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Posted: 13 years ago


thnku




thnku


Originally posted by: shria19

Awesome part:)
continue soon



thnku


Originally posted by: parul_bansal

nic update...

aww gud to see nupur became mayank's navigator..
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u




thnak alot dear
glad ur enjoying it

hope u enjoy it


Originally posted by: mayurlove

Very nice update.Nupur is Mayank's navigatore.They wil surely win the race.Waiting for the race.Plz cont soon.Thnx for pm😊



thnks alot dear
kya kero ..har wadoo...lol...
they will rock the track to hopefully u like the track
will cont pretty soon




thnks

kuch acha hi likha hoga tum ny


Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

super update fiza...

loved it and the plane crashed news was really terrible




thnks alot
yup dear it was inded abad news



thnks alot


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Brilliant part...
WOW nupur became mayank's navigatore...thats rocking...Im sure with nupur he will win...
Waiting fr the race to begin now...
Cont soon dii..:D




thanks alot dear
yupp...thnku...hope u enjoy it too
thnks alot dear


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Posted: 13 years ago

Okay finally I have rply to u all….

Thnk u soo much for liking this so much..pardon errors

Chapter: 8

The formalities were fulfilled by Nupur her self… and there was a huge buzz all around, Nupur getting back on track after almost a years… she herself wasn't sure why she is doing so when she herself decided she will never get back there

Mayank: why u left racing..

Nupur: nothing special,

Mayank: okay what was the not so special reason..

Nupur: non of ur business…

Mayank: okay…hmmm… so wht is the not my business, and ordinary reason to quit steaming the track..

He was saying all this to seriously, every time moving a bit closer and she looked at him with a frown, and smiled a bit, he was someone to impossible to ignore..

Mayank: hold it… ah….. Faint…. He put his hand on heart and fall down from the chair..

Okay now tell me…

She raised her eyebrow …

Mayank: common…

Nupur: just like that I just lost the feel…

Mayank: a racer never lost the feel… and if he does, have a reason to that…. Why u lost the feel…

Nupur: cant we leave it

Mayank: no… common u can tell me…

Nupur: aha really..

Mayank: yup really… say it…

Nupur: what..

Mayank: NUPSSSI… ur testing my patience…

Nupur: lost my navigator..

Mayank: so u were in nock it out… why u didn't find another one…

Nupur: cause I don't feel like…

Mayank: how u lost her…

Nupur: how u know its her… he can be a boy…

Mayank: rules sweetheart.. navigator shuld be female…

Nupur: n why r u digging in all this…she was getting highly irritated

Mayank: let it go… how u lost her..

He was penetrating inside her…with evry word he was asking…

Nupur: fine.. she was date gang raped…couldn't survive it..died in hospital….

Mayank: huh,..date…pause….. last year the beach one….??

Nupur: ya..

There was silence between them, as it was difficult to actually sketch the picture even.. he remember as it was news, and the pictures were horrifying.. .. but yet it happen and happen so much in there kinda people that now it seems to be a casual thing…

He hates it.. man handling a girl is not at all his think, not even forcing or traping them for such..Whenever he has done this was with consent and with clear cut indication that he isn't dating girl for ever..

This distress and the anger on her face clearly showed how she felt, the way the keys of the joy pad were getting crashed..

Mayank: nupur

Nupur: NOW what..

Mayank: cool lady…donot scare me….why u actually scare me so much, at time with your voice, at times with ur glares, and at times with your eyes…haa…

Nupur: ur such an impossible creature…

Mayank: that I know…. Wht about today we go to the track to have a look…

Nupur: hmm.. good idea… we have to check the whereabouts… we will go now..

Mayank: why now…

Nupur: there will loads of people n no racer… I don't want u to cum infront of nay

Mayank: really… I so knew it… ur actually saving me from the evil eyes of girl..

Nupur: mayank what actually are u..

Mayank: sss..right now I a mackz….

Nupur: errr… fine..wht are u..idiot, stupid, b****d, sick..

Mayank: cute…sweet.. Lovable..

Nupur: the last one ur definitely not..

Mayank: so it means I am cute n sweet…. I know.. Pecking her cheek he stood up to went away..

She took the side vase and aim right at his head and threw it..he bend down and it hit the wall

Mayank: wht …if I would have gotten hurt..

Nupur: the world would have been a better place…

Mayank: how mean.. get up.. we r leaving..

……………..

Sitting on there car bonnets they were actually looking at the track..

Mayank: where they are gonna strt the race..

Nupur: munching her chips… I don't know..

Mayank: possible from a wider area… even it late night yet..there will be some cars..

Nupur: not some loads of…not like this.. jam back yet here will be… and will be place on unusual places

Mayank: there so much security here..look there.. cameras guards..

Nupur: guards are bribed…cameras …the connection to the control room is manipulated and a repeated video of few cars in this area will be shown…abt he police… they hande it somehow… so all clear…the only thing u should be concern of are the 15 racer on this narrow track, in which… Jack is the all time winner…

Mayank: he is good

Nupur: dam bad… he will threw ur car down the building if even once he will feel like r wining, he as his dangerous plans all over set here… including to burst the gas tank, or burst ur tires with bullet..

Mayank: wht.. and no body is goonna say anything..

Nupur: this race has no rules.. no rules..at all.. kill or get killed… u need to win.. thts it..and if u lost to jack mr mackz…she was holding his collar….I 'll definitely kill u…

Mayank: why ...don't tell me last time it was u to whom he lost… gosh ur were that good..that why I say..we can make gr8 partners…

Nupur: that race will decided…pushing him away..

Mayank: I am talking off the track…

Nupur: so mayank….get back on track… she said getting done the bonet to the car..

Mayank: ahhh…. But still I don't hate u..

Nupur: ur bad luck…

……………..

It was the day and he was feeling Goosebumps.. God knows why, he was dam excited 3 months now that he hasn't felt the urge to beat everyone, to get that feel of blowing evry one out… he was excited dam excited.. getting him self dressed , he was standing near his car, getting himself clam ..absorbing evry bit of it

Samrat: hey dude all set to go..

Mayank: yup ..

Samrat: thanks….he looked at wht… u somehow made her get back on track..

The shock there hand and touch there shoulder..

Benji: ready to rock…

Mayank: haven't so much ready than this evr before…

Dressed in skin fited leather black pants with a lemon shot top, above her waist, she was looking steaming hot..he could thing many other things right now than to race….smirking to himself he get back to his right now work

Samrat: best of luck sis…

Nupur: thanks broo… shall we..

Benji: yup.oki nupur n mackz…we will be connected to u throughout the race, so anytime u need us we are there… nupur u know the track, and the GPRs will help

Nupur: it wont..it will be blocked… the singles of GPRS will be blocked…only the navigation map that will be given will help u…nothing eles…

Mayank: u know that track..so we donot need the GPRS… its okay…even it the track doent have too many routes…

Nupur: it has ..to many shortcuts… just wait n listen..

Benji: cool…so lets go.. rock ..

……….

Reaching the parking plaza which has 20 floors, the were asked to reach the basement, it was new, never the race started at this point… the while basement was giving a feel of a club, light music and girls, dancing enjoying…

Nupur: there… put ur car at the side of all…

Mayank: at side, so that they will easily crash me aside and we will be put…

Nupur: I am the navigator or ur… as soon as the race will strt the cars will move crashing the cars beside them… your car has double cylinder of nos..use one at the very strt to get in lead.. on this track u wouldn't need it again..

Mayank: hmm…that is actually an idea… as at side nobody will actually notice me…

Nupur: so ..just follow me…

Mayank: I was thinking u didn't wish me luck…

Nupur: I ma wishing myself luck…

Mayank: but alteast let me wish u luck….. he leaned to her

Nupur: don't even think so…

Mayank: common on nups…

BOY: woo woo woo….look it here guys… who we have with us…

BOY2: oh my god..the greatest of all mayank Sharma

Nupur: I didn't knew that ur that much popular with ur name here

He looked at her with such a blaze that actually scared her..

BOY: the goody good boy of Newyork…

BOY2: oh god good boys donot race dear… your dad will threw u out… no go back to home..

They were laughing out loud enjoy evry bit of humiliation they were doing…nupur was not at all getting anything….but he was fuming

BOY: oh my god the nerd…the goody goody is on track… my GOD.. wht happen mayank… lost ur way to skool.

mayank who was surprised first yet now fumed in anger looking at them….his grip on stirring wheel increased and his eyes were red with anger

Boy2: he didn't have it dude u forgot.. mr mayank Sharma was thrown out .. he didn't have it… and now he will race… he came to his side and put his hand on the window…

U really think u r gonna race ..that so on this track… get off it … it will be ur last…I so bet that

Mayank: he laugh…. Jacob… why ..ur afraid now of me… u know I am the best…. Just get lost or rather get on track… I bet it will be last time ur on it…

He was trying to grip him when the organizer came and asked evry one to take there position…. Yet his blood was rising and he was feeling right now killing them …

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yehhh
update

resss

lovely part .u have writen it so nicely .
i felt so bad for nups nevigator .
this world of racing is not less bad dan underworld .
no rules no values ...i never had any idea about all dese?

have u read any books or something relating this?
the keen detail u put is not easy to write widout any idea or homework .

cont soon .
Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
Beautifully written...
pata hain jab bhi main iss ff ko parhti hoon i got to see another side of u...
i mean ap n Racing n all its actually strange for me...😆😆😆
bt wow...u r wriiting it Beautifully...
spcly all the small details n all...m loving it...
n wah!!! kya baat hain Frnd!!!! woh bhi race karne wala..hayeee😍 kyun nhi le jata meri API ko race dekhna...😳 waise unka name plzzz 🤔
dis Mayank is sooo Different from ur other Mayank...
bt still i loved him here...
he is also bad bt not dat bad a good wala bad boy...😆
so Mr.Mayank Sharma also has a past...interesting!!
felt bad abt Nupur's navigator...
loved Nupur's angry glare n all...
m sooo Excited for this race thing...
it wud be Superb fun..
n OMG!!! Nupur won last time...woa!!
m loving dis Nupur...lodsss
waise i know ke dis time too dey r gonna rock...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
loved it lodsss
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update..
feeking bad for nupur's navigator..
poor soul..

ad i thing.. now.. mackz.. have a past of mr mayank sharma..
is that so...

it would be interesting to read...
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Posted: 13 years ago


yeah unres bhi hona chaiy...
MU per abhi tak nhi hoa hai..plish kerdao yaar 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



yeah unres bhi hona chaiy...
MU per abhi tak nhi hoa hai..plish kerdao yaar 😊



did it ...😃

i have not unressed MU ...doing right nowww
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

yehhh
update

resss

lovely part .u have writen it so nicely .
i felt so bad for nups nevigator .
this world of racing is not less bad dan underworld .
no rules no values ...i never had any idea about all dese?

have u read any books or something relating this?
the keen detail u put is not easy to write widout any idea or homework .

cont soon .



thnsk alot dear

yup it is so.. the only rule is to win and get money thats it

i have always been lover of speed..street racing n all..so ya i do chk things..and read..and watch movies...
in university one of my frnd was a racer..nt that bad kinda...yet woh bhi kafi dayta tha..info..evry sunday beach k pass hoti hai ..i always use to ask him to take me..n he was..noway...i hate him for that...
.so i know from there too ..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur



did it ...😃

i have not unressed MU ...doing right nowww



thnkuuu😃😃..

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