Maan hear tat

Maan : what happen ?

Geet (with fake smile) : kuch nahi , nothing ,

Sam : ha maan , you have some imp work na !!

Maan : ha par ''

Sam (cutting in ) : so u carry on , it's must be important , tum yaha to pir kabhi bhi aa sakte ho na !!!! sshe na geet !!

Geet (with stammer) : ha 'ha..ha ..bil.kul..sahi ..you go , bye ,

Maan surprised to see both's reaction , but without asking anything he left from there

Geet & samrat take a relif breath

Geet : achha hua chala gaya varna hamare dono bhande phut jate

Sam : ha yaar , if she or maan said anything to eachother we ll finish and our plan aslo

Sam & geet reached to hostel , in geet's room , the whole joker party was already there

As soon as geet reached , dev jumped on his feet

Dev : geet she came back and you are still wear the jins&t-shirt , go and change fast

Geet : oh no !!! pir se vo pahenane padenge

Dev : please geet , it's life

Geet : ok ok , now stop begging like beggers

Dev : to pir jana meri ma !

Geet : hmm ok

She goes to washroom

She didn't came after 15 mins

Dev paniced

Dev knock on washroom door

Dev : geet , why are you taking time like a typical girl ?
geet : oye muje ladki mat bula , ladki hogi teri GIRL FRIEND

Dev : ha par abhi k lia meri Girlfriend tu hi he ,

Geet : ha baba , I knw that

Geet comes from washroom wearing a short dress , she was looking so sexy and beautyfull

She is just like tom boy so she always used to wear jins & t-shirt that's why she feeling uncomfortable to wear this dress

Arman : geet you are looking sexy

Riddhima hits on his arm

Arman : ouch basket

Geet : guys , ab yhe drama kitne din karna hoga , dev ki fake girl friend banne ka ,,

(Rachana- hahahaha shock laga na !!)

Dev : jab tak BANI accept nahi kar leti k she loves me

Dev goes in his dream land'mayank came infront of him and waves his hand in front of his eyes but no reply

Uv patted his solder but still he was lost

Geet singed to both like let me try

Geet came infront of her and said loudly : ARE BANI TUM YAHA !!

Dev immideatly comes to reality

Dev : BANI !! KAHA HE BANI !😆

All laugh at his condition ,😆

dev fells shy ,

dev(shyly) : kya tum log bhi !

geet : such me yaar , love is blind ,

uv : ya love is useless yaar

mayank : ha yaar sare career band ho jata he love se

arnav : oye agar tum logo ko pyar par bharosa nahi to ham kya kare , we belive in love , bcoz I love khusi

( let me tell u khusi is not sanya read character skech)

All cheared :OOO

Khusi : but I don't belive in love

Geet : le ab kar trust love pe !!

Arnav (sadly) : ek din khusi ko bhi trust ho jayega , dekh lena !!

Geet : ok guys we ll continue our fight later , now let's go to airport

Arman : ya she is right

Dev : (exitedly) ha ha chalo chalo

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Precap : meeting with new member , BANI

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So how was the part ' ??? as I promised it's a big part so plz don't comnt only "nice/i love it"

love

Rachana

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prev part4(pg14)- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2918490/shart-rang-gaye-tere-rang-me-chk-note-on-121?pn=14

next part _ depend on ur responce😆


Edited by Rachanachag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
yipeee me frst
dhink chika dhink chika hai hai hai
😃😃😃
😃😃😃


😃😃😃
wow lvly awsmm updt

mujko aisa lg rha hai jaise maaneet ki aatma exchng ho gyi hai...😆😆😆😆😆
mera b maaneet ko dekh ke gola khane ka mann kr rha hai.. yummyyy😃
oops geet kis kis ni gf bnegi...😆😆😆
cont soonnn



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Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update maneet scene fasntastic both are opposite but falling for each other love gola scene geet is going to act fake gf of dev good



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely yaar... Chalo geet k saath kuch toh real hua nai toh always she faked her plan.. Aaj 1st tym geet ko sach mai kuch feel hua... Loved it...
N nw bani... So geet isvfake gf...chalo happy to no dis...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome

both r totally opposite

u swap their charcter

but m loving it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome superb part ...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This FF is yaar totally ulta-pulta jaisa ab tak jaante the...

now Maan wants to eat Gola and Geet is thinking its unhygienic...then she eats it because of Maan and both drawn in each other's feeling...

Geet is doing drama to help Dev for Bani...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet ka future mujhe clear dekhae de rahi hain.
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Wow loved it❤️... Maan lived in london for 6-7 years😲... Gola maan ko bohat pasand hai and geet ko pasand nehi hai😲... Haillah!! yaha par to sab kuch ulta pulta ho rahi hai😛... Haaye!! geet was blushing for maan's naughty cmnt😳... Now who's banni🤔... Waiting eagerly for next part😍...

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