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Hey rose!🤗
Okay, first of all, the siggee created by Sonee, beautiful it is⭐️
Hmm, so this time it's faasle darmiyan👏 (good, between him and other girls faasle is a must..lol)
As a reader, this experiment of yours, (having the updates as narratives of the leads) is immensely entertaining, but at the same time, it must be really tough yaar, I mean to show the take of both of them on the same issue, is just like writing the same sequence twice, making them sound completely different to each other.
Oh! The pain naku is bearing was quite evident, it makes me pleasantly surprise (read shocked..lol) that naku has managed to garner more of my concern than dutta, and the way she's dealing with all the painful changes his life is going through, it makes me more n more empathetic. The very first para itself managed to strike some chord in me, and now I feel totally connected to her.
So, they don't have meals together. Dining has always been a remarkable aspect of tasha's relationship .So, no points in guessing that soon in the future you'll make them share a meal, but the way the details of their isolated eating, or the fact the dutta doesn't consume the food prepared by her is mentioned, I guess there's something special in your mind regarding their having food together. So, she's into stitching, I thought dancing (as my earlier prediction of singing flopped..lol), but nevertheless stitching is good too, after all dutta's heart needs to be mended..lol. It says that dutta has a small n loving family, does it mean that no kala, leela, roops n their hubbies this time? Not that I complain or miss them..lol, I just wanted to know that whether they not at all exist in the FF or they are part o it, but hadn't made an entry yet.? I quite liked the way she noticed the wall he has created between himself n his family but what I liked the most was her concern over him being a loner.
LOL, he came in carrying his trademark whiskey bottle,😆
seriously it's so funny. OMG, sweetheart is hurt, why rose why?😭 Oh! I can totally imaging that groan that escaped from those sexy lips, in fact Mishal's voice is ringing in my ears😳. I loved where he said, that being DSP's wife she needs to get habituated with all this. With sups she only shared the silky smooth aspect of his life, where as with naku he's sharing the harsh rough ones, he doesn't realize that this will help them bond at a completely different level.
Lovely baji naku sequence, any girl not well acquainted with duji is bound find some of their traits weird,...lol I'm glad you mentioned it.
Now, the marham patti scene, I loved how he resigned in front of her, but ye kya back tak toh theek tha, but the neck….., I mean did I said that I'm concerned for this girl?? I take it back😡…she's so chaalo, she trying to milk the situation by exploiting my sweetheart😡, rose do something. But this whole neck nursing sequence if on screen, would be an oo la la scene..lol
So, she hates rain, courtesy her past, I guess this is first time that your female lead has a disliking towards rains. Irony indeed, they both hate rains, and the rain is the only witness of their first proper conversation. LOL, Hardly afraid to open my mouth in front of him😆
that's what I guess, connects me to her. Aww…he noticed the void in her eyes, he's a sweetheart in every single sense. So, she chose to keep her pain to herself only, wicked you, raising our curiosity regarding her past..lol,
two gestures, of dutta, that caught my attention, one, when he drank the liquor before speaking, and the other one where he shook his head in defeat, though small these two enhanced the effect of the sequence.
Okay, where it has been mentioned that naku has her meals onece he finshes his, just because she thinks that it's one of her marital duties, I loved it, naku is a traditional girl, with modest education, she's bound to take marriage like this, but still she's bold when it comes to opining herself, has a self esteem, doesn't throws herself in the feets of dutta, just because he'sher pati parmeshwar, a misconception most of the people have about girls belonging to small towns or those who are modestly modern in appearance! thank you for not keeping it that way. Why I think that whatever she does doesn't goes unnoticed by dutta.
I loved the way he shooed her away, when she tried to raise the topic of his neck again in the morning..😆
The kitchen scene is absolutely fanastic, poor girl must be hurt, but still she only felled, would I ever hear "Aishwarya" I'll have a heart attack for sure. Though she too is having side effects in the form of constanct ringing of his voice in her ears.
Liked the whole sequence where she cleared to him that what "S" stands for, but more eager to know dutta's perspective on this issue.
I know how much you loved to leave a smile on your readers face with your endings, but trust me this time too they are no less fab, the kind of melancholic effect these two three lines manage to deliver, often amazes me
Well that was all from my side. Thank you for the wonderful update
Waiting for the next❤️ (which will be soon..lol)
@promo: I was about to ask about one, update soon!
P.S. About the most important thing aka SR, I don't mind who ever narrates it, as long as dutta gets his football team.😉
I appreciate that the money issue will take to settle, even I want the same!
?she's so chaalo, she trying to milk the situation by exploiting my sweetheart
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