SwaRon OS - Cinderella's Man

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nice OS Pree...SwaRon is a fairytale by itself and now to write in the lines of Cinderella...Amazing !!!

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

vry nice...perfect reaction by swayam seeing sharon at his house...unexpected reaction by sharon known the gift truth...is gud...

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Hey,this was naaiiccee,starting from Swayam's discomfort at Taani's over-bubbliness,to Sharon seeing him in Spongebob shorts,to the ending-very well written.:)

Show ko chodo...TP ki dukaan hai woh.At least padhke toh acha laga.:)

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Hey this was an awesome Os lovely one.

Plz pm me next time on ur updates.

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rachita_1994

@rachita_1994

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Wow Pree!!! this was such a unique concept!! Love the title, love every bit of it!!! Even Swayam like Chocolatee!!!Yaay! Its my fav too!! Sorry! Too excited!! Loveed itt!! Do PM me whenever u writee!!!

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praj

@Gratitude_Me

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

your os is really awesome

those last line stole my heart...

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

After watching today's episode this OS seems magical. Awesome writing.

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SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awww... It was awesome! I'm speechless! I'm hoping something like happens! Loveddd it!! Ya, plz pm me wen u update.. :)

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Yet another beautiful OS from you. Even though this wasn't tragic, it was still very appealing. You captured the awkwardness of the situation so convincingly. Consider me one of your biggest fans.

P.S. The spoon hanging out from Swayam's mouth was the highlight of the OS.

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Hey, i had read this before but wasn't able to comment.
The OS is beautiful. Love the way you have compared the SwaRon story with Cinderella.
Oh n the next time you write do give me a PM. : )

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago