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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
wow so sweet and lovely . write more os
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
hey! congo on your new gallery :)

the OS was really cute! mayank was talking on the phone with a full on smile, and nupur got suspicious.

but she knew that she should trust her husband, and she did. mayank actually got a kiss too :P

oh so it was about her surprise birthday party? lol, no wonder!

thanks for the pm
do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweet & cute one
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
A beautiful OS Kinza, all the emotions potryed so beautifully. There are so many scenes I'm not satifies with at all, the CVs could have done things so much better still they ruined some beautful moments for MN.

But you've already re-created some magical scenes, like this one. That makes you forget what really happned.

Its beautiful. The way she ger anger fires up but in the she thinks cooly through it and how she every so sweetly reconciled.. Its something I wish Nupur in the show also possesed. The ability to think over things and actually apologize.

Beautifully written Kinza! Please do keep re-writing more scenes from MJHT.

Oh and the siggy/picture is really nice.
& congratulation for your 3rd gallery. :)


.SilentPrincess


-About that previous comment. I'm sorry about that, it was actually a dare.. to got write a comment like that on a romantic OS. And you couldn't tell befre 24 hours had passed. I'm sorry, I didn't mean any of it, none of your writings have ever been boring... infact. I'm glad I stumbled upon a fantastic writer as you. :)

Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Fantasia.

Okay so this is a new experiment - I wrote the OS with the picture description .. I was making a siggy, but instead ended up writing this one .. It is based after the stupid kiss fiasco -- urghh i hated that track!! .. anyways .. hope it's enjoyable!

Who's on the Phone?



"just a minute", Nupur smiled to Mayank's colleague at the landline and turned to call Mayank, but as she turned, her mouth left open.

Mayank was talking on his cell phone, with his eyes twinkling and his face flashing that breath taking smile. Nupur was in the kitchen and had come rushing for the phone call, She thought Mayank would be in the washroom, but here he was smiling and talking and completely ignoring the ringing landline.

For a moment Nupur felt herself tensed all over but a deep breath helped, "umm Mr Gupta, Mayank tu so rahe hain, he'll call back in the morning", she said sweetly and disconnecting the call, she slammed the cordless on the set.

"oho!, kis ka phone tha?", Mayank giggled.

He was over with his call by the mean time and was now smiling at Nupur, fuming even more, Nupur walked towards the bed in slow steps, "tum batao, kis ka phone tha?", she crossed her arms around her stomach and was glaring.

Knowing his wife so aptly, he could guess that Mrs Nupur Bhushan Sharma is currently jealous. He sighed at the re affirmation of his belief that something would never change.

"umm, kisi ka nahi, just a friend", he shrugged and lied down, making Nupur frown even more, "listen Mayank!, batao kis ka phone tha!", she raised her voice a bit, and this made Mayank;s temper rise as well. Opening his eyes, Mayank sighed, "nupur!, I hope we are not repeating that kiss fiasco again!", he said calmly and turned to the other side and feeling her pulse rise, Nupur just stared back.

She took a minute to register Mayank's words and when she did, She couldn't believe Mayank said that on her face. Suddenly the blood in her veins started pumping hard and her eye pockets getting started feeling moist. Threating to break down in an audible crying, she quickly went away to change.

Standing in the front of the mirror, she splashed cold water. Tears didn't flow with the speed she had expected, but something was paining her heart, and she wanted to go back to Mayank. Returning in her night suit, she quietly lied beside and obviously sleep was no where.

She knew she had behaved unreasonably during the kiss fiasco, but that was obviously over. She never doubted Mayank, and neither did she ever spied him, it was that .. it was that she was always curious about him, always worried about him, always wanting to know what was he doing, always!

But that was irritating, she knew that was irritating, still couldn't control her habit. Taking a brief trip down the memory lane, she realized that it had always been her habit, to budge and over power, and it was Mayank who always compromised and understood.

Taking a deep breath, she stole a look at his sleeping picture. Apparently he was sleeping calmly, she smiled at his peaceful look, and biting her lip, carefully moved close to him.

He was such a perfect handsome man, a blessing any girl could ask for, and tonight, he was looking much hotter in his vests. Sighing Nupur scolded herself. Why did she always had to do this? Why couldn't she just calm down and give Mayank his personal space, but then again, there shouldn't be any concept of personal space in a married couple, but if not personal space, then surely trust and patience was what marriages are based on - no correction - happy marriages are based on.

She smiled at her realization, and again too impatient to wait till morning, she carefully placed a sloppy kiss on his cheek and he moved in sleep, "love u ..", he mumbled and placed his arms around her and completely taken by surprise, she whispered, "I love you too", she was about to kiss him again when Mayank interrupted and she was left shocked,

"hope this is not an attempt to inquire about the phone call", he observed her and feeling a displaced breath, Nupur licked her lips, and smiled, "it is not Mayank, I trust you", she smiled and before he could say anything, she pecked his lips and snuggled and closed her eyes, "good night!, I love uu".

Mayank was left but no option but to smile, "good night", he said and hugged her back, closing his eyes, no doubt his attempt to hide the phone call of her surprise birthday party had brought him some life lasting favors!.



👏 👏 👏 👏 LOVE THE BANNER! FANTUU DI LOVED THE OS! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Hallo sweets!! ..
Long long time i know!! .. but just couldn't decide upon what to write .. today just randomly penned down on a scene after nupur's return after 3 years. Damnit that was one hell of a painful time!! .

Infinite love.


It was almost midnight, when tossing and turning in bed; Nupur finally gave up and carefully stepped out. She was fully aware of Mayank's tensed expression if he would not find her beside him at this hour of night, but she couldn't help because she was being suffocated.

It was 3 years, so much had moved forward, Mayank was a rich man now, bungalow, cars, luxuries, he had everything, but his eyes were still searching, even though she was back, still his eyes were searching. He was happy she knew, but not content, he wanted more out of her, and it wasn't wrong if he did. She came back after 3 years, 3 torturous years, and now he did want everything back, everything normal. He tried his best to understand, to give time, and it would be unfair if she had complains from him. She wasn't complaining, it was just she wanted to erase those 3 years. Was it possible?. Erasing three years, a whole dark chapter of life, moving in an allusion that nothing happened. It happened damnit!!. Everything worse which could happen happened!.

She sighed and placed her hand over her stomach. It was unfair to the new life as well. Her child should have made her happy, but after a momentary excitement, she was left with insecurities. Insecurities of all sorts, even this that was she left mentally stable to nurture a child or not. Her over protectiveness, her fear from everything was not normal and she knew. Although Mayank catered her with all the love he had, but still she knew she wasn't behaving normally, she craved for loneliness. She craved for loneliness to cry, because crying in front of anyone meant paining them, and she didn't want to pain any of her loved ones. Not at any cost.

Her face was wet by know, her long tears travelling down her throat. Glancing at the clock made her realize that it was almost 2 hours since she was standing here. She should go back, she thought. It won't be nice if Mayank would find she was not in bed, and then answering his queries may end up into a fight because she would try to avoid and which he won't allow.

Vigorously and helplessly wiping her tears, she turned and silently crept into the bed by his side. He had changed posture and his arm was inviting to cuddle to him. She hated this apprehension she had started feeling lately but over coming it, she slowly snuggled, burying her head in his chest.

She expected him to hug back for sure and he did, instantly, but what she didnt expect was what he said, that too in a voice which was not sleepy, a voice which told maybe he was awake since two hours.

"next time you creep out of bed, remember taking a shawl, it's cold nowadays", he wrapped her properly in his arms and taking a deep breath, she cried again. Till time she couldn't keep track off, but she did keep track of the number of kisses and strokes she was showered upon, which were infinite - just like his love.

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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API...🤗
Missed ur writing lodsss


SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dat was sooo damn Beautiful...
i jst loved dat to d coreee...
hw m missing MayUr nowadays only i know...
n hw can we forget abt dos days...
i sooo hated CV for not showing dis scenes n ending it like dat...dat too sooo soon...sigh!
well...i was feeling really sad in d starting bt at d end i had a Big smile on my face wid Tears in my eyes...sigh!!!
dis is d only Reason why i love Mayank sooo very much...
his love for Nupur is something dat can nvr be explained...
loved it to BITS...sigh!!
Awww...m missing dem like hell now...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: plzzz come back wid ur new ff plzzz...
m Eagerly waiting for urs n Mehak API's come back...plzzz

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That ws beautiful..
I ws feeling that mayank knows nupur wsnt there but he wsnt willing to make her situation worsen...she needed some time alone to shed tears nd he gave her that nd the way he kept his arms open fr her left me in awee...he is such a caring hubby...
Loved this os...
Plz write more...
Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
short but absolutely beautiful...ive read so many versions of post-nupur's return os's so i didnt know if i would like it simply because i didnt know if it would be any different...but that last paragraph totally made this one a winner 😃...thanks for writing again on our original mayur 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Sigh! That was an utterly beautiful shot <3 I miss MN :(

x x

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