O.S THORA PYAAR THORA TAKRAAR

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O.S-- THORA PYAAR THORA TAKRAAR

It was a week after Miss.B arrival wen Raizada family decided to throw a party in honour of Miss.B.The whole family had assembled in the living area for the party's discussion[including our favourite arshi].

All the arrangements for the party were according to Miss.B and...following were her demaaandsss.

Miss.B-''Mr.A main aapki shaadi mein present nahin thi toh aapki shaadi mein 'Miss.B Tadka' nahin hoga that's why iss party mein mujhe kuch different chahiye…..aahmm….what abt BOLLYWOOD THEME.its perfect''

On hearing,while khushi jumped with joy and shouted ''yeaaahhh!!'',Arnav was back to his ''What the f***'' and down went his head in disgust.

Scene 2

There was a lot going on in Shantivan.

Nani had decided to become Helen,the item girl of 70's.Mami's practices were back wit a bang for being Umraojaan[Rekha]and Mamaji was compelled to be Amitabh Bachchan as Mami had bullied him by saying –''Aap Big B ko hello-hai karido nahin toh hum aapko bye-bye karide''.

The love birds[payash]had taken the roles of Raj and Simran from ddlj.And the devil Shyam had seen Salmaan's poster in Arshi's room. So he quickly chose to be salman.On advice of others Anjali became karishma from Biwi no.1 [I know salman's character from biwi no.1 suits best to dat devil].

The grown up Miss.B said that soon she'll be launched in bollywood so she'll be what she is ''upcoming Superstar''.

Scene3

Khushi was pacing in hetr room, and wondering what she'll become,when Arnav came in a hurry and dashed with Khushi……[an eyelock between them and Rabba Ve in bg].

The tranced broked when Khushi whispered-''Hey Devi Maiyaan…hum jab bhi koi shubh karya ke baare mein soch rahe hote hai to aap Laad Governor ko kyon humare saamne bhej deti hai….?''

Arnav-''Whaat!! Khushi tum paaglon kio tarha kyon behave kar rahi ho…………oh….I forgot tum to pehle se hi paagal ho tumhe banne ki kya zaroorat hai'',Arnav said with a smirk.

''Kyaa?''---Khushi said pouting her lips in a perfect 'aaa'.Then Khushi remembers abt her Gopi bahu mode and said—''Swaami,aap ko humare aantrik guno ki parakh kitni jaldi ho gayyi hai''.

Arnav was irritated and he said,''Ohhh!!Not again kill mee!!''

Khushi placing her hand on Arnav's lips to object the death spell[Rabba ve carries on…in the bg]

Khushi getting back to her senses after being carried away from rabba ve …..

''Swammi aap apne mukh se tej ki chatta jhalkane ke bajay apriy shabd kyon nikal rahe hai ….yeh sab kehne se pehle aap gunge kyon nahin ho gayye'',said khushi to tease her swammi.

Arnav-''What the f***''

Then they were interrupted by anjali's call from downstairs—

''Sabhi log niche aajaiye…..costume wale aane hi waale hai''.

Then Arnav leaves the room and khushi's mind struck with the idea that she can be Katrina Kif,as she was the last girlfriend of Salmaan Khan.Khushi too leaves the room yelling ''Swammi!Swammi!!''

Khushi was following Arnav through the pool side door.the salesman, was entering that door,stopped wen he heard Swammi!Swammi!!

''why the hell does she do this to me….Arnav turns around saying 'now whaat??'' in his anger tone.

Khushi—''Aap apna para mat chadaiye…humne toh bas yeh poochna tha ki aapko 'Katrina kaif' pasand hai ya nahin…''

Arnav--- ''Now who the hell is katrina…I don't know any katrina kaif''.

''Kyaa??...aap katrina ko nahin jaante ,who hummare sallu ki …karibi dost'',Khushi says giggling.

Arnav gritting his teeth,said ''Bakwas logon ki bakwas baaton ke liye mere paas itna time nahi hai…''.

Khushi starts fighting coz Arnav told bakwas to kat and sallu.

Khushi—''Aap khud ko samajhte kya hai…dunia mein har shouharat wale log ghamandi nahin hote hai…ap ki jankari ke liye batadoon ki who dono sabse lokpriye abhineta hai jinke dunia mein karorro chahne wale hai''.

Then Arnav's phone rings and he leaves the area to attend aman's call.

The salesman who was witnessing their fight,runs into d house wen he saw asr heading towards his direction.Khushi's complexion made him think that now he could sell his ______ colour saree.Khushi leaves for living area. .

Scene 4

Everyone was present at the living area crowded around the salesman except Arnav.

Akash and Payal were helping each other to choose their costumes.Mami had chosen an anarkali dress and was lookingf at herself in the full length mirror,trying to analyze how beautiful she'll look in that dress.Nani a shimmering golden gown and decided it as her costume.Anjali,Shyam nad mamaji were still looking for suitable costumes,wen Khushi came.On seeing Khushi the salesman quickly came beside her and said—''Madam!aapko kya dikhao,yeh saareeyaan aap par achchi lagengi ……ye 'safed saaree' yeh toh aap pe khoob jachegi …..isme jo kaaregari hui hai who bahutr sundar hai…..aesa lag raha hai maano aap hi ke liye banai gayyi hai …dekhiye naaa…..'',he tries to give her that saree wen khushi reacts abruptly and removes the saree away.

Khushi---'' 'Safed saaree'!!!...Aapki himmat kaise hui hume ye saree dikhane ki''.

Arnav was passing through ythe living area,flipping his file pages wen he heard the loud anger tone of Khushi,yelling at the salesman and was dumbstruck.

''Aapko yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra dikhai nahin deta …'',Khushi said pointing at her sindoor and mangal sutra….. ''Abhi humari shaadi ko jyada din bhi nahin hue aur aap hume safed saree mreinn dekhna chahte hai…..Aaj hi subah Arnavji aisi abshagun baatein[kill me!] keh rahe the aur ab in murakh ki aisi harkat….Hey Devi Maiyaan!!...Arnavji ki raksha karna aur iss murakh ki galti maaf kar dena ….''

Khushi to salesman—''Aapne yeh kya kar diya …..humari chinta aur barah di ….agar inhe kuch hua toh hum aapko chorenge nahin..''

Khushi was biting her nails and other family members wetre trying to calm her. .

Arnav was smugging at his wife's innocence. He couldn't believe that the girl whom he tried to hurt and make her life hell was quarreling with the salesman for her huband i.e.,Arnav's life over a 'mere white saree'.Arnav couldn't help himself from walking back to the memory lane where Khushi had always tried to save his life [jalebi,sugar level and many more times]…..and had taken care of him.His eyes reflected the deep feelings which was always present somewhere or the other corner of his heart.Once again Arnav was carried away by the emotions of his heart and took a decision…..

Precap—Khushi coming down through stairs,she was wearing a beautiful flowing black gown.

Plzz…..like or comment to give any decisions related to the o.s. Hope you gyzzz like it and acknowledge our hardwork….as we hav written for the first time.

Thank you.

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Originally posted by: beautynbeast9

O.S-- THORA PYAAR THORA TAKRAAR

It was a week after Miss.B arrival wen Raizada family decided to throw a party in honour of Miss.B.The whole family had assembled in the living area for the party's discussion[including our favourite arshi].

All the arrangements for the party were according to Miss.B and...following were her demaaandsss.

Miss.B-''Mr.A main aapki shaadi mein present nahin thi toh aapki shaadi mein 'Miss.B Tadka' nahin hoga that's why iss party mein mujhe kuch different chahiye'..aahmm'.what abt BOLLYWOOD THEME.its perfect''

On hearing,while khushi jumped with joy and shouted ''yeaaahhh!!'',Arnav was back to his ''What the f***'' and down went his head in disgust.

Scene 2

There was a lot going on in Shantivan.

Nani had decided to become Helen,the item girl of 70's.Mami's practices were back wit a bang for being Umraojaan[Rekha]and Mamaji was compelled to be Amitabh Bachchan as Mami had bullied him by saying '''Aap Big B ko hello-hai karido nahin toh hum aapko bye-bye karide''.

The love birds[payash]had taken the roles of Raj and Simran from ddlj.And the devil Shyam had seen Salmaan's poster in Arshi's room. So he quickly chose to be salman.On advice of others Anjali became karishma from Biwi no.1 [I know salman's character from biwi no.1 suits best to dat devil].

The grown up Miss.B said that soon she'll be launched in bollywood so she'll be what she is ''upcoming Superstar''.

Scene3

Khushi was pacing in hetr room, and wondering what she'll become,when Arnav came in a hurry and dashed with Khushi''[an eyelock between them and Rabba Ve in bg].

The tranced broked when Khushi whispered-''Hey Devi Maiyaan'hum jab bhi koi shubh karya ke baare mein soch rahe hote hai to aap Laad Governor ko kyon humare saamne bhej deti hai'.?''

Arnav-''Whaat!! Khushi tum paaglon kio tarha kyon behave kar rahi ho''''oh'.I forgot tum to pehle se hi paagal ho tumhe banne ki kya zaroorat hai'',Arnav said with a smirk.

''Kyaa?''---Khushi said pouting her lips in a perfect 'aaa'.Then Khushi remembers abt her Gopi bahu mode and said'''Swaami,aap ko humare aantrik guno ki parakh kitni jaldi ho gayyi hai''.

Arnav was irritated and he said,''Ohhh!!Not again kill mee!!''

Khushi placing her hand on Arnav's lips to object the death spell[Rabba ve carries on'in the bg]

Khushi getting back to her senses after being carried away from rabba ve '..

''Swammi aap apne mukh se tej ki chatta jhalkane ke bajay apriy shabd kyon nikal rahe hai '.yeh sab kehne se pehle aap gunge kyon nahin ho gayye'',said khushi to tease her swammi.

Arnav-''What the f***''

Then they were interrupted by anjali's call from downstairs'

''Sabhi log niche aajaiye'..costume wale aane hi waale hai''.

Then Arnav leaves the room and khushi's mind struck with the idea that she can be Katrina Kif,as she was the last girlfriend of Salmaan Khan.Khushi too leaves the room yelling ''Swammi!Swammi!!''

Khushi was following Arnav through the pool side door.the salesman, was entering that door,stopped wen he heard Swammi!Swammi!!

''why the hell does she do this to me'.Arnav turns around saying 'now whaat??'' in his anger tone.

Khushi'''Aap apna para mat chadaiye'humne toh bas yeh poochna tha ki aapko 'Katrina kaif' pasand hai ya nahin'''

Arnav--- ''Now who the hell is katrina'I don't know any katrina kaif''.

''Kyaa??...aap katrina ko nahin jaante ,who hummare sallu ki 'karibi dost'',Khushi says giggling.

Arnav gritting his teeth,said ''Bakwas logon ki bakwas baaton ke liye mere paas itna time nahi hai'''.

Khushi starts fighting coz Arnav told bakwas to kat and sallu.

Khushi'''Aap khud ko samajhte kya hai'dunia mein har shouharat wale log ghamandi nahin hote hai'ap ki jankari ke liye batadoon ki who dono sabse lokpriye abhineta hai jinke dunia mein karorro chahne wale hai''.

Then Arnav's phone rings and he leaves the area to attend aman's call.

The salesman who was witnessing their fight,runs into d house wen he saw asr heading towards his direction.Khushi's complexion made him think that now he could sell his ______ colour saree.Khushi leaves for living area. .

Scene 4

Everyone was present at the living area crowded around the salesman except Arnav.

Akash and Payal were helping each other to choose their costumes.Mami had chosen an anarkali dress and was lookingf at herself in the full length mirror,trying to analyze how beautiful she'll look in that dress.Nani a shimmering golden gown and decided it as her costume.Anjali,Shyam nad mamaji were still looking for suitable costumes,wen Khushi came.On seeing Khushi the salesman quickly came beside her and said'''Madam!aapko kya dikhao,yeh saareeyaan aap par achchi lagengi ''ye 'safed saaree' yeh toh aap pe khoob jachegi '..isme jo kaaregari hui hai who bahutr sundar hai'..aesa lag raha hai maano aap hi ke liye banai gayyi hai 'dekhiye naaa'..'',he tries to give her that saree wen khushi reacts abruptly and removes the saree away.

Khushi---'' 'Safed saaree'!!!...Aapki himmat kaise hui hume ye saree dikhane ki''.

Arnav was passing through ythe living area,flipping his file pages wen he heard the loud anger tone of Khushi,yelling at the salesman and was dumbstruck.

''Aapko yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra dikhai nahin deta ''',Khushi said pointing at her sindoor and mangal sutra'.. ''Abhi humari shaadi ko jyada din bhi nahin hue aur aap hume safed saree mreinn dekhna chahte hai'..Aaj hi subah Arnavji aisi abshagun baatein[kill me!] keh rahe the aur ab in murakh ki aisi harkat'.Hey Devi Maiyaan!!...Arnavji ki raksha karna aur iss murakh ki galti maaf kar dena '.''

Khushi to salesman'''Aapne yeh kya kar diya '..humari chinta aur barah di '.agar inhe kuch hua toh hum aapko chorenge nahin..''

Khushi was biting her nails and other family members wetre trying to calm her. .

Arnav was smugging at his wife's innocence. He couldn't believe that the girl whom he tried to hurt and make her life hell was quarreling with the salesman for her huband i.e.,Arnav's life over a 'mere white saree'.Arnav couldn't help himself from walking back to the memory lane where Khushi had always tried to save his life [jalebi,sugar level and many more times]'..and had taken care of him.His eyes reflected the deep feelings which was always present somewhere or the other corner of his heart.Once again Arnav was carried away by the emotions of his heart and took a decision'..

Precap'Khushi coming down through stairs,she was wearing a beautiful flowing black gown.

Plzz'..like or comment to give any decisions related to the o.s. Hope you gyzzz like it and acknowledge our hardwork'.as we hav written for the first time.

Thank you.

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Really good ...update soon :) !!!
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ye takrar bhara pyaar hume bahut pasand aya...update asap...very well done. 😊
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Very nice. Good start. Please continue. Curious about what Arnav was thinking and what did he decide to do?
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Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Wow, Khushi in a gown.
I wonder what she'll go as?
Looking forward to the next part.
Continue soon.
Thanks.😃

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