Poem-Pieces of heart beats 4 U

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyzzz...sum of u may knw me n sum of u may nt...soo khud hi pta deti hu I M SHAFFY n dis is my 1st ever post 😊
I want to share a poem wid u written by my dearest frnd SIDDHART RAWAT 4 sum1 spl bt i want to relate dis poem none other dan our beloved KRIYAANSH ...soo plzz go through it n give ur reviews to me taki mai use bol saku ki teri mehant rang layi 🤗 🤗

PIECES OF HEART BEATS FOR U
dis is basically on kriya's POV bt agr aap logo ko na lge to plzzz juttas n chappals mat marna mjhe 🤗

I miss u dear,
regreting the fear,
i'll never gt u back,
no matter wat, its clear...

I used 2 luv u,
dat day made me cheer,
u'll never leave me,
i usually hear...

We go together,
promise like 4 ever,
when u hold my hand,
it feels like a moist weather...

I was so calm,
so peace,
i started 2 love my lyf,
even a single piece...

U made it in,
u made it through,
my heart said me,
it fell 4 u...

The way i said u bii,
it was all ovr u,
dat made u cry,
evn it was expected too...

I was nt mean,
but i gave u trouble,
that was the day it started,
our dreams flew like an empty bubble...

Finally i said break up,
dat was the moment i first die,
u havn't understand me,
it was the reason i badly cry...

Soon the weather become cloudy,
the rain pretended 2 be my tear,
nw i started 2 understand,
how a glass of water changes to beer... 😭 😭


guys agr apko ye kriyaansh se related in lgti to plss bear wid me coz mjhe lgi soo i posted...hope u lyk it 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res

unres.

yaar kya poem thi...
its really awesome...
u made me emotional😭
and haa tell ur frnd...
that he( i think he...not she...dekhna bhoolgayi naam...😛)
has a grt talent...keep on giving the works...
its just awesome...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Soon the weather become cloudy,
the rain pretended 2 be my tear,
nw i started 2 understand,
how a glass of water changes to beer... 😭 😭

this stanza rili broght tears in my eyes n reminded me of d pre Valentine night's KR scene which was d ever saddest scene shown in d3 . kaise humare kriyaansh kriya n rey ban gaye. evn aftr more dan 2 months of dier drastic end dey stil wet my eyes wid deir last scene.Missing KR lyk hell aftr dis poem.

N abt ur poem writing skill superb⭐️ luvd it. it was vry...
touchy n i m 😭 in dis state ryt nw.

chalo ab ye tumhari responsibilty hai ki kuch bhi karo n bring dis 😃 on my face...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its beautiful and very heart touching poem
last 2 stanza made me cry 😭😭

it seems like poet has written this poem for kriyansh only, its perfect
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shaffy dats Mind blowing...its just fabulous...luved it...i had tears in my eyes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
ohh very nicee missing alottt that Perfect magical couple kriyaansh <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing i was emotional and amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur poem touch my heart thankx for poem
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti

Soon the weather become cloudy,
the rain pretended 2 be my tear,
nw i started 2 understand,
how a glass of water changes to beer... 😭 😭


this stanza rili broght tears in my eyes n reminded me of d pre Valentine night's KR scene which was d ever saddest scene shown in d3 . kaise humare kriyaansh kriya n rey ban gaye. evn aftr more dan 2 months of dier drastic end dey stil wet my eyes wid deir last scene.Missing KR lyk hell aftr dis poem.

N abt ur poem writing skill superb⭐️ luvd it. it was vry...
touchy n i m 😭 in dis state ryt nw.

chalo ab ye tumhari responsibilty hai ki kuch bhi karo n bring dis 😃 on my face...


hey shaffy tumne meri last lyn wali wish puri nahi ki i m waiting... plzz yar kuch kr so dat i ll smile KR k end n d poem is rili wetting my eyes shaffy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti



<font size="2">hey shaffy tumne meri last lyn wali wish puri nahi ki i m waiting... plzz yar kuch kr so dat i ll smile KR k end n d poem is rili wetting my eyes shaffy.</font>


aww neeti i too want to fullfill ur wish bt kya kru xams ne rok rkha h n nt ur dis poem wet my eyes too...bt xams ke baad i'll try to do sumthng jiski wajah se u smile pka pka 😊

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