AarYa OS : Mirzaa Saahibaan!

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Mirzaa Saahibaan



Aarti & Yash are blissfully married for a month now & on the verge to confess their love but are absolutely unaware of each other's feelings .They both feel that their partners still have feelings for their ex.


Scindiya Mansion is all joyful & in high spirits as Suraj Pratap & Gayatri's 50th anniversary is approaching.


"I have decided! Im gonna do a 'Laila-Majnu' Or 'Heer-Ranjha' or 'Mirza-Saahiba' kinda skit with Vidhi." , says cheery Pankaj.


"Ofcourse! As if bhabhi would agree." , says Prateek with a straight face.


"Why not! After all we share such an epic love story!"


"Bhaiya! I really liked your idea. What say Aarti Bhabhi?" , says merry Paridhi.


"Ya! I too liked the idea." , says Aarti


"Done then."


"Don't expect that I'll do something of that sort! Im too scared of Mummy ji & Baaoji!" , says vexed Vidhi.


"Oh Come on Bhabhi! You are such a graceful dancer. Haven't we seen that in our wedding ceremonies!" , smirks Paridhi.


Vidhi feels shy but soon gives in.


"Okay done! Aarti Bhabhi , its your duty to ask Yash bhaiya!" , says Prateek.


"No No Prateek! How could I?


"Please Bhabhi! He won't agree if any of us ask but may get involved if you'd force."


"Umm! I will try. Lets finalize the pairs first."


Pari gets up & declares , "I & Prateek will do soni-mahiwal , Bhaiya bhabhi would be heer-ranjha & Yash Bhaiya Aarti Bhabhi would be Mirza Saahiban! Prateek please get us the print outs of the dialects na!"


"Ok Paridhi but let Aarti Bhabhi convince Yash bhaiya first."


Aarti nods her head & goes to her room. She sees Yash getting ready & goes near her. Aarti slowly puts her hand on his shoulder. Yash turns back.


"Yash ji!"


"Yes Aarti ji!"


"Umm'Actually..umm..vo.."


"What is it Aarti ji? Anything wrong?"


"We all are preparing skits on Indian epic love stories for mummy-papa's anniversary. Bhaiya bhabhi , PraDhi want us to do Mirza Saahibaan. Are you fine with it?"


"Ya fine." , says Yash .


Next Day everybody embarks on the preparation.


For Vidhi-Pankaj , "Heer-Ranjha" comes very naturally & they do it flawlessly , Vidhi is bit apprehensive though.


PraDhi make the "Soni-Mahiwaal's Play" more of a comedy play . Prateek acts like an absolute hen-pecked lover & Paridhi just can't hide her smile.


Now comes AarYa's turn.


Yash says his first dialogue , "For you see, each day I love you more
Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow."


Everybody looks at him with mouth wide open.


"When you see a falling star to night, make a wish, it will come true because I wished and I found you. If I could reach up and hold a star for every time you've made me smile, the entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand." , says Aarti.


Everybody starts clapping!


"Wow Bhaiya-Bhabhi! Your rehearsal has been the best! You two did it so naturally! But you know your skit would be requiring some 'intimacy'. Be prepared for that!" , says Pari.


"No Pari! We are not going to do anything of that sort. Im sorry." , says Yash with a straight face .


"Please bhaiya! Else you'd spoil the beauty of play!"


"I said no!" , says Yash & leaves for his room.


Aarti follows him.


"If they are insisting us so much why not give in?" , asks Aarti.


"Aarti ji! It would suit them. Not us! We aren't a casual husband-wife." , says Yash with a plain voice.


Aarti feels a bolt , her eyes becomes moist. " Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go." , Aarti says & leaves the room with tears.


Yash goes near Arpita's portrait & says , "Im scared! Extremely petrified. Im developing feelings for Aarti ji. In no case want to Betray you Arpita! In no case." He puts his hand on her photo & a pearl of his eye falls.


He soon envisages Arpita haloed with bright white light. He hears her saying , "Stop scratching your scar Yashu! The life is too short to mourn. Move ahead. Not everybody is as lucky to get the chance of falling in love again! When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one that has opened for us."

She then puts her hand on his eyes & asks him to see the person he loves the most. Yash sees a vision of Aarti playing with Ansh , Payal & Palak. He opens his eyes immediately & finds no one with him in the room.


Meanwhile , Aarti calls Maansi .


"Hey Aarti! How are you doing?"


Aarti starts crying & says , " It hurts to love someone and not be loved in return. But what is more painful is to love someone and never find the courage to let that person know how you feel."


"What are you saying Aarti? What happened?"


"I love Yash ji! I love him a lot. But the sad part is , no matter how close we are , we are not meant for each other."


"Calm down Aarti! You guys are doing play right? Mirza Saahibaan? I heard about it. You don't cry. Everything will be fine. Just concentrate on the play. Will meet soon." , Maansi says & shuts the phone down.


The day finally arrives.


Senior Scindiya's get floored with flowers & gifts . Now its the time of the "Eternal-Indian-Love-stories".

Everybody appreciates Vidhi-Panku & PraDhi's efforts!


As for now it was Aarti-Yash's turn.

Slowly & slowly the come on the stage. Even before they start , everybody starts howling , making Aarti nervous.


Yash says , "Reet hai kaisi ye zaamaane ki , jahaan saza milti hai dil lagane ki.
Na pyaar karna kabhi kisi ko itna, ki phir khuda se dua maangni pade use bhulani ki."


Aarti stares him.


Pari whispers in Prateek's ears , "What is bhaiya saying? This dialogue was not in the play!"


Aarti goes near him , cups his face & says is a single breath , "As we grow up, we learn that even the one person that wasn't supposed to ever let us down, probably will. You'll have your heart broken and you'll break others' hearts. You'll fight with your best friend or maybe even fall in love with them, and you'll cry because time is flying by. Love like you've never been hurt. Life comes with no guarantees, no time outs, no second chances. you just have to live life to the fullest, tell someone what they mean to you and tell someone off, speak out, dance in the pouring rain, hold someone's hand, comfort a friend, fall asleep watching the sun come up, and smile until your face hurts. Don't be afraid to take chances or fall in love and most of all, live in the moment because every second you spend angry or upset is a second of happiness you can never get back."


Everybody gets stunned to see them.


Yash says , "What greater thing is there for two human souls than to feel that they are joined... to strengthen each other... to be at one with each other in silent unspeakable memories. If I had to choose whether to breathe or to love you, I would use my last breath to tell you that... I love Aarti ji!"


"I'll love you until the day after forever." , says Aarti with wet eyes.


Pankaj-Prateek starts whistling. Everybody showers them with a loud applause. The curtains falls , Giving AarYa the chance to have their first hug , & Kiss.


The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and to be loved in return.




P.S. : Sorry Dips! I used your creation without asking you but then I thought You won't say no to me šŸ˜‰ Love you Dips šŸ¤—
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adigaag thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww that was quite beautifully written...CVs can pick up the idea from this OS when AarYa confess their love to each other...I don't mind it at all😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! This is your best yet!šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Breathtakingly beautiful !
You r truly a blessed writer!
Loved each n every dialogue!
God!
Thnku so much for this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!! amazing šŸ‘
beautifully written each and every dialogue
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...😃
excellent FF shubhi dear...šŸ‘
pls do continue soon...
i wish tis 2 happen in our serial...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Subhi..dear…great, wonderfulā€¦ā€¦šŸ˜›

When will this day come in the serial….šŸ˜’

Now, its your fault that you gave me a hope to see such a scene….šŸ˜†

Do write moreā€¦šŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my that was so BEAUTIFUL šŸ‘Thank you for sharing Dear šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Shubhikaji!!!
This is an wonderful piece i have ever read!!
Thanks fro the OS and thanks for PM!!
Lovely dear!!!!šŸ‘šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
another OS...just commented on PS I love you and now here...hihi
I really appreciate you for finding the time to update all your works and keep on writing...
It was a very nice OS...
I really liked how Aarti told Yash that at times it only proves how stong to let it go and all...
And finally the skit...
I had kinda guessed that they would say their own dialogues...
thnxxx for the pm... :)))

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