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Posted: 13 years ago

shonu we want update...
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PART 29 ok frnds!em here wid the update!em sorry made u guys w8 4 long!n i hope u knw y!i em ol most ov the day cx i hv 2 prepare ma assignments n presentations on net n i open IF side by side thou em nt so active.. so cx ov ur prayers em f9 nw..nw enuff ov my bak bak!!enjoy the update this updat z dedicated 2 my dearies poppy,meow,asma n nams...
n thnks a lot 2 ma othr readers n commentators 4 mkng ma ff a success!!
they were sleeping peacefully in each othr s arms around the fire.the environment ws so peaceful n serene!!kriya changed her side n her nose striked rey s bt tat dint wake her up n a sweet smile crept up on her face.the fire ws lit n all were more or less lyk tat(in each othr s arms,romance in the air)
darkness ws all over n they cukoos were cuking n owls were making hoo hoo sounds..
as the light ov the morning spread out,the fire extinguished as woods hav completely burnt out!the sunlight ws causing irritation in kriya s eyes so she hid herself in rey s shirt.rey felt her touch n his grip around her back became stronger.he ws enjoying her evry feel n touch evn in his sleep.they were inches apart n her breath ws nw fallng on his neck.it ws giving both goosebumps.she furthur changed side n their breaths were mixing wid each othr.this made him awake n he made himself away 4m her so tat his breaths may not awake her.then his eyes fell on her face.it ws so calm,peaceful n innocent like a small kid.he kept on gazimg her n drooling over her
REY S POV
my bc z so cute,juvenile n lovely!i wish i cn make her happy 4evr!!may ur smile nvr vanishes!universe jee!plx take all ma happiness n giv it 2 her n giv all her sorrows 2 me!!!
bc wen ll u b mine only 4evr??i thnk i shud propose her n talk 2 our parents abt fixing the marriAge!!
his ws still in his trance wen his phone rang.this broke his trance n her sleep.she woke up.he quickly picked up the fone
r:hi!who z this?
V:hi bro its me vick
r:hi!wazzup?
v:bro!u dint come home last night.i came 2 chk u thr bt it ws locked
r:o ya!i came here 2 celebrate ma brthday wid ma frnds at their farm house
v:ok!so z bhabhi wid u??
r:ya!
v:ok talk 2 u later bye bre
r:bye chotey!!
v:bro!dnt call me chotey
r:ok ok
n he cut the call
(rey s wrd chotey ws lyk an electric current 2 kriya n she remembred ov her childhood love:her teddy!!he used 2 call his younger bro chotey bt she dismissed tat thot ov her mind as it cn b anybody who cn call this 2 his younger bro)
rey aftr the call:hey bc!whr r u lost?
k:well nowhr!y dint u made me meet ur youngr bro?
r:well i ws planning ov mkng u meet ma whole family!
k:really??
r:ya!
(kriya z a shy type person n she doesnt like meetng new ppl so she z bit hesitant bt she doesnt wnt 2 mk rey upset so she z pretending she wanna meet his family)
r:bt b4 tat bc smthng z pending
k:wot??
r:my brthday kiss
kriya hit him on the shoulder:eagle u r becomng v naughty!!stop it!!
rey makes a puppy face:cmon BC instead ov gvng me a kiss u r beatng me up
k:ok ok i ll giv u!prms bt nt infront ov evry1 like this
r:tats like my sweet bc!ok baby!i ll w8 4 it
kriya smiled cutely
(nw 2 cut short the party ended!em bored ov writing abt party scenes as i hav lot more scenes in mind wich cnt b used in party)
it ws midnight wen they came bck on rey s bike 4m the farm house 2 her hostel..he stopped his bike infront ov her hostel n she rode off.he held her arm wen she tried 2 go..n brought her closer 2 him
r:hey bc!tats cheatng!u promised na?
k:wot promise??i dnt remember
r:dnt try 2 b over smart or else u knw wot cn i do!look em warning u!
k:ok ok no anger
n she came closer 2 him n closed his eyes wid her hands n then she cupped his face wid her hands,closed her eyes n brushed his lips slightly.then she tried 2 move apart.rey caught her head wid his hands n brought his lips closer 2 hers n took her lower lip in his mouth n sucked it.she opened her mouth 2 give him more access.he kept on licking n sicking her mouth n their tongues met!!his tongue ws now brushing over her hard pallate n hers ws touching his cheeks..they were totally into the moment wen her phone rang(ye phone b na!always rings at the wrong time.)
she seperated 4m him,took a breath n answered the call
k:ok ok i em cmng nams!thnks 4 tellng me(nams z nt a negatv charactr bt she z her frnd who z helpng her out savng her 4m warden s wrath as its 2 late)
namscn u do me a favor?ask poppy 2 open the bck door,meow 2 cover the front door n asma 2 mk the warden bzzy or else em in gr8 trouble.plx do this nams.fast!!
nams:y u always act as a scared cat kriya??nthng ll happen n no need 4 all tat!u come 4m the bck door
k:no nams!plx cover evrythng.wot if i got caught??ma reputation ll b endangered.plx nams
nams:ok ok i ll do it.u plx come soon
k:ok cmng
r:y do ur frnds always destroy our romantic moments??
k:cmon eagle!they r really v nyc!infact nams calld me 2 tell tat the warden z on round.if she sees tat em nt around,i ll b in hot water definitely!!
r:OK ok u go BC!ll c u 2moro
k:bye eagle
r:bye n love u
n she went inside.as per instructions they were coevring every side 4 her..
k:thnks a lot ma dearies nams,meow,poppy n asma 4 saving me 2day.it d hav been impossible widout u guys
meow:cmon kriya!its ok!!no need ov thnks
poppy:bhala apnoon ko koi thnks kehta e kia??
asma:kriya!she z right!aftr all we r ur frnds na!!
nams:n thr z no sorry or thnks in frnds
all:chal ab hug de hamain
n they all went into a grp hug!!
shonu came 4m bck..(sorry guys!cudnt stop myself!iss grp mein main na hun ye kxe o skta??😳)
sho:n me??y dnt u guys leave space 4 me??
k:cmon shonu!u also join us
n thr ws a grp hug again
(nw guys wont u like sme swaron??😆so here it z)
swayam ws standng outside the shop w8ng 4 sharon 2 complete her shopping(tats her fav hobby)wen sharon calld 4m inside
sh:swayam plx come inside
sw:sharon hw much tym do u need more???its almost 2 hrs nw.lets go 2 coffee shop
sh:come inside!nw!!
sw:ok madam
n he went inside the shop
sh:look z nt this shirt cool??i like tat so much n i wanna buy it 4 u!!
sw:bt...
sh:no ifs n buts!!just go 2 changng room n wear it n show me!!
sw:ok madam
n he went inside n came out wid the shirt sharon gave him
sh:u r looking HAWWTT!!!
sw:thnks n he blushed
sh:oh!!wow!!blush!!
sw:shud we go nw??
sh:ya!aftr 5 mins i ve sme stuff 2 buy!!
sw:god!still anothr 5 mins!em dead nw
n aftr many 5 mins she came😆😆😆
sw:lets go 2 the coffee shop
sh:ok bt i want a cranberry juice
sw:as u say madam!!
so swayam ordered a cappucino n sharon a cran berry juice!!
nw guys this marks the end ov ma update..hope it ws a long 1 n i em upto ur xpctations!!cx thr ws lots ov romance!!
nw i wnt feedbck!any modificatn u wnt in the story??or do u like it gng this way??
n abt their consumatn scene?suggest me guys do u wnt a red hot scene??or scenes lyk i ve given b4!!if u wnt an xrated scene i cn giv u aftr dng sme research as em nt xpert😉infact no experience!!😭
so u wnt a red hot or xrated scene??red hot z lyk i ve already given n xrated ll b above n beyond tat!em askng b4 hand so i cn make up ma mind.hope i get a postv response
part 30
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres

shonu did i just read poppy in tat update
oh my god m dancing now
Shonu thnkq so much for tat love u 🤗
nd about the update its as usual awesome nd waiting for the next update but this time i cant spam i really want to but i dont have time i have my exm 2morrow nd thn i wont cum online till 2nd may
Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
spicyrays em writing!!!
kafi bada update e!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
res.
unres

Amazing update tina.
Kriyaansh scene was so cute.
Swaron Shopping was fun.
It was lovely update.
and to the scenes its ur wish feel free to write which u feel sounds better.
thanks for pm.
Update soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah i want an red hot scene😉...itna hot ki khud red hot jaljaye,😛...mai besharam bangayi..😆.and update was just awesome...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
bc and eagle kiss=me dead and gone to heaven...naughty rey .abi se shaadi ki planning.ahem ahem...swaron as usual was cute and adorable...sharon being the mistress and swayam obeying his to be princess' wishes...gud 1//////////////
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww tina u rocked it yaar man i want the 2nd optionn lets se if u can pull it off but this update was cool finally they had there kiss nyc 1 tottally will be waiting for next update and update soonn
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

kitne din ke baad diya rey...

hope everything is going fine
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye when u updatin dazzling dream...

in that kriya got amnesia looks like it got transfeered to u too :P

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