.:SaRa FF: Humsafar:.Ch2 Pg3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Salam Namaste everyone.
I had this idea for writing a ff on SaRa for a few months and now i final get time put my idea into action. So i present to you my first SaRa FF called Humsafar.

STORYLINE:
the story will start from where sameer stopped rishi and indira's wedding and told everyone that rishi is the reason for vidit's condition.
After that indira due to her needing help to take care of her brother she gets married to sam in that same mandap. then afterwards indira comes into the DM she becomes emotionless because she feels that rishi broke her trust and that his love was fake, and to add more pain to her sam tells her that he only married her because he did not want rishi to win her and that she means nothing to him and that she better stay out of his personal life. but he promises her that all her brothers medical responsibilities will be his and he will take care of her brother but not her.
Slowly after the marriage indira learns that sam is not on good terms with anyone except his elder sister, and whenever he is with his sister she sees a different side to him she sees a loving caring person. After some incidents Indira learns that there is a deep past about the diwans. will finding out this secret help her understand sameer? nd during this journey will love blossom between sameer and indira?

i know the storyline sounds pretty crap but hey i never said i am a good writer.
i just hope u all like reading it i promise you that the actual FF will be better than the storyline i have just written it just that i wasn't sure how to sum it up without telling the whole story.

anyways hope you enjoy the FF.
INDEX
Pg1:Character Sketch
Pg2: Chapter1:
pg3: Chapter 2
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Character Sketch




Sameer is a 26 year old business tycoon. He is only interested in his business and the happiness of his elder sister Aaliya. He does not give a damn about anything or anyone else. He has very sour relationship with his dad, mom and brother(rishi) due to a past. He loves music but had to leave it since his dad wanted him to handle the business. he is short tempered and when anger gets the best of him even he does not know what he does.



She is also 23 years old. Life has never given her a chance to smile only tears. But those tears have made her strong just like hitler. She is a strong woman who is married to Sameer.


He is Rishi Diwan, sameer's younger brother and indira's ex(i am just going to call him rishi throughout the whole FF and not Ricky). He is 23 years old.He is a fun loving and outgoing guy. He hates sameer because sameer broke his marriage with indira.



Aaliya Raizada is Sameer's 30 year old elder sister. she is a fun, sweet and chulbuli ladki.
she loves her brother sameer a lot and can see through him like no one else can.
She is married to Ranveer Raizada.


Ranveer loves his wife aaliya alot and also her family.
He also has a pretty good understanding relationship with Sameer.
He is a fun but hard working guy.
He is also business partners with sameer.



He is Mahesh Diwan. Sam, Rishi and Aaliya's father. He loves his kids alot but he does not know how to show it.

Simi is mahesh diwan's wife. she is a modern but sweet person, but she hates indira because she thinks that because of indira her two sons are fighting.
She showers more love on sameer than rishi. but sameer always rejects her motherly love because he hates her.

AND YOU ALL ALREADY KNOW INDIRA'S FAMILY.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shall post the first chapter tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjht_one

shall post the first chapter tomorrow



yes dear post it...😊
you said you will write this FF long back... me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow,another sara ff.Very nice concept n beautiful cs.Amazing start.Do cont n pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved this pair,plz PM me next time

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Originally posted by: preethimadhavg



yes dear post it...😊
you said you will write this FF long back... me waiting

i m posting it in 5 mins preeti...
thanx for waiting to read it

btw yaar i have read ur updates but haven't commented yet didn't get time shall comment tomorrow cause i shall be a bit free:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

Wow,another sara ff.Very nice concept n beautiful cs.Amazing start.Do cont n pm me

thanx hun...i love sara but i think the cvs just ruined them
i will post chapter one soon

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Originally posted by: zubi

i loved this pair,plz PM me next time


i knw they are so hawt together...will surely PM u
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CHAPTER 1

Indira POV

I had trusted him more than anything. I had loved him but he broke my trust, he shattered my heart, he destroyed my dreams and world. Why did he do that? Why did he make me realise the emotion of love and then give me pain. Why? I wish I had never met him, I wish I had never fallen for that smile of him, for that twinkle in his eyes I just wish he had never taught me to love. I knew I was right from the start you should never trust men but I still trusted him and look he is still broke my trust. I will never in my life ever trust a man except for ishaan and vidith bhaiya. They are the only reason for me to live now. If it wasn't for them then I would be dead now.

A tear escaped my eyes down my cheeks.

Why was everything in my life so complicated, why could I never have happiness? Why me god why me? A girl's wedding day is meant to be her day of happiness, it's meant to be her happiest day, then why did you give me only tears on my wedding day? Why? More tears started escaping my eyes, a sobbed escaped my delicate lips; it angered me that I was crying over someone who had just given me pain. I shut my eyes tightly hoping for the tears to stop flowing. But as soon as I shut my eyes all the memories of my wedding day came flowing back.

Flashback.

Indira: get out. She pointed towards the gate

Rishi: but makaan malkin ji, aap

Indira yelled: I said GET OUT!!!

Rishi: No until u hear me out I am not going to go.

Indira takes rishi's hand and throws him out of the house and shuts the door in his face. She then runs to her room and stumbles on to the floor in a heap and tries to control her tears. Just then a phone call comes, she picks it up. It was a phone call from Vidith's doctor, Sameer had told the doctor to call Indira in case of an emergency. The doctor had called to tell Indira that vidith was not completely better and that there was a huge chance his condition could get worse and that he needed to be under observation of a doctor at all times and that there would need to some operations needed to be done and that it would cost a lot of money.

Indira started getting worried where would she get so much money for, how was she going to take care of Vidith bhaiya, she was scared, for once she did not know what to do. She went downstairs to go take Vidith Bhaiya into his room. When she reached downstairs. Munna walked up to her. And he told her how Rishi had done so much damage to the family and he started taunting her and then he said that he knows about vidith's condition as Sameer told everyone right now about it and that's why we have decided that you will get married today but to Sameer because he has promised to take care of Vidith financially. Indira just started at Munna and then Sameer dumb-founded, but she did not utter a word.

Munna: look do not even dare to argue with me today, we all have already seen how your choice of groom turned out to be. Now its time that you marry the groom of our choice. Indira was shattered after hearing this but she knew she would never be able to support her brother's care financially so she quietly went and set in the madap.

This is how Miss Indira Sharma became Mrs Indira Diwan, the wife of the business tycoon Mr Sameer Diwan.

Flasback ends.

And now here I was sitting in my new bedroom sitting on a beautifully decorated with flowers bed.

I heard someone turn the knob of the door, this jerked me back to life and I quickly wiped my tears, so that no would see them.

She turned her gaze to the person who had just walked into the room. And her gaze was matched with dark brown eyes that belonged to the one and only Sameer Diwan.

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how is it? is it ok? if there is anything i should improve on then please do not hesitate in telling me.😊

Edited by mjht_one - 13 years ago

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