GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57 - Page 21

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice update..

enjoyed it...

thanks alot

Originally posted by: shafyyy

THAT WAS AN AMAZING UPDATE

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: -Gunners-

lovely update...

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Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Brilliant update

Everything was just so perfect, the race, mayank's flirting😉, nupur anger😡 and the situation u created was damn good.

Fabulously written n described👏

thanks alot dear..

glad u are liking this ff
and enjoying it
thanks for liking my writings

Originally posted by: vinan2050

woo wnderfull update awsm yarr itzz too gd soo adventures

lvd the mayank damn dangerous and too gd racer .But CSI is my fav FF steal want its next part thanx for Pm

thanks alot dear..ur enjoying it i m so happy...
lolzzz... CSI cant just get out of ur mind haina... thanks for loving it

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

amazing...

it was full of thriller..

omg!!! di how cn u write so well

i mean...i was toh feeling like i m there ..watching everything on my own

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

thaks alot dear for liking
and feeling it..
hay jani thanku so much for liking the way i write...

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

VERY ENTERTAINING!

thanks alot

Originally posted by: .Divya.

very nice update Fiza... 😊

thanku dear..

Originally posted by: shria19

Awesome update:)

continue soon

thanks alot dear

Thanks a ton for liking the previous part..

Though initially I thought 'maybe its difficult for u guys to understand the track ..yet my intelligent readers'got it so well'

Rplyd to u all

though i am not sure... saw it on my dashbord.. yet

A very happy birthday Goppi..May Allah bless u with best of fortune, success, health and wealth.. and happiness always surrounds u' God bleess u

Fiza

Ups!!!!!!
sry Api...mujhe laga hi tha kahin maine seq kharab toh nhi kar diya.
sry again...
love u lods...🤗🤗🤗

ps: hw is Suja apu now???

Chapter: 10

Mayank: leave me..i can do it alone..

Benz signal everyone not to stop him, he made his way in between on all the girls that were drooling hugging ..and seducing him… he got on his car, and with a sharp noise got himself down to the road….

Samrat: what I thought it party time…

Ben: we will do it dude.. as our champ is not at all gona do so…and if u actually tried to make him.. ur dead.

Nupur: what actually has got into him…

Ben: dono .but its something big…he never hurt anyone like this …evr..anyways… I didn't knew that u were dam good nupur..

Nupur: I am dude… the best..

Samrat: common lets celebrate… it after a year my sweetheart is on the track..

Nupur: without the driver…

Samrat: we shall goo..and from there we will try to call him ..

Ben: he wont cum..i know him… plus he will be needing time alone at home to…so guys chill and celebrate…

The reach the pub and was dancing and enjoying the whole ambiance… getting drunk, having fun was all ben and saint was doing.. nupur who has her mind somewhere else.. asked them that she is leaving…as she knew now or than she will be leaving home alone today as both of them will take there fun to different level…

Reaching home she parked her car, and saw the garage lights on..she shocked her head knowing he must be there … reaching there she saw him, repairing the damages on the body of the car… tires were out… and he was removing the dents…and that so doesn't seems to be in good mood…

She went inside and foots made him knew who can be here..

Mayank: u didn't have party…

Nupur: why u didn't joined us…

Mayank: I wasn't feeling like

Nupur: why u were not feeling like to party… girls were missing you…

Mayank: I don't care..

Nupur: and what the reason of not feeling like, not so care..mood..

She said in exactly mimicking his tone…

He chuckled an turned to her… cleaning his hands..

Mayank: hmm..and why r u so interested…

Nupur: why u were so interested….

Mayank: forget it… right now I am hungry…he pouted..

Nupur: hmm… here u go..

Mayank: oh wao someone brought food for me…waoo.. aha..i am liking it…

Nupur: huh.. ur imagination..

She made her way out and he followed her..

Mayank: I thought someone was giving me company…

He said sitting on the grass…

Nupur: alteast clean ur hands …. Ur so yuck..

Mayank: whts so yuck…the smell pf petrol is so good…see..its actually a delicious

Nupur: errr…

She set beside him and he was enjoying his meal..

Nupur: why u did it..

Mayank: what I did.. eating the grease

Nupur: no almost killing Jacob…

Mayank: his jaws got stiffen…. And the anger was again on his face… he didn't said anything at all yet he was stiff…

Cant u ignore

Nupur: no…

She was patient to listen, she knew he will speak, and she want him to speak himself…

Mayank: Jacob was classmate at high skool… I was a different person than…. A sweet, nerd, book worm

Nupur: WHAT…no way it cant be..i thought u must use to skip highskool to go n check the tracks..

Mayank: I use to have gr8 love for cars and race…I use to.. but not like a racer, yet I always had the love for drive.. I am driving from 13..

Nupur: too old… I did that in 12.6

He chukled..bad girl

Mayank: I use to be a good boy.. have love for studies.. the only aim that use to have was to be an automobile engineer.. I have put everything, my everything getting that aim.. toped at mid skool but I didn't got the scholarship…so I wasn't enrolled in a good highskol rather was in the oky one… but I didn't got dishearten… but than toping at highskool.. and than at the scholarship exam … I was the only candidate to be given the scholarship…

Dad n mom had all there attention on me, I was actually on high pressure…have use there all money..and wasn't giving to much at home…I hardly get time to work but I use to try… but even than… sigh

I was called for interview and I was full on prepared… and I was positive I have no reason to get reject.. but I did got rejected.

Nupur: why…

Mayank: cause of my name …mayank shrama… I was of third world…and they donot want to loss there money on some outside..

Nupur: racist.. wht

Mayank: Jacob was the other candidate…son of the director of uni.. just passed ..he was given the scholarship… I called them no use.. pleaded argued and they clear cut said I am not one of them.. so get out of the office. I was actually actually thrown out of the office… excused of using offensive language against the professor… were I landed was infront of Jacob.. and he kicked right here ..right here on my face…

He actually pointed it out… nupur was keenly listening and watching him.. siting beside him.. she was herself chocked.. this kinda things exist but to that extend.. his seriousness was effecting her… somehow she realize she didn't like him this way, serious, so carefull, and abit in pain too

Mayank: as I fought a lot with them and get a mark of being offensive with the prof..she was a prof…so getting enrolled sumone where was not easy..

Nupur: than

Mayank: it was the day that turned me completely… Jacob actually humiliate me a load of that and help the people to threw me out of campus…I was nerd that time have nothing like that to fight .. dad n mom also kicked me out…click… he chukled…

So I landed on street , the best I knew was all about cars.. so strt working at garage…met ben.. .and than went for street racing… today it all cum back infront… Jacob there.. I want to kick him off …I so want to kick him of the track … now I had the power the guts to kick him back on his face.. I had that all… and I did it..

Nupur: but this all didn't mean that u strt hating your own self..

Mayank: watch it lady no body make me hate myself..

Nupur: oh really ..than why u changed ur name..identity..u urslef

Mayank: I didn't change myself…

Nupur: but u strt hating ur identity… why.. just because… they were not reasonable to u… u made urself one of them.. rather making urself unique…

Mayank: I don't made myself one of them..but I cant make myself hate my identity.. if even than I wasn't mayank Sharma..i would have be somewhere else…

Nupur: and u regret where u r now…this ridiculous mayank..

Mayank: why just cant u stop calling me that

Nupur: cause u don't hate calling me u that.. u want to live in delusion..that ur not wht ur …u cant deny u r mayank Sharma…mackz.. is just a lie ur living with..

Mayank: and it has given me all that mayank can never have given

Nuupur: really…didn't mayank gave u the knowledge that made u work when u have nothing to do… didn't maynk has given u sense of relaxation that u did and u had made….

Mayank: he was looser and mackz is a winner

Nupur: he wasn't a losser… he was a winner..as he lived with himself..with truth.. he didt and almost achieved wht he want..

Mayank: almost.. he laughed..

Nupur: u wont agree … but think about it… u r running away from urself maya…okay fine mackz.. were is ur family..

Mayank: at NY…

Nupur: u didn't meet them…

Mayank: no…

Nupur: sigh…

There was silence between them as he was actually think wht he did just few moments ago…why he said it all to her… wht actually he did..but it felt gr8.. it felt so much good… he didn't regret it…nobody even not ben knew anything regarding this… he looked at her who was looking at the sky..

This girl had made him feel differently, so different that he feel like going evry way to let her be beside him…feels like pulling her close right here..

Nupur who was thinking wht got into her that she said that all to him, she should get so much effect with wht he think and what not.. why he is low..and when he smiles …she doesn't want to do so…not at all….but somhow unknowingly its happening … she was aware of the way he was gazing at her.. but next shudder her so much

He caressed her cheeks with the back of his finger..puting his gaze on her…. She turned and look towards him.. and was getting lost in the moment…

Without removing his eyes from her…he kept his fingers travel on her skin.. made her abit weak….but than he leaned down at her..and abruptly bring her close to him griping her waist…taking her lips in a kiss.. initiated just as a touch of lips….turned to wild expression of passion..

as she griped his collar n his hand were making havoc of emotions in her.. he crashed her in his arm..moving his hand on her back..rubing her pulling her more close..… making it more deep…. His other hand was caressing her neck softly..making her loss it completely…her hand reached her hair..rufling them making him turn on… a moan escaped from her mouth and she was completely going the way he was taking him.. the slight pain of nibbling make her come back to earth..

her eyes get opened finding him completely lost in her..so close to her

She pushed him back… and he looked at her surprised..she herself was shocked of her acted.. geting up from there she want to her car. driving herself away ..and he stood up and called her ..

Mayank: crab man…nupur… he went behind her but than stop… hiting the stone in frustration

so wew are going to get an update..

Awesome update Api...
i loved it to d coreee...
dis is d first time we got to see d soft side of him n Awww...
i loved him a lott here...
Nupur is so caring abt him...
loved d way she cared n talk to him abt it all...
loved d way Mayank shared Everything abt his past life...
felt really bad for him...
Sigh!! dis actually happens till now...
n i sooo hate dis kind of cheap mentality...
spcly dont like Mayank's parents here...
so hate dis dem...
bt i loved Nupur a lottt here...
n d Ending was damn Superb and Hawttt...
loved it a lottt...
waiting for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: i hope ke Suja apu jaldi se thik ho jaye.inshALLAH😳

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Ups!!!!!!
sry Api...mujhe laga hi tha kahin maine seq kharab toh nhi kar diya.
sry again...
love u lods...🤗🤗🤗

ps: hw is Suja apu now???

its okay dear.. NP...at all mein ny bhi bht dair mein res kiya..bhool gai thi..k update k buttone press nhi kiya 😆😆

suja is geting better..per us ko weakness hai abhi kafi

mayank's life is painful. loved the update.