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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

raksha,

finally I have time to read concentrated,so sorry for that...been buzzy....but now I can reply......

whaoooo, very emotional, so beautiful, love the twins story....

just love it.....kya filmy episode tha yaar 👏 .....

hey shali why do you always think about film. thanks and I will be posting next episode by tomorrow night. Love you dear. Thanks Esha dear.

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey ramas,

i put your link in the SP Info. Mansion thats why im unstickign your fan fic
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks gurprit for letting me know and putting the links.. I am posting next episode in few hours.
Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Recap:
Today one year later there is a big birthday party for Rajesh and Nihir. The whole family gathers to celebrate twin's birthday party .

Note: This part is flashback

Episode 14: Saloni a Surrogate Mother


Saloni finishes her year of contract with zeetv and have lot of free time which she has been devoting to teach underprivileged children sing and dance. As she had opened a music and dance academy with 25 lakh rupees she donated. Neel is in charge of that school. They have been preparing the kids for performances all over. Saloni choreographs with other teachers. They allow any child to join regardless of talent. So they have huge classes. As they are celebrating Twins birthday lots of kids have been preparing for celebration and looking forward to perform in twin's birthday party.

The whole house is decorated beautifully with balloons and paper Mache animals and birds filled candy and other goodies hanging everywhere. Colorful paper lanterns are also hanging all around. The living room look so beautiful that just by looking at any one wants to be child again. Both Narpat parivar and Brijesh parivar is so happy. Even Buasa and Dhanajay have come from Mumbai with their son Gunjan which is almost one year old. Lots of people have gathered for the party. Party starts with prayer dance. Then there is singing and so many performances by the kids. Everyone is waiting for Saloni's singing. Saloni takes both Rajesh and Nihir by her fingers on the stage and sing


Chanda hai tu mera Suraj hai Tu AA meri ankho ka tara hai tu form movie Aradhana.


Everyone gets emotional. Then Neel sings happy birthday song for kids. Both kids look like little princes. Then first Rajesh cuts cake with Brijesh and Tara. Then Nihir cuts cake with Saloni and Nahar. First they feed to kids and then to each other. Then all kids get cake. They break paper Mache animals and birds and all the kids get lots of candy and goodies in their goody bags. Then they have dinner. After dinner there is dance party for adults. Tara and Brijesh starts and Nahar and Saloni joins them. Everyone is having blast in the party. There is lots of love in the air. Saloni and Tara both are so happy. Seeing them happy Nahar and Brijesh's faces lights up.


Party ends a midnight. Kids have gone to sleep. Saloni and Nahar are standing in the room and talking about the party. All of a sudden Nahar grabs Saloni and tells her:
Aaj hamara Nihir ek saal ka hogaya. Ab mujhe jaldise beti chahiye. He starts kissing her all over.


Saloni: ye aap kya kar rahe hai. Koi aa jayega . ye hamara living room hai bedroom nahi. Chodiye mujhe. Nahar even hugs her harder and pleads her he wants daughter immediately. Tara comes out as she has been listening. Seeing Tara Nahar leaves Saloni commenting Bhabhisa aap abhi soyi nahi? Mai to sone ja raha tha bahut neend aa rahi hai. Tara to Nahar: Ha mujhe malum hai tumhe kitni neend aa rahi hai. Tumhe to beti chahiye na. Abhi to hamari devrani ko pareshan kar rahe the. Saloni Nahar both blushes. Waise mujhe bhi ek nanhi si pyari si gudiya jaisy beti chahiye jo bilkul Saloni ki tarah pyari ho aur gane me dance karne ek number ho. Magar meri aisi kismet kaha? She sighs and gets tears in her eyes. Nahar and Saloni get emotional too. Suddenly saloni's eyes lights up. She says something in Nahar's ears. Nahar replies back in her ears then they smile.


Tara: ye tum dono mujhse chupakar kya baate kar rahe ho. Nahar: bhabhisa aap dukhi mat ho. Bhagwan ne chaha to aapko ek pyarisi beti milegi. Tara: Nahar tum mujhe kyu juthi tassalli de rahe ho. Tum log ne mujhe Rajesh ki ma to banaya apne jigar ka tukda dekar. Bad kismati se me kabhi maa nahi ban sakti ye hum sab jante hai. Nahar: Nahi bhabhisa aap ma banegi. Saloni aapke aur bhaisa ke bachche ki surrogate mother hogi. Hum sab kal hi doctor ke paas chalte hai. Tara: Kya tumhare bhaisa is baat ke liye raji hoge?


Saloni: Bhaisa ko mai raji karungi. Ab to har haal me pahele aap ki beti phir hamari beti hogi. Mujhe malum hai bhaisa kabhi mujhe na nahi kahenge. Chalo ab sote hai. Aur ek nanhi pyari gudiya ka sapna dekhte hai. Tara is overjoyed. She leaves room. Nahar carries Saloni to bedroom and hugs her so hard.

Nahar: Saloni har bar mai tumhara ek naya roop dekhta hoon. Hamesha dusroki khushi me hi tumhe khushi milti hai. Dhanyavad tumhare matapita ko jo aisi beti peda ki hai aur jo meri khushkismat se mujhe mili hai. He gets very emotional and gets tears in his eyes.


Saloni: Ab chodiye ye sab aur muskuraiye janab. Magar aapko mujh se dur rahena padega. She gets up and runs and shows him thumb. Nahar: Kyu bhaii mai apni biwi se door kyu rahu? He catches her and hugs her hard and kisses her lips. Saloni: chodiye bhi abhi to bhabhisa se promise kar ke aye. Inki beti ki ma mujhe banna hai phir hamari beti. Nahar: Lo bhai chod diya. Banda aapka gulam jo hai. They both laugh. Saloni hugs him back and they go to sleep in each other's arm.


Next morning Saloni comes to Brijesh with tea tray. Saloni: Bhaisa mujhe aapse kuch chahiye. Aap mujhe vachan do aap mujhe mana nahi karoge. Brijesh: Saloni tum mere liye ek beti ki tarah ho. Tum janti ho mai tumhe kabhi mana nahi kar sakta. Mai vachan deta hun. Saloni tells him: bhaisa mai aapke aur Bhabhisa ke bachache ki surrogate mother banana chahti hun. Brijesh: Nahi Saloni ye nahi ho sakta. Aur hume dusra bachcha nahi chahiye. Hamara Rajesh jo hai. Aur phir tum kaise mere bachche ki maa ban sakti ho. Tum meri beti saman ho. Ye to maha paap hoga. Duniya tumhe kya kahegi. Saloni ye namumkin hai.


Saloni: Bhaisa aap ne mujhe vachan diya aap ek rajput aur bade bhai hokar apna vachan tod rahe hai. Ye bhi maha paap hai .Waise mei aapke nahi aapke aur bhabhisa ke bachche ki ma banugi. Aur mujhe is baat se garv aur khushi milegi. Aapne mujhe aur Nahar ko ek pita ka pyar diya hai. Mai chahti hun aap aur Tarabhabhi apne beti ke mata pita bane aur use bhi woh sukh aur pyar de. Mai dunika kya kahegi use darti nahi. Mujhe to khushi hogi mai aap dono ke liye ek nayi zindgi is duniy me laoongi. Bhaisa aapko apni chhoti bahen ki ye binti manni hi hogi or mujhe ye adhikar dena hoga. Hum aaj hi doctor ke paas chalenge. Aditi is listening to all this conversation comes there.


Aditi: saloni tum ye pagalo jaisi bate kyu kar rahi ho. Tum paap kar rahi ho aur bhisa se bhi paap karva rahi ho. Log kya kahenge ye socha hai. Tumhe to hamare ghar ki ijjat ki koi parva nahi. Magar hume is duniya me jina hai. Saloni: baisa ye Tarabhabhi aur Bhaisaki aulad hogi mai sirf use apne pet ma paloongi. Isme koi paap nahi. Aapko to bhaisa ko samjana chaihye. Aap ek maa hai aur samaj sakti hai ki apne pati ki aulad hi ek aurat ko sampurn banati hai. Kya aap bhabhisa ko yeh sukh dena nahi chahegi. Bhabho listening to all this tells Brijesh Saloni ki baat se mai sehamt hoon Tumhe aaj hi doctor ke pass jana chaihiye. Nahar come there and tells Bhaisa ab maan jaiye. Mai bhi ek pyarisi gudiya ka chacha banana chahta hun. Bhaisa aapne mujhe hamesha sab kuch diya hai. Meri itni khwahish aap puri kijiye. Please bhaisa. Tara comes there Brijesh sees tears in her eyes and agrees to Saloni's request. They are all overjoyed. Tara hugs Saloni. Nahar hugs Brijesh and tells him Thank you Bhaisa. Brijesh thanks Saloni.


They take appointment to see specialist. Doctor checks them and okays. After 4 months doctor implants Tara's fertilized egg in Saloni's uterus. They wait about a month and presto saloni is pregnant with Tara and Brijesh's baby. Tara takes care of Saloni so well . Nahar also cares for Saloni so much as he had missed first time first few months of her pregnancy. Sometimes Saloni teases him by calling him Mrs. Mathew. Then Nahar talks like Mrs. Mathew to make her laugh. Saloni is happy with all the attention from everyone. They find out that Saloni is carrying a female child. Aditi never liked the idea and gets very jealous with Tara and Saloni's closeness and all the attention Saloni gets from everyone. She thinks if another girl comes then she will loose her importance since pia is out always. Saloni is getting bigger and prettier. Nahar admires her so much.


Nahar : Saloni tum din badin moti hoti ja rahi ho. Ab tumhe uthana bhi bhari pad raha hai. Saloni pretends to get angry and hits him with pillows. Nahar: Aare baba mai majak kar raha hoo. Tum to aur hi khubsurat aur pyari lagti ho. Jaise ye gudiya ne tumhara roop hi nikhar diya hai. Tumhe bas dekhta hi rahu aur apne sine se hamesha lagaye rakhu itni pyari tum lagati ho. He hugs her and kisses her fore head. She is in her 8th month now. Saloni goes upstairs one day and before she comes down Aditi spills little oil near the top stair. As Saloni comes there she slips and comes down rolling at the bottom and faints.


Tara sees this and faints too. Aditi wipes oil from the stairs quickly before any one comes. Bhabo comes running and calls hospital .She notifies Nahar and Brijesh. Ambulance comes and takes both Tara and Saloni to hospital. Bhabho and Aditi Accompanies them.
To be continued.


Please answer Few questions
What will happen to Saloni? Would she survive?
Will tara's dream shatter?
How would Saloni feel if anything happens to baby?
How will Brijesh and Nahar react?
Will anyone find out Aditi's doing.



Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aahhh omg di that was an amazing part. see why we should hate aditi 😆 ... but omg! how can someone do that?
- saloni will survive
- taras dream does shatter
- saloni bichari 😭
- ohh they are gonna kill aditi if they find out it was her.
omg im still shocked... amazing part 👏
cant wait fo next part
luv 🤗
Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
hun that was wonderful...and aditi 😡 ...lets see Saloni should survive but go into coma for a few days...it will build up lots of tension.
i hope tara's dream does not shatter...if so poor thing.
Saloni will not be able to live with herself if anything happens to the little baby girl.
Brijesh and Nahar will be freaking out...extremely worried... nahar worried about solani and the baby...brijest about everyone.
i hope they find out Aditia did it...and she won't be spared.
hun can't wait for the next part take care and thanks for letting me know that u posted this great part...take care seema


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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

aahhh omg di that was an amazing part. see why we should hate aditi 😆 ... but omg! how can someone do that?
- saloni will survive
- taras dream does shatter
- saloni bichari 😭
- ohh they are gonna kill aditi if they find out it was her.
omg im still shocked... amazing part 👏
cant wait fo next part
luv 🤗
Ruby

thanks Ruby

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: *Anju*

👏 can I say anything else than GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 I just loved the part...count soon di

Thanks Anju.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: goldie_ever

hun that was wonderful...and aditi 😡 ...lets see Saloni should survive but go into coma for a few days...it will build up lots of tension.
i hope tara's dream does not shatter...if so poor thing.
Saloni will not be able to live with herself if anything happens to the little baby girl.
Brijesh and Nahar will be freaking out...extremely worried... nahar worried about solani and the baby...brijest about everyone.
i hope they find out Aditia did it...and she won't be spared.
hun can't wait for the next part take care and thanks for letting me know that u posted this great part...take care seema


thanks goldie.

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