poems on sorrow and death

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Posted: 20 years ago
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at this stage where td is heading i am really feeling helpless so just thought of putting down some poems ,

please do read them:😛

SORROW

Sorrow is the color of peach,
Sounding like a pitiful scream,
Tasting like tasteless meat,
Smelling like pale buttercups,
Looking like never ending guiltiness,
Feeling like an alcoholic in the rain.

Sorrow is white with anger;
It sounds like never ending pain
And tastes like rotting bread.
It sounds like spoiled strawberries.
Sorrow looks like a dead bird;
It makes people feel bitter.

Sorrow is the color of a gray cloud hovering the dark sky;
Sounding like a storm of thunderbolts,
It tastes like a dirty rainfall.
Smelling like a muddy bank,
And looking like a loner in the deserted alley,
Sorrow is the feeling of guiltiness.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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ON THE EVE OF DK'S DEATH AND DEATHOF OTHER CHARACTERS IN TD:

Death
Death is the wave that takes the world,
It can start in one place and end up in another.

Death is a shadow,
It flies by day and cannot be seen or heard at night.

Death is a message,
When it is opened, bad things come out.

Death strikes.
Death takes.
Death leaves.
Life ceases.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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great effort Twine .. thats ur own creation or just a poem u wanted us all to read??

ur inclined towards literature and poems i see... great effort and godo going

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Death and fate:

Our beings are lives yet to form,
But to live and die is our life,
Once we die we are no more,
Just a corpse sent back to the earth.

Even if we are famous,
We still do die,
For fate is our destiny of which we create,
Fate is false, but real,
We live to die, and die to live.

We circle around just to live again,
Even though much pain is incomprehensible,
Our brains determine everything,
But it still can die like everything,
Our death is mourned,
But our lives are still celebrated.

As humans we are immortal,
Our souls live on,
Our containers die off and degrade back to the earth,
From which it came just to be created,
From the same materials.

Added up we are nothing,
Subtracted we are nothing,
All in all,
We are nothing.

But nothing can not be nothing,
Without being something first.

Even if we have two left,
We subtract and get nothing,
Add just to get nothing.

Life's purpose is zero,
Not anything,
Because zero is something,
But nothing is nothing,
So never say never,
Because life is as zero as nothing

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Posted: 20 years ago
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(that didnt come out as intended ... it was a thumbs up pic) 😉

anyway good going twine

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi

Twine woww you have penned them i am impressed..Brilliant work..Keep it up👏👏..did u have a good trip...

Samy

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Posted: 20 years ago
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tah! samy the effect of my trip and the energy what i have accumlated by drinking milk can be seen in my writings😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Even thought the topics are morbid, Beautifully written 👏👏

Keep up the good work😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Brilliant 👏👏

So drinking all that milk didn't go to waste.. hehe.. good 😆😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: twine

tah! samy the effect of my trip and the energy what i have accumlated by drinking milk can be seen in my writings😆

I can tell you are back with a bang...milk has done wonders..😆

Samy

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