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Hey guys i'm Maneet and this is my first OS on my fave couple kriyansh. I've never written anything before, so i hope u all like it. Thnxx to meow and ridz for helping me with the title. Enjoy the upate😊
It was pre valentines day and kriya was resting in her room as she was hell tired due to the events taken place in the morning. She was happy coz her team won the elims and at the same time sad coz rey had lost. She was so busy the whole dat she couldn't even talk to rey properly.
(P.S kriya's mom doesn't know about her dance)
Kriya was thinking about rey and about her first Valentines day wid rey. Unknowingly a smile crept on her face on thinking about him.But her chain of thoughts were broken due some sound coming from the window. As she turned around she was shocked to see rey climbing in through the window with a packet or cover in his hand. Instead of helping him she started asking him questions
kr: Rey aap yahan iss waqt, agar maa ne dekh liya toh problem ho jaayegi n she kept on asking him questions. Rey tried to speak in between par no use. At last he got irritated n shouted
R:woah baatcutter 1 min itne ques ek saath first help in coming in
K: sorry😳...and she helped him in coming inside. Acha app yahan kyu aaye hum waise bhi kal colg mai milenge na
R: arrey yahan kyu aaye ka kya matlab tumse milna tha toh aaya aur waise bhi kal tak kaun wait karega and madam aaj pre valentines day hai toh tumhare saat spend karne aa gaya.
Kriya starts blushing.
R:u know wat tum blush karte hue bahut cute lagti ho
K:thnxx(still blushing)
R' waise baat cutter i have some thing for ur
K: kya??? excited like a kid
he first takes out a bouquet of orchids n hands dem to her.
K: wow rey orchids dey r my fav. i just luv dem.
R: I know isliye toh tumhare liye laaya hu. He den takes out a showpiece of a dancing couple in the middle of a glass ball just like the one in d3 and gives it to her. kriya was dumbstruck on seeing it.
K: beautiful...its the only word she could utter.
R: baat cutter iss show peice joh couple hai dats us. She immediately hugged him n tears were rolling down her cheeks. Rey could sense dat she was crying. he immediately cupped her face n asks har
R: kya hua kriya y r u crying tumhe yeh gifts pasand nhi aaye. She cuts him in the middle and says
K: rey muje yeh gifts bahut pasand aaye hai its just dat aaj tak muje kissi ne bhi itna special feel nhi karvaya. Thank u sooo much rey
R: shh stop crying and u know wat tum mereliye bahut special ho. And here starts hamare kriyansh ka LLHH wid bg as oho hoo wala tune.But it was broken by smriti.
Sm:kriya beta zara yahan toh aana
K:aayi mom. she tells rey to hide and goes out
Sm:kriya mujhe abhi pune ke liye jaana hoga n i'll be back in 2 days., toh tum ghar par akeli reh logi
k: mom dont worry abt me i'll be fine aur aap jao nhi toh late ho jaoge. they bid byees to each other and smriti goe.
Mean while rey was listening to their convo and he gets excited coz tomorrow nite he will get to spend without any disturbance.
Suddenly Kriya enters the room and see's him smiling.
K:rey aap smile kyu kar rahe ho
R: kuch nhi bas asie hi toh chali gayi tumhari mom
K: haan...then dey keep talking about some random stuffs
At exact 11:59 pm rey takes kriya near the window.
K: rey aap mujhe yahan kyu le kar aaye.
R: vo tumhe pata chal jayega soon.
he den starts the count down 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
He den asks her to look up at the sky. As soon as she looks up fire crackers start bursting in the sky and it was written HAPPY VALENTINES DAY BAATCUTTER. those words were twinkling and sparkling in the sky. Kriya was so overwhelmed the she hugged him with all her strength. Their hug lasted long until rey broke it.
Rey: baat cutter today will be a very special day coz this is our first valentines day...lots of surprises r waiting for u.
Rey to himself it will be special kriya as im going to propose u and i know dat even u love me
K: surprises!! lekin kya
R: agar surprise bata diya toh vo surprise kaise rahega. Chalo mai chalta hu gud nite, sweet dreams n dream about me. She blushes n says
K: gud nite rey sweeet dreams to u too
R: mere dreams toh sweet honge hi after all tum jo aati ho. He turns to go but kriya stops him
R: kya hua
K: umm...vo...she immediately gives him a sweet peck on his cheeks. Rey was in complete shock for a min. He den came to his senses and looked at her, she was looking down blushing.
R:tumne mujhe sach mai kiss kiya. She just nods her head saying yes as she is feeling too shy to look at him.
K: rey ab aap jao byee
R: byee..finally he goes
Next day in the colg kriya was busy thinking about rey n their first valentines day. She enters the locker room, opnes her locker and finds a gift wid a note on it.
Note: Wear this dress and be ready by 8 pm i'll cum to pick u. We r going on a date.
She guessed dat it was from rey. she den opened the gift and found a beautiful dress inside it. Suddenly he phone rang, it was from rey.
K:hii rey
R: hey beautiful liked the dress
K: Ofcourse rey its beautiful i luv it.
R: dats gud so be ready bye 8pm.
K: hmm okk btw wer r u
R: mai rite nw busy will meet u at the nite
K: matlab aap colg aaye nhi
R: nope...acha ab rakho i have lots of work to do. bye
K:byee
Whole day she didn't meet rey as he had not come to colg. She was getting restless to meet him. Finally the nite arrived. Kriya was getting ready for theirr date.It was sharp 8pm and the door bell rang. Kriya opened it and saw rey was standing. He was looking hot and hand some as usual.(Rey was wearing the same dress as he wore in shivam's party. sorry couldn't find better than dat.) He was busy checking out kriya as she was looking stunning in dat outfit.
All rey could utter was gorgeous. At this compliment kriya blushed. She complimented him back by saying aap bhi ache lag rahe ho
R:i know dat...so baat cutter ready.
K: haan rey just 2 mins. Saying dis she went back to her room to give her self the final touch up. She was finally read and as soon as she opened the door to go out she banged into rey. She was about to fall wen rey caught her by the waist n den HHLL wid bg as zara si instrumental version from movie jannat.
He made her straight and then took her infront of the mirror. Kriya looked at him confusingly. Rey took out a beautiful diamond heart shaped pendant with KR written on it and placed it on her bare neck.
Kriya was surprised and she looked at the pendant
K: rey is sooo pretty.
R: not more than u. Kriya blushed and said thnxx
R: toh chale. He forwarded his hand and kriya shyly placed her hand in his.
Rey took her to his farm house. It was huge house or more like a palace which has garden in its back side and in the center a big swimming pool.
K:rey yeh hum kahan aaye hai. She was shocked to see such a big house.
R: yeh mera farm house.
K: rey yeh aapka hai. Its beautiful bahar se hi aisa ho toh aandar se kaisa hoga. He took her inside. She was astonished to see. The interior was completely made of white marble with huge classic painting on every wall. He then led her ro the back door through which they can enter into the garden. He took to the garden and as soon as she stepped out she was surprised, shocked, happy to see the view in front of her. All she could say was 'wow' The whole garden was decorated with white and red heart shaped balloons with the mixture of orchids and red roses. As soon as she started walking beautiful rose petals was showering on her. She was so happy dat she started twirling around inhaling the essence of the petals. The petals stopped falling when she reached the center of the garden. He had done all this just for her made her feel the so special
R: so baat cutter kaisa laga
K: Rey its just beautiful, i have no words to say, i feel like a princess.
R: dats because u r my princess. At this she hugged him tight never wanting to let him go. He too responded equally. Finally rey broke the hug said: baat cutter can we please have something im feeling very hungry as i didn't eat any thing since morning.
K: of course rey. Before going towards their table she gave him a sweet long kiss on the cheek. Again rey was lost in his world. he was questioning him self did she just do dat. gosh dis girl is making me loose my senses. His chain of thoughts were broken by kriya.
K:kya hua..ab bhook nhi lagi. They den had their dinner and kept talking about their lives n many other things.
Finally it struck rey dat they were on a date and no dance, dats not possible. He got up from his chair and went near kriya knelled down infornt of her. forwarded his hand and asked her: May i have a dance wid the worlds most beautiful lady. Kriya blushingly placed her hand on his. They danced on the song"pehli nazar" from the movie "race".
They were doing some salsa and rumba steps. At every lift rey tried his best to minimize the gap between them never breaking the eye lock. Finally the dance ended at their ending position was kriya in rey arms almost hugging. After a few mins Rey then again kneels down in front of her.
He then says kriya the very first time i saw u i felt something different. the moment i look into ur eyes i get lost in them. i can live my whole world in ur eyes. My life was incomplete with out u, but now as u have entered my life i feeling complete. My heart aches to see a smile on ur face. My day begins with u and ends with u. When u smile i feel im the most luckiest person in the world and wen u r upset i wish to take away all ur sorrows. kriya You're my sunshine after the rain, I want us to be together, in each others arms in every sunshine and every rain, I love you. Will u be my valentine forever.
On hearing dis kriya couldn't control her emotions. She immediately pulled him up on his feet and threw her hands around his neck and dug her head in his chest. She was sobbing tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks. She finally broke the hug and said I love u too rey. Rey was sooo happy that he lifter her in his arms and twirled around until he was satified. After some time he put her back on the ground and starred at those beautiful innocent eyes. He leaned forward for a kiss but stopped in between and again looked at her. She understood wat he meant and slowing she closed her eyes giving him the green signal. He then kissed her with all his might. It was a delicate and light kiss which soon turned into a passionate and wild one and which lasted sooo long.
*THE END*
Phew!!!!!! finally finished typing. Sorry if there are any mistakes or errors. Do give me ur reviews. Hit like and comment if u liked it, agar nahi bhi acha lage toh bhi comment kardo. Criticisms are also welcomed :)
It was pre valentines day and kriya was resting in her room as she was hell tired due to the events taken place in the morning. She was happy coz her team won the elims and at the same time sad coz rey had lost. She was so busy the whole dat she couldn't even talk to rey properly.
(P.S kriya's mom doesn't know about her dance)
Kriya was thinking about rey and about her first Valentines day wid rey. Unknowingly a smile crept on her face on thinking about him.But her chain of thoughts were broken due some sound coming from the window. As she turned around she was shocked to see rey climbing in through the window with a packet or cover in his hand. Instead of helping him she started asking him questions
kr: Rey aap yahan iss waqt, agar maa ne dekh liya toh problem ho jaayegi n she kept on asking him questions. Rey tried to speak in between par no use. At last he got irritated n shouted
R:woah baatcutter 1 min itne ques ek saath first help in coming in
K: sorry😳...and she helped him in coming inside. Acha app yahan kyu aaye hum waise bhi kal colg mai milenge na
R: arrey yahan kyu aaye ka kya matlab tumse milna tha toh aaya aur waise bhi kal tak kaun wait karega and madam aaj pre valentines day hai toh tumhare saat spend karne aa gaya.
Kriya starts blushing.
R:u know wat tum blush karte hue bahut cute lagti ho
K:thnxx(still blushing)
R' waise baat cutter i have some thing for ur
K: kya??? excited like a kid
he first takes out a bouquet of orchids n hands dem to her.
K: wow rey orchids dey r my fav. i just luv dem.
R: I know isliye toh tumhare liye laaya hu. He den takes out a showpiece of a dancing couple in the middle of a glass ball just like the one in d3 and gives it to her. kriya was dumbstruck on seeing it.
K: beautiful...its the only word she could utter.
R: baat cutter iss show peice joh couple hai dats us. She immediately hugged him n tears were rolling down her cheeks. Rey could sense dat she was crying. he immediately cupped her face n asks har
R: kya hua kriya y r u crying tumhe yeh gifts pasand nhi aaye. She cuts him in the middle and says
K: rey muje yeh gifts bahut pasand aaye hai its just dat aaj tak muje kissi ne bhi itna special feel nhi karvaya. Thank u sooo much rey
R: shh stop crying and u know wat tum mereliye bahut special ho. And here starts hamare kriyansh ka LLHH wid bg as oho hoo wala tune.But it was broken by smriti.
Sm:kriya beta zara yahan toh aana
K:aayi mom. she tells rey to hide and goes out
Sm:kriya mujhe abhi pune ke liye jaana hoga n i'll be back in 2 days., toh tum ghar par akeli reh logi
k: mom dont worry abt me i'll be fine aur aap jao nhi toh late ho jaoge. they bid byees to each other and smriti goe.
Mean while rey was listening to their convo and he gets excited coz tomorrow nite he will get to spend without any disturbance.
Suddenly Kriya enters the room and see's him smiling.
K:rey aap smile kyu kar rahe ho
R: kuch nhi bas asie hi toh chali gayi tumhari mom
K: haan...then dey keep talking about some random stuffs
At exact 11:59 pm rey takes kriya near the window.
K: rey aap mujhe yahan kyu le kar aaye.
R: vo tumhe pata chal jayega soon.
he den starts the count down 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
He den asks her to look up at the sky. As soon as she looks up fire crackers start bursting in the sky and it was written HAPPY VALENTINES DAY BAATCUTTER. those words were twinkling and sparkling in the sky. Kriya was so overwhelmed the she hugged him with all her strength. Their hug lasted long until rey broke it.
Rey: baat cutter today will be a very special day coz this is our first valentines day...lots of surprises r waiting for u.
Rey to himself it will be special kriya as im going to propose u and i know dat even u love me
K: surprises!! lekin kya
R: agar surprise bata diya toh vo surprise kaise rahega. Chalo mai chalta hu gud nite, sweet dreams n dream about me. She blushes n says
K: gud nite rey sweeet dreams to u too
R: mere dreams toh sweet honge hi after all tum jo aati ho. He turns to go but kriya stops him
R: kya hua
K: umm...vo...she immediately gives him a sweet peck on his cheeks. Rey was in complete shock for a min. He den came to his senses and looked at her, she was looking down blushing.
R:tumne mujhe sach mai kiss kiya. She just nods her head saying yes as she is feeling too shy to look at him.
K: rey ab aap jao byee
R: byee..finally he goes
Next day in the colg kriya was busy thinking about rey n their first valentines day. She enters the locker room, opnes her locker and finds a gift wid a note on it.
Note: Wear this dress and be ready by 8 pm i'll cum to pick u. We r going on a date.
She guessed dat it was from rey. she den opened the gift and found a beautiful dress inside it. Suddenly he phone rang, it was from rey.
K:hii rey
R: hey beautiful liked the dress
K: Ofcourse rey its beautiful i luv it.
R: dats gud so be ready bye 8pm.
K: hmm okk btw wer r u
R: mai rite nw busy will meet u at the nite
K: matlab aap colg aaye nhi
R: nope...acha ab rakho i have lots of work to do. bye
K:byee
Whole day she didn't meet rey as he had not come to colg. She was getting restless to meet him. Finally the nite arrived. Kriya was getting ready for theirr date.It was sharp 8pm and the door bell rang. Kriya opened it and saw rey was standing. He was looking hot and hand some as usual.(Rey was wearing the same dress as he wore in shivam's party. sorry couldn't find better than dat.) He was busy checking out kriya as she was looking stunning in dat outfit.
All rey could utter was gorgeous. At this compliment kriya blushed. She complimented him back by saying aap bhi ache lag rahe ho
R:i know dat...so baat cutter ready.
K: haan rey just 2 mins. Saying dis she went back to her room to give her self the final touch up. She was finally read and as soon as she opened the door to go out she banged into rey. She was about to fall wen rey caught her by the waist n den HHLL wid bg as zara si instrumental version from movie jannat.
He made her straight and then took her infront of the mirror. Kriya looked at him confusingly. Rey took out a beautiful diamond heart shaped pendant with KR written on it and placed it on her bare neck.
Kriya was surprised and she looked at the pendant
K: rey is sooo pretty.
R: not more than u. Kriya blushed and said thnxx
R: toh chale. He forwarded his hand and kriya shyly placed her hand in his.
Rey took her to his farm house. It was huge house or more like a palace which has garden in its back side and in the center a big swimming pool.
K:rey yeh hum kahan aaye hai. She was shocked to see such a big house.
R: yeh mera farm house.
K: rey yeh aapka hai. Its beautiful bahar se hi aisa ho toh aandar se kaisa hoga. He took her inside. She was astonished to see. The interior was completely made of white marble with huge classic painting on every wall. He then led her ro the back door through which they can enter into the garden. He took to the garden and as soon as she stepped out she was surprised, shocked, happy to see the view in front of her. All she could say was 'wow' The whole garden was decorated with white and red heart shaped balloons with the mixture of orchids and red roses. As soon as she started walking beautiful rose petals was showering on her. She was so happy dat she started twirling around inhaling the essence of the petals. The petals stopped falling when she reached the center of the garden. He had done all this just for her made her feel the so special
R: so baat cutter kaisa laga
K: Rey its just beautiful, i have no words to say, i feel like a princess.
R: dats because u r my princess. At this she hugged him tight never wanting to let him go. He too responded equally. Finally rey broke the hug said: baat cutter can we please have something im feeling very hungry as i didn't eat any thing since morning.
K: of course rey. Before going towards their table she gave him a sweet long kiss on the cheek. Again rey was lost in his world. he was questioning him self did she just do dat. gosh dis girl is making me loose my senses. His chain of thoughts were broken by kriya.
K:kya hua..ab bhook nhi lagi. They den had their dinner and kept talking about their lives n many other things.
Finally it struck rey dat they were on a date and no dance, dats not possible. He got up from his chair and went near kriya knelled down infornt of her. forwarded his hand and asked her: May i have a dance wid the worlds most beautiful lady. Kriya blushingly placed her hand on his. They danced on the song"pehli nazar" from the movie "race".
They were doing some salsa and rumba steps. At every lift rey tried his best to minimize the gap between them never breaking the eye lock. Finally the dance ended at their ending position was kriya in rey arms almost hugging. After a few mins Rey then again kneels down in front of her.
He then says kriya the very first time i saw u i felt something different. the moment i look into ur eyes i get lost in them. i can live my whole world in ur eyes. My life was incomplete with out u, but now as u have entered my life i feeling complete. My heart aches to see a smile on ur face. My day begins with u and ends with u. When u smile i feel im the most luckiest person in the world and wen u r upset i wish to take away all ur sorrows. kriya You're my sunshine after the rain, I want us to be together, in each others arms in every sunshine and every rain, I love you. Will u be my valentine forever.
On hearing dis kriya couldn't control her emotions. She immediately pulled him up on his feet and threw her hands around his neck and dug her head in his chest. She was sobbing tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks. She finally broke the hug and said I love u too rey. Rey was sooo happy that he lifter her in his arms and twirled around until he was satified. After some time he put her back on the ground and starred at those beautiful innocent eyes. He leaned forward for a kiss but stopped in between and again looked at her. She understood wat he meant and slowing she closed her eyes giving him the green signal. He then kissed her with all his might. It was a delicate and light kiss which soon turned into a passionate and wild one and which lasted sooo long.
*THE END*
Phew!!!!!! finally finished typing. Sorry if there are any mistakes or errors. Do give me ur reviews. Hit like and comment if u liked it, agar nahi bhi acha lage toh bhi comment kardo. Criticisms are also welcomed :)
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