VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by snehamaanvirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello all lovely people anyone remember me let me stop with my nonsense so I know I haven't updated in ages I might be the slowest updater's ever and very lazy but finally I've written anther chapter I think its longer than the usuals but not sure about the quality of it. Plus there's a lotta dialogues in this but hey what's Virman without their dialogues and conversations. Not much happens in this chapter but hopefully you guys will enjoy.

This chap is especially dedicated to Antara

Chapter 5 - I wish this path never ends

Manvi dragged herself and her bag along the rocky path of the deserted forest as she followed after Virat who was still looking for a way out. It was past midday and almost nightfall; so much had happened in that one day that it all seemed like a nightmare but it wasn't it was reality or just destiny's game. They were surrounded by the tall trees the leaves of which rustled with the breezes of wind, also making it impossible to find a route that would lead them out.

"Chep is laaammmbi si walk ka full stop kab ayega. Hum char gante se is gane jungle ke chakar kaat re hai, I don't know about you but my feet are aching." Manvi moaned unable to carry on. Virat looked at her disapprovingly he was uncertain if this girl actually lived in the right world. "Oi drama queen it hasn't even been 20 minutes since weve started walking, waise bhi tumara is jungle mein basne ka koi irada hai kya, chahon to ruk jao lekin mujhe yaha junglee janwaro ke beech nahi rehna." He told her becoming anxious and irritant at her constant complaining. Manvi's eyes widened and the thought of wild animals made her shudder she nodded her head refusing to stay when she instantly grabbed on to his arms gripping on to them forcefully.

"Nahi tum mujhe yaha junglee janwaro ke beech akele nahi chor sakte agar woh mujhe apna dinner samaj ke kaaliya toh."

"Don't worry bandariya woh janwar itna bara katra nahi lenge tumhe dekh kar woh waise bhi bhag jayenge waise yeh toh tumhara hi ghar hai na." Manvi had her arms folded and she stood straight with her head slanted to the right, she raised her eyebrow and looked at him with a slightly confused expression. "Aise kyu dekri hon bandari jungle mein hi rehte hai na, ya phir tum koi zoo mein rehti hon." Virat smirked sarcastically before he continued "waise idea bura nahi hai yaha se nikal ne ke baad mein tumhe koi zoo mein chor dunga insaano ko ckor ke janwaro ko apni ye gissi pithi bhato se pakaana." Manvi looked at Virat with a cold fiery expression her eyes burning with fury she was breathing hard and her hands curled into fists she released the fists and pointed her finger at Virat whilst she began to speak. "Kya, kya kaha mein aur bandar tumne abhi tak mujhe achi tara se jaana nahi" she moved towards him threateningly "Tum mujhe Manvi Chaudhury ko zoo mein choronge usse pehle mein tumhare tukre tukre karke yaha pe jo janwar hain unko kiladongi aur usse pehle tumhara khoon chus lungi."

"Chill maro bandariya mein mazak kara tha hmm Manvi Chaudhury ha akhir tumhara naam toh jaana lekin tumhe suit nahi karta tumhare liye bandariya, der futiya ya phir jaasi ki rani hi teek hai." Virat laughed mockingly. "Haha joke tha"

"Nahi toh, waise tum mujhe nahi puncho ghi"

"Urr kya"

"Mera naam"

"Poonch ne ki kya zaroorat mujhe tumhara naam toh already pata hai CHEP!!"

"Bande ka naam Virat Singh Vhadera hai"

"Virat ya job hi hon raho ge tum Chep hi."

"Bagwaan mujhe kis janam ki saza dera hai is pagal ladki ke saath pasa ke, ab hum chale abi tak hum is jungle mein hi hai." Manvi stood still with her arms still crossed she looked at Virat deviously as he walked away. Virat stopped and turned back to see Manvi stood still he sighed knowing that this journey was going to be like hell, he effortlessly walked back towards her before asking what she wanted. Manvi looked down at her bag which was lying casually on the floor. Virat followed her eyes down to the lifeless object unsure of her intentions he looked back up at her and rolled his eyes. "Mera bag" Manvi told him. "I can see that" Virat replied sarcastically. "My hands are very sensitive and are aching so I want you to carry it for me." Virat one of his eyebrow and looked at her with an unusual smirk he pointed his finger at himself then towards Manvi. "You want me to carry your bag" Virat said emphasising on the words me and your, he then broke in to a hysterical laugh. "Mein mazaak nahi kari mein iske saath aur nahi chal sakti"

"Toh yaha chor do mene kab roka"

"Isme mera sara saman hain I can't leave it here in case you don't remember mein gar se bhag kar ayi hoon"

"Maine kaha ta gar se bhagne ke liye."

Manvi tilted her head to one side and gave him a flattering smile as she begged "please" she said in the most innocent voice that would come out of her. Virat was lost in her innocence for a few seconds his heart melted at her innocence "Fine" he told her picking up the bag and instantly dropping it. "What the? Iss mein kya tumne patar barker rakha hai itna bari kyu hai" Virat asked questioningly. "Mera saman hai aur kya. Ab hum chale" Manvi replied shrugging her shoulders. "Virat again picked up the bag but hesitantly he placed it onto his right shoulder and walked ahead of Manvi who danced around in cheerfulness.

*****

Virat stopped walking "OH FISH!!" He said in shock as his eyes almost popped out he began banging his head on a nearby tree. "Kya hua" Manvi asked unaware of the reasons behind Virat's crazy actions. Virat stopped banging his head and held Manvi's face and turned it to make her face a Car. Manvi smiled "Gari ab hum yaha se drive karke ja sakte hai."

"Hi pagal ladki yeh meri gari hain jiska tyre meri zindagi ki taara flat ho chuka hai tum iska matlab janti ho hum joh ye itne chakar kat rahe teh woh circles mein te hum gol gumke wahi jaaga agaye jaha se humne shuru kit hi." Manvis smile turned into a frown "Kya!!" she shouted in shock before began to sob."Sab tumhari vaje sai hua hai ab hum kya kare"

"Phir se koshish karte hai rasta doond ne mein chale."

"Ab mein age chalongi aur tum mere peeche aana." Manvi told him as she began to walk hastily along the pathway. "OUCH!! Ahhh" she screeched dropping on to the ground.

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Edited by Jafrina_luvs_KM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update :)
please PM me next time :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kajenvirman

nice update :)
please PM me next time :)

thank you hun and i sure will pm you hun
thank you your comments are much appreciated
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aesem update dear...thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
woowww it was amazing i enjoyed every bit of it great work n thank u for pm😃

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