OS: You, Me and the Sunset..

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janavi07

@janavi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey Annie

That was so beautiful! 😊

their kiss was very Hot n with a nice place for romance beach n sun set filled with love passion romance emotions all there

I loved it!

waiting for more

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

That was beautiful. It was like a gentle breeze like a gentle caress. Lovely.

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

lovely writing annie..
i so loved the writing style..
keep writing more..
i felt as if i'm in the sea shore enjoying the sand,waters n sunset..

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Shreya.Shanak

@Shreya.Shanak

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

WOWW!!!that was so beautifully written...i didn't knew their are soo many amazing writers here!! U should write more often yaar...it gave all mild feelings...that was soft sensitive light...just like the soft warm rays of morning sun...beautiful..nd their kiss was so hot nd sexy...lol...

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Annie very beautiful and sweet Os

Your style of writing is very poetic . You should write more often

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afiya.

@afiya.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

*sighs* I'm here, I'm here! 😃

Alright, well first of all I'm sorry I'm so late... my only excuse is that school sucks! 😆 GOD Annie, you're so impossibly perfect. The moment I saw that you've written something, I was jumping with joy! The whole OS reminded me of the ShaNak Honeymoon scene on the beach, and what a bliss that was. Damn, I really wish your OS was part of the actual show! Wouldn't that be a treat to watch? ☺️ Aww thank you so much girl for dedicating it to me and Simi! I miss her! That was really sweet of you ❤️. I loved the whole intensity of their kiss, and the way they looked at each other, so serenely. Awww, LOL! I totally expected Khanak to cry, because it seemed like the perfect thing to do. I'm completely speechless here, thus not having much to say. 😳 You're a phenomenal writer, and I can't wait to read more! Gahh, I still have like gossebumps, because it was THAT good! Ahhh, you SO have to write more, and soon! I'd love to have you as an FF buddy! ⭐️

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