SHORT SCENE...ONE NIGHT! last part # 8 pge 35 - Page 17

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

Anyways we shall continue this talk on your thread😉...(you know when you update :P..hehehe.. no pressure though.. pressure of school is enough)

I'm gonna hit the books...

Take Care!!

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

*knock knock* hello shaheda... :D

Chapter 5

"I'm so sorry Geet, are you alright?"

He didn't hear a whim from her he immediately pulled her out of his embrace in fear and noticed she had her head bowed and slow tears making its way down.

He panicked, "What's the matter Geet, are you hurt somewhere tell me Geet please say something." He shook her off.

She looked up and shook her head, "I'm fine physically but emotionally I'm not Maan." She completed within her sobs.

His eyes moisten upon hearing her say Maan. He never fathoms how it sounded his name whenever Geet would call him. It buzzes all the strings of his hearts and sits with in the deeps.

"Say it again."

"What?"

What you just said?

"I'm Fine."

"No the last part."

She looked puzzled, Geet tried to think what he asked and read his expression, but she couldn't see past the swirling stars that danced in front of her eyes.

"You're not going to pass out on me, are you, Geet?" Maan's sharp question pulled her from the edge of the precipice.

Geet paled, her lips trembling. "I..i'm fi.." Before she finish she did opposite to what she was about to say. Her head fell right on Maan's shoulder.

"Geeet"...Geet" He called her out. He lifted her and took her inside his cabin and placed her on the sofa.

He went quickly to get some water. He sprinkled some on her face calling her out over and over.

Geet finally stir a bit, she slowly opened her eyes her vision blurry, and Geet touched his cheek, looked into his eyes, saw the fear beneath the fury. She struggled up,

"Don't get up Geet you should rest for a while."

He moved closer as to help her get up. She sat up and dropped her head to her knees, took a couple of deep breaths. No way is she going to pass out again.

"Are you ok?" He crouched beside her and Geet wanted to lean her head on his shoulder, forget all about the stupid fight and let him take care of her.

"I think so."

"I have already called for the doctor." She put a hand on his arm when he started to move away.

"Don't go."

"I wasn't planning to." He stretched his hand on the table to get the glass of water and handed her to drink.

Maan realized how close she was to put herself in danger. He was furious at his decision to send her to work in that muggy room where there was no source of air. If something would have happened to her he would have never forgiven himself.

All the while she was suffering he was resting in his cozy office and that also she has taken care of him to see his meal, pressing his hand to her forehead to smooth the hair away from her eyes.

Geet wanted to soak in his deep eyes and cling on to him as she never would on anyone.

"Sir I feel much better now, please call the doctor and ask him not to come."

She requested politely. She was back with her formals calling him Sir, it irked him and it showed in his tone.

"No, you will get checked and we are not going anywhere without it." He turned straight but didn't move away from her.

"Please Sir, I'm telling you the truth, see I already feel normal besides Dadima must be waiting for you."

He ignored her but did smooth his features; Dadima would be the one can bring him to agreement.

"And I'll myself go to the doctor soon, promise." She said quickly when he turned to her accusingly.

Short but sweet! :)

You have no idea how irritated I would get when she would call him sir constantly in the show! I wanted to jump through the screen and smack some sense into her. 😆 I hope this time around she quickly drops the tag.

I loved it when she told him not to go…adorable😍 If only things would've continued in that direction…sigh...I guess it's too soon for that.

Now that she refuses to see the doctor, is he going to take her home? I wonder what's going to happen in the car if that's the case!

looking forward to the next part :)

"...pressing his hand to her forehead to smooth the hair away from her eyes. Geet wanted to soak in his deep eyes and cling on to him as she never would on anyone" 😍

Originally posted by: Limerance

Short but sweet! :)

You have no idea how irritated I would get when she would call him sir constantly in the show! I wanted to jump through the screen and smack some sense into her. 😆 I hope this time around she quickly drops the tag.

I loved it when she told him not to go'adorable😍 If only things would've continued in that direction'sigh...I guess it's too soon for that.

Now that she refuses to see the doctor, is he going to take her home? I wonder what's going to happen in the car if that's the case!

looking forward to the next part :)

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

Shaddyyy B!
That was short! I want mooorrreee! You know the best part... when you wrote the dialogue with Geet calling him "Maan" was different in tone then when she called him "sir"👏👍🏼...(I hope I make sense :S)
By the wayyy, did she fake faint because she called him Maan and he caught that..but then she didn't want to repeat it ?????

"...pressing his hand to her forehead to smooth the hair away from her eyes. Geet wanted to soak in his deep eyes and cling on to him as she never would on anyone" 😍

Keep writing these cute scenes between this silly fight of theirs..lol