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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Nice update..story is on track😉 feeling bad for Nupur's navigator...gang rape...this kinda sick mentality is disgusting...what else can I say for such boys..!


Like Mayur convo though,Mayank is really impossible😆 but I like him.
continue soon.



thnks laot dear

ya its just sick...more than that...cant just imagine wht kinda fun it is,...err

thnsk fro liking him
he so thats why u all r liking him and i m really feeling good...thnku

Originally posted by: vinan2050

heyy nice update and nw slwly swly mysteries of nupur and mayank lfs are opening gd

plzz post nxt part asap thanx fr Pm




yup...mystry are revealing
so ur geting flavor of csi no need of it now hain na

glad ur enjoying
will update soon



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Excellent part...
The news of nupur's navigator shocked nd sadden me...it ws just unbearable...
And who wr those idiots at the last nd what wr they talking abt?Now as mayank getting on track again that too with nupur as his navigator im damn excited...
Go mayur go...U haav to winn...
Loved this part dii..
Cont soon...




thnks a lot dear

ya it is unbearable yet all this happen..and we cant deny its..just more than sick...
u will know who are those people...
hope u like the race part.cuming up
will cont son dear


Originally posted by: parul_bansal

nic update..

aww nupur's navigator's past..i felt bad..
n nupur with mayank hayee yeh hui na baat
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u



thnks alot dear

lol...hope u like it further too



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

loved it dear...


this mayank is just too mch...but i love him...




thnks alot

Originally posted by: mayurlove

Very nice update.I m feeling very sad for Nupur's Navigator.I m happy that Mayank brought her back in race.Thnx for pm. 🤗




hm i know it sad...
glad ur enjoying


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Posted: 13 years ago
THANKU ALL...RPLYD TO U ALL...HOPE U ENJOY AND UNDERSTAND THIS ONE

Chapter: 9

He was trying to grip him when the oraginzer came and asked evry one to take there position…. Yet his blood was rising and he was feeling right now killing them …

It was hell, dam hell.. he hit his staring and grip it with both his hand..

Nupur: mackz..she put her hand on his shoulder….concentrate on race ..just concentrate on race.. its about to strt and there is no second chance…

He looked at her hand and than to her.. yet a boy arrived and gave her the map…

Mayank: I am fine..open it..

Nupur: ur sure..

Mayank: ya..

They opend the map and it was weird..there were all code pictorially written but she was easily getting it…

Nupur: fish..

Mayank: wht..

Nupur: you have to reach the top …on the roof top…there will be the finishing line…. we are not gonna take the main route from 10 floor.. from there we have a route..if we missed that than the route at 15 is higly dangerous and we will have to take it…this will be only way to get in lead… u have to be in top three to get a good place on the start of track for the second round…so lead is important… plus it add bonus points…

Mayank: okay..just guide me when it cums…

Nupur: get ur nerves back… its very tricky..

Mayank: sweetheart.. he turned to her side, placing his hand on her head rest leaning close to her… …just donot worry… I am fine…

Nupur: God.. ..she shocked her head ….ya I can see it..

Okay the cars were set to race..they were 15 cars…the strting track was a wide as it was the area were cars are parked….…yet as soon as they will strt the ramp that will lead to them to the next level that will be narrow, and hardly can give space to three cars…

evrytime they will reach a floor the cant continue to go up using the same ramp..they have to go through whole of the parking area and will take the ramp on the other side

How is that…they have to take at one floor the exit ramp and on the other floor the entrance ramp…this makes and gaves the racer a chance to get the lead …or to beat each other..

Okay guys the race will strt in few mins…

Benji: we are at the upper floors guys…and are watching u through the cameras ..so any guideline u want u can have…

Nupur: sure.. benz… just let us know abt the leads….and clearance of emergence exit at 10 floor…

Benji: sure…

Okay we can start the race now…our boys has engaged police at the bar…we have 45 mins…

The organizing gang has put a fight on the nearby pub, so police was busy in handling it…

The race began in 3….2….1….go

They put the accelerate on and as planed mayank put it on rushing speed, hit the NOS…making him in lead..yet there were few to who has this plane to… but his eyes were on someone else…

Nupur: mackz …be at extreme right…

Mayank: no everyone will do so… he put his car in middle

Nupur: u cant lead like this…

Mayank: I know wht I can do…

He put his car in middle and the racers were moving towards the ramp… he ws in middle knwing pretty well that all the racer will take the sides as it is safe and easier… the right side is less narrow and esy to cut..gives u a wider area to turn…

He was waiting for the ramp to cum…he was preety much back… nupur was boiling she has an habit of being in lead from the strt..

The ramp appear and he put his car in top gear…

Nupur: ur nuts top gear on turn..

Mayank: just hold it baby..

He put his car on the left and took the sharpest turn..hit som car that crashed on the right car..making him in a bit lead..

Benz: woh ho…maackz is back..yupiii

Okay so this new boy in the race has new stryle of racing, using the NOS at the strt soo cool, yet taking the cut from the wrong side…was actually dam cool… looks like we actually have some one to make jack …be carfulll.

Nupur: that was cool

Mayank: I am dear…. Hi haaa…. I love it…

He was not in lead lead ..yet he was in good postion..it was difficult evrytime ur car gets the speed the ramp came and u have to control it… it was hard.. u have to be very careful…

It was the 9th floor and his eyes were on Jacob..

Mayank: benji were is the the no 7

Nupur: no mackz just race…

Benji: at 9 th right in front if u …he is there at 5th position..

He moved his car more faster and now he was just beside the Jacobs(the boy that was saying him nerd) car… it was the 10th floor..

Jacobs car had spikes/notch all around the sides, who ever was touching his car get a harsh damage…

Mayank looked at him.. with blazing anger..and Jacob showed his thumb up and than down to him

Nupur: mackz we are not gonna take this one ..we need to go throw the emergence exit ramp one… its only open here.. u can't do this..u will loss the lead….

Mayank: right now..i want him off the track nothing more than this…

The ramp was just appearing near and there car was inching apart…

Nupur: its ridiculous.. wht the hell are u upto

Mayank: u will know it… right now get on my lap

Nupur: WHAT..u have lost it or wht

Mayank: he turned to her…I said get on my lap….

Do it..or I 'll make u do it..

She has no choice neither she understand wht he is upto..

Moving his hand aside he made a way for her that she can get on him… making her back placed touching his side of window..he put his hand in either side of her..

Mayank: brace ur self lady… he smiled wickedly looking at her closely …and turn his car to extreme left making Jacobs car to hit the left side of ramp wall…

Jacob was stunt at this… the side were she was siting was getting crashed badly and now she knew why he asked her to do so…though they may have not hurt her…or may have done it..but it was risky….

he kept making his car dragged against the wall…and as soon as the second turn of the ramp appear he put his car in high gear..and left Jacobs car free…

His eyes were at his back mirror to as a car was cuming from back too..he made his way to 11 th floor…yet Jacob got hit with the car from behind. .twirling in air… it hit the floor highly damaged..

He moved his hand away, asking her to get on her seat back…and she was just looking at him…wht actually got into him

Mayank: benz our position…

Benji: why u did so

Mayank: our position

Benji: god dam why u did so …u never ever have done anything like this…

Mayank: get my position dam it…

Benji: 5..

Nupur: just keep ur speed and position … we have to wait for the 15 floor…

Mayank: whats there..

Nupur: a under construction special exit ramp…

Mayank: it wont be in a position to race there…

Nupur: we donot have any other choice do we have….

Mayank: how bad it is…

Nupur: at map a skull is made at there area..means maybe isn't even complete…

Mayank: what … waooo…gr8….. ..but ….we aren't taking it..

Nupur: oh pls don't strt to act like a so carefull boyfriend..i cant do this ur life will be in danger..Oh My god

Mayank: ok so how should I behave like a bad hard boyfriend…. So getting on my lap so close to me lead u to this..he smirked

Nupur: cut the crab and hit the track..

It was the 15 floor…

Benji: no way are u guys nuts..why the hell ur taking that route..its dam dangerous….

Wooo man now this wht we call gutsss.. mackz the new boy on the track has taken the ..ohhh so spooky route.. u guys wanan what it holds..

A. Its road is dam bad condition

B. Its doenst have the one side wall… and its half done so u need to take the side were if u slip from the road….dut..ur all falll down…

C. I doubt the track is complete…or not..

Benji: this sure suicide man… mackz

Samrat: u have my sister with u..

Mayank: I know… she is wiiling to dye with me… and that actually has made me do that… I can do it … don't worry I can take a good care of her…

Nupur: show off.. bro pls stop behaving so…

The whole crowd's attention was now on the mayank, the were betting on will he survive safe or not…

Mayank: benz…put the bet on …

Benji: WHT…

Mayank: ya just be there in bet too… we will get that money too… evry one will make money on my name…why shouldn't i..

Benji: right now..plsss..conc on were u are going..

Nupur; okay it's a zig zag one…from there turn left…

Turing left the tracked appear.. and it was dam dangerous

Nupur: waoo… that is soo awsum…okay take it from the left…and as soon as I said right make it right don't think..

They were on high speed and was moving actually bumping on the track, it was a horrifying view.. 15th floor, seems like ur driving in air…no side wall.. it was a waoo experience..

Mayank: beautiful man… nupsi we will have a date here…how romantic it will be.. moonlight…cold breez… waoo..heaven.. u and me.. andd ahem…wht exactly we will be doing imagine…

Nupur: ya…getting close to u and pushing u down…. gr8 idea nah and I'll throw u down.. right now…

Mayank: wht..thts not fair baby

Nupur: take right turn dam it …

He took a sharp turn and Samrat has closed his eyes..if just a second was delayed they would have gone down… there was no road in front at that track..

Nupur: I asked u to concentrate on track…okay put car on highest speed the road is missing infront … not to much.. a very little..

Mayank: oki ma'am.. what shall I do I was such in a mood

Nupur: tell me when ur not..huh…

He has put it on high speed yet it was his scenes that need to be very sharp at turns.. putting it in high speed he saw the missing part it wasn't not to much that they need to jump ..

Nupur: we have to jump over it..

Mayank: no …it will just go like that… im not making my car to get on that board..

Nupur: u have to… that board isn't placed there just like that… u have to watch the track carefully ..evrything placed has some meaning… do it…

Mayank: wht… okay fine I a doing so…

The did so and the car flyed a bit in air…

Mayank: heee haaa… hiting the ground the felt the last bit of the ground falling, m rushing from there when she looked back it actually fell down…

My god.. we didt yumiii

Nupur: waooo… hit it we need to be in lead…benz position

Benji: waooo third…hit it guys..

It was the final floor and the three of the racer were fighting to get in lead.. mayank was rushing his car, turing to different side trying to get lead from jack..he actually want to have a look at him..and he was actually checking his tactic, he was very sharp..

Nupur: u cant take lead playing cat n dog with him…u need to get dirty…

The finishing line was hited and they finished at 3rd position..

Nupur: wooo… descent finish….

Mayank: yupiii..we make it….congrats

All were celebrating

So here are the result, jack as usual in lead… with brine and mackz..the surprise entertainer tonite, who actually got all the attention today is at 3rd place..looks like we have the racer ..is jack's position in danger…maybe as his navigator is the girl who last beated him..

Benji and saint came and hugged both of them..and he use the moment to pull nupur in the side hug too..

Benz: the car needs work..

A boy came and grip mayank color out of blue…

Boy2: u thinking if ur gonna do ti ..ur free…donot thinks so ur goona pay for it….

Mayank: he hit him and made him fall on floor…. I told ur brother not to mess with me… huh..didnt I … than it wasn't in my hand …but here donot even came near me… else ..it will be hell than this… got it…

Benz: leave him mackz… lets go… just lets go.. I am going with him..saint and nups just collect money

Nupur: ya fine…

Mayank: leave I can do it myself…leave me alone


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Posted: 13 years ago
RES

BY GAWD ...MAYANK KO AYSE CRUTIAL MOMENT PE BHI FLIRTING K SUJTA HAI !!!😲

baki kya tha mujhe kuch samajh nahi aya
Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
osom...
a complete thriller...
the lap scene i know ... i loveddd that movie full of thrill
enjoyeddd it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

RES

BY GAWD ...MAYANK KO AYSE CRUTIAL MOMENT PE BHI FLIRTING K SUJTA HAI !!!😲

baki kya tha mujhe kuch samajh nahi aya




rofl

tum bus wohi samjho...
hope so sab k sath asa nah..ho...
mayank is mayank nah...

thnks for readng yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

osom...

a complete thriller...
the lap scene i know ... i loveddd that movie full of thrill
enjoyeddd it




ahh...
tht actually made me write this ff... loved it too

thnku

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Posted: 13 years ago
Woa!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn exciting part API...
i loved it to d coreee...
it was like m experiencing every bit of dat race...literally!!!
though in d starting of dat race part i wasn't understanding a bit bt later on i jst got everything n it was damn fun to read dis part as i was visualising it...😍
i jst loved it to d coreee to BITS...
n OMG!!! dis Mayank is something he was flirting even dat crucial stage...😲😆🤣😆
n i was actually imagining Nupur pushing him down from der...🤣
dis MayUr r Awesome...
so different n sooo damn amazing...
m loving dis a lottt
loved it to d coreee
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws so entertaining nd exciting...
I ws panicking whether mayur cud win or not...But yuppiii they did it...they got the 3rd posi...
And this mayu na...flirtatious ever...😆...but the techniques he followed ws dangerous yet useful...it made them win...nd woaa nupur ws also enjoying it...
And oye hoyee the lap scene...Louveed it...i cud surely visualize nupur on his lap..ahem ahem...😆
Now just want their real love-story to start...i think u hav planned something in ur mind...
So cont soon dii...
Love u..<33
Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago

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