Os =raya romance nevi tease raya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi i know this is late but i want nevi tease raya after their c night so i write this os :-) in the morning after c night our raya in thair bed cuddle to eachother after sometime they wakeup ram= with smile goodmorning priya priya=gm mr.kapoor with shy smile ram = what happen priya r u ok? Priya=what happen to me why you asking me such a question ram with naughty smile= nothing but you call me ram last night and not for once many time priya = mr kapoor aaj holi hai or hame neche taiyar hoke niche jana chahiye and she get up from the bed ram pulled her in his arms= call me ram priya priya shy = m...muje niche jana hai dadi ne jaldi ane ko kaha tha mr kapoor ram= ok go but call me first ram priya =no me nahi kahungi ram= oh i see i know why you call me ram last night priya= mr kapoor please and she try to ascape from his grip but ram tight his grip and come more close to her ram in husky voice = baby i am right i know what you want from me for calling me ram and he nuzzel her priya closes her eyes= why are you torcharing me like this please stop it ram= you also torcher me and its not torcher and nuzzel her more carrasis her bare back priya=p...please ram=what please and he traces her lips with his finger priya=r...ram ram with smile = i love you priya and then he kiss priya on her softy lips one passionet kiss and our priya forgote her shyness and carasis her hand in his thik hair and thing go onether way there is knock on the door note=sorry if i make any mistake my english is poor and i write this so you people forget about sepration track=next part after your comment

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viny_queen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is really nice and dnot feel bad 4 eng you write more u learn if u use urdu word we understand ok keep it up and keep writing👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: viny_queen

it is really nice and dnot feel bad 4 eng you write more u learn if u use urdu word we understand ok keep it up and keep writing👏

thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gd one but found great difficulty on reading coz of unedited format. Present ur different dialogues in different lines.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: D4BALH

gd one but found great difficulty on reading coz of unedited format. Present ur different dialogues in different lines.

thanks and sorry for my mistake its also difficult for me because i post my topic by mobile so again sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one.. plz do update asap...

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