OS:Kabir and Aditi enjoy the rain(part 2)updated

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OS: ❤️ KABIR AND ADITI ENJOY THE RAIN...❤️

this is my first OS about kabir and aditi..pls forgive me for my mistakes..

PLACE: jaiswal house
characters: kabir and aditi

The clock was about to strike 11..everybody was asleep except aditi..she searched all over the house but she couldn't find kabir anywhere..the last place which was left out was the terrace where kabir used to spend most of his time..he used to sit there and work on his laptop..the gentle breeze and the glowing moonlight⭐️ ..he used to love that place..

aditi entered with an angry face towards kabir..

ADITI: "kabir tum abhi bhi yahan ho..i searched u all over the house..i knew u will b here ..afterall this is ur fav place on earth"

KABIR: "jan ❤️(he calls aditi as jan)..woh main bas... toda kaam tha isliya..i will b right back pleas go to sleep.."

ADITI: "kabir u and ur work..u r always busy with ur work..please put-off ur work..please i want to talk to u.."

KABIR: "jan..please understand my situation..kal bahut badi meeting hai..isliya teyyaari kar rahan hoon..after that meeting ..mere paas time hi time hai.."

ADITI: "u always give me excuses..FINE DO YOUR WORK I WON'T DISTURB U..BUT NEVER TALK TO ME AGAIN..I M ANGRY WITH U.." (she said in a angry tone)

KABIR: "jan meri baat suno..pls jan..plss"

ADITI: "no..i dnt want to hear anything..i m going to sleep"

she was almost near the stairs to go down..just then a tiny raindrop fell on her hand..just then she looked above..the clouds were occupied by thundering..it was about to rain in a few minutes...
she looked at kabir who was busy in his work

ADITI: "ab toh tume neeche aana hi padega..its gonna rain.."

kabir looked at the clouds..he was surprised and was disappointed that he can no more sit in his most fav place..

ADITI: "kya hua kabir..biwi ki baat nahi maanoge..toh aisa hi hoga.." (she said it laughingly )

KABIR: "ok meri maa..i m sorry..accha chalo kamre mein chalte hain..still i have a lot of work to complete.."

ADITI:(with a little shock): "tume abhi kaam ki hi padi hai..ab toh main tume yahan se jaane nahi doongi.."

KABIR: "aditi samjo...please kal ye meeting acche se ho jaaye..then we will go for dinner "

ADITI:"teek hai..give all ur love to ur laptop and files.kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki.. laptop is ur second wife"

KABIR: "jan..please please.."😔

the cloud started to rain..kabir was busy packing his laptop and files in his briefcase..

aditi was shocked to him caring for his work more. and said ."accha jao..i m going.."

just then she was to take her first step..someone grabbed her hand ,,(none other than our kabir😆),,both were wet..

ADITI: "kabir ye kya kar rahe ho tum..pls mera haath chodo..mujhe jaana hai."

KABIR:"gussa ho na mujhse"

ADITI: "haan"

kabir thought to himself "mujhe patha hai ki tume kaise manaana hai.❤️." and smiled...

shall i continue the 2 part..?

give me ur suggestions..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART- 2

Aditi scolded him and was about to go..when kabir came to near her and closed her eyes..

ADITI: "kabir..what r u doing..leave me i have to go.."

KABIR: "umm..hmmm..main tume jaane nahi doonga..i have a surprise for u.."

ADITI: "surprise..?..kaisa surprise..?" (she asked him doubtingly)

KABIR: "just wait for 2 minutes...he slowely walked with her..keeping her eyes closed.."

then took his hands off her eyes and said "TADAAA...SURPRISE.."

Aditi was completely shocked to see the surprise ...she saw a bouquet full of her fav RED TULIPS...and there was a gift below the bouquet with a card above it..all were fully covered so that it doesn't get wet..

aditi took the card..it was wriiten as..

"Jaan..from the day i saw u..i was completely smitten by ur beauty...god has gifted me a angel in the form of u..i have no words for ur love towards me..and i m speechless before ur love..because i love u so much..before u entered in my life..my life was filled with loneliness and lack of love..but after u entered in my life..I M COMPLETE NOW..."😳

when she read the last line her eyes were already occupied by tears...then she saw kabir who was holding an umbrella beside her..

kabir slowly came to her and whispered in her ears.❤️."happy wedding anniversary."❤️

aditi was completely surprised to hear this..and said "tume yaad tha.!!!!."

KABIR: "ofcourse jan..afterall this is our first wedding anniversary.."

ADITI: "but i thought.."

KABIR: "what... that i forgot our anniversary..never.."

ADITI: "happy wedding anniversary..but why didn't u tell me in the morning..i was so depressed ..i thought that u completely forgot.."

KABIR: "becaz..main is pal ko yadgar banaana chata tha..isliye..now u will always remember the moment..right.."

ADITI: "yes..thank u so much.." (she said in a loud voice)

saying that she hugged him and both were lost in love for a moment..
he gently kissed her forehead and said.."accha gift bhi kholo na.."

ADITI: "teek hai.."

then she gently opened the gift and was surprised to see a photo album...she opened with excitement..
the album was fully filled with the photos from their first meet-their wedding-their honeymoon photos...everything was perfect..
but a small place was left out at the end of the album...

she questioned him "yeh kisliye..?"

just then kabir took his camera and said ..."say cheeseee..."
he captured their pic...and said.."ab ye yahan rahega.." pointing towards the leftout place...

this made her to cry..

KABIR: "arre why are u crying..gift pasand nahi aaya..kya..?"

ADITI:"i loved it..it is the best gift of my life..but not more than u.."

KABIR: "love u aditi.."

saying that he came near to her and dropped the umbrella and told her to feel the rain drops.which were dripping on her face like the white pearls..and kabir caught hold of her waist and he took the phone and played their fav music...

started...


"
Yeh haseen waadiyaan ye khula aasmaan
Aa gaye hum kahan aye mere saajna
In bahaaron mein dil ki kali khil gayi
Mujhko tum jo mile har khushi mil gayi
"


both danced together on the rain playing their fav music,..both were very happy...then both hugged eachother

both said together ."I LOVE YOU.."..❤️


did u like it..?

Edited by crazy_world - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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...its was really romantic os!!!!!!i loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its s romantic..keep it up..great work..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG this was so f**king cute <3 ! n hell Romantic <3 ! the Kabir wala Letter <3 ! was so Awww <3 the last bit was amazing <3 !!
aliya tussi rock ji <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Manal..

OMG this was so f**king cute <3 ! n hell Romantic <3 ! the Kabir wala Letter <3 ! was so Awww <3 the last bit was amazing <3 !!

aliya tussi rock ji <3


thnk u ji.🤗.will b back with my next work tmr..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.. I hope we can watch some lovey dovey scenes from them on the show as well..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@simmy : .thnx 😊 .yeah i m too waiting for for romantic scenes but only with kabir and neha/aditi
Edited by crazy_world - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow this is awesome and so romantic love it ...hope later on the show we will get some romantic scenes between Kabir and Neha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice OS dear
loved it

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