MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 42

Originally posted by: princess_mimi

On DARK DAY OF DESIRE

it is beautifully written.. your always wrote well but your skills has improved a lottt...

loved Geet n Maan's convo.. the way Geet said i m leaving u 4 ur sake i could feel it.. awesome.. just keep it up...

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

beautifully written...

the passion...the desire...the love...described in a wonderful way...

it was too good...👏

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Originally posted by: sanjh89

U knw wht , I m feelng lke tkng u in a bone crushng hug...

so sensual so beautiful... u left me imagining GC n DD in that scene...

n d icing on the cake ws the poetry...

its cz of u tht I cme acrs sm vry beautiful poems n I m rely vry grateful fr tht...

writng a historical luv fiction s nt tht esy... bt u hv bcm my Indian Mills n Boon in ths cse,infct btr, to begin wth...

earlier I use to b annoyd at u.. y u mke us wait so mch bt now I wnt u to mke wait us fr we gt sch beautiful piece...

though it vl b too mch to ask,, as u hv to do so hrd wrk on ur ech writng...bt stl whn r u gng to begin othr stories...

LOVE,

SANJH

Originally posted by: Sushmacholke

Hi Sayanee:) The 1st part i read in fb and was waiting for next but i didn't get it :( now read all parts at once :):) its really very different and i am not that into history at all but you indulged me into it :)got to know many things which otherwise would have never gave interest ,amropali was going above my head!!!! no maaneet then brain stop seeping anythng lolz... "Saptapadi" was my favorite part till now ;););) It was hawwwt... but the way you described it was very good especially Maan telling geet or say proposing in the most unique way dialogues were too touching wow just wow ... Dev is not evil till now its just love which made him think otherwise and gud thing even raj met her love shantanu , The love scenes of maaneet are ummm just too good... subtle romantic passionate ...One more part till now its giving me butterfly effect is "Maan kissing Geet passionately telling her you are mine only mine pinning her to wall " (thammi witnessing tis tat part) I imagined Maan in black dhoti recently in women achiever award tandav nritya look just as Maan of "Mrityunjay" LOVED IT PLZ CONTINUE SOON...

Originally posted by: sindu1231

what to say sayanee...i am speechless.👏👏.i loved their wedding..❤️.its as divine as our own maaneets wedding..❤️..its so sacred..i always feel exhilarating when i hear about maaneets wedding...this story of maaneets is so very special., i am just stunned by your next part...its so intoxicating...😳.i can call it lustfully divine.,😳 and beautiful too..😳...MY MAANEET...HAAAwww😍😍

yeah..i feel you are doing so much of research work to write this...its really getting depicted in the words..you will reach heights in this filed of writing,,if you continue to put your heart., soul and mind..👏.👏.⭐️..now i am your fan., fan for your hard work...keep going girl...👍🏼...

always have this name maaneet as part of your name..😉

Originally posted by: Ana90

😉haye main to laj mein laal-peele aur na jane keya keya ho gayi...comment kaise doon???☺️☺️
☺️☺️

i know u r angry wid me...hai na???pichle baar cmnt jo nei dia...😕

and iss bar main keya kahoon samajh nei aa raha hai...😲


waise aapne kahan tha k aap aisa koi update nei doge jahan pyarr k siwa sirf s** hoga...
aapne wada nivaya hai dii...thank u sooo much diii...👏

main padhte padhte bilkul uss samay mein chali gayi thi nd kho gayi thi MAANEET k pyar mein...u will not believe i had tears in my eyes...there were so much love...and aapne usse xpress kitne achche tarike se kia... hats off to u...

abb ek serious baat...aap hamesha jabb main hostel mein hoti hoon tabb update kyun deti ho???meri mbl ka blnc khatam ho jata hai😡

waiting for ur next update...keep it up👍🏼👍🏼

❤️ u sooo much...
muahhh
❤️
itna jyada romance hajam nei ho raha hai...😉
😉
😉

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Finally caught up with this update

Asusual you left me completely speechless...how do you do this magic??

The Update was absolutely amazing , each and every line was sheer poetry ,Maan wanted to drown himself in herself , their marriage was so beautiful...they married each other while the five elements of the nature ...the air, water, fire ,sky and Earth were the witness to their union ,it was beautifully described. 👏

Each and every part was wonderful...their marriage ,their union, everything.😍

The poems that you used in between this update were amazing.

I'm getting to know a lot of things with this FF ,whether it's about history or some new songs...well but I have heard this song before 😆...and I really like it..I'm actually very happy that you used this song.

Your choice of words, your choice of poetry , your choice of songs ,pictures everything is lovely.⭐️

I know ..I know my comment is small for such a wonderful update...but what to do ...you have left me speechless...so now there's a shortage of words in my brain .😆

Once again..thanks a lot for such lovely update. 😃

Waiting for the next part 😍

Continue soon 😃

--Namratha--