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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 2 

SUNDAY MORNING

Dobrial mansion

Gunjan was waking misha and piya 
Gunjan : get up u both at once , abhi aur isi waqt 
Misha ( in sleep) : what with u my gunju , let us sleep na it's Sunday today 
Piya : ya misha is right today is Sunday and I demand more sleep 
Gunjan : o meri piya madam , don't u remember today is Sunday and u hav to go to meet so called abhay raichand at 11 am and its already 9 : 30  , just get up u lazy fellows
Piya woke with jerk 
Piya : I completely forgot yaar 
Gunjan : I know now go take your bath and misha the queen please can u honour me by getting up 
Misha : sorry child wish not granted 
Gunjan : mishu get up at once , today is your turn to make breakfast 
Misha : ya , ya  me bechari girl tolerating all your atyachaar 
Gunjan : shut up and get up and btw where is piya ?
She searched for piya and found her again sleeping on bathroom door 
Gunjan : uufff !!!

Raichand house 


Abhay was Working on his laptop and samrat and kabir arrived 
Kabir : hey dude itni subhah subhah Kya kar raha hai ?
Abhay : nothin much working on a new presentation 
Samrat : hey Bhagwan , someone save these guy 
Then kabir just switched off the laptop and said 
Kabir : your wish granted samrat 
Abhay : what yaar ? 
Samrat : abhay it's Sunday today & I hope u remember tat u going to meet piya 
Abhay : ya I completely remember okay 
Kabir : so what u r going to wear ? 
Abhay pointed towards a pair of formals
Kabir : u kidding me 
Samrat : no way on earth u r wearing tat We will get u ready
Then kabir and samrat did a fashion parade on abhay and finally abhay ready with dark blue t shirt and jeans with a jacket 
Kabir : wah!!! My lion
Samrat : today piya jaiswal is gone , my god abhay I never knew u were this handsome 
Abhay : thanku thanku now please may I leave now 
Kabir : sure , but abhay my friend always remember the reason of your this success r your best friends 
Abhay : yeah rite 

On other hand after trying a tons of dresses piya finally wore a purple floral knee length dress & matching slippers with her silky hair down 
Piya : guys I m ready how's it ? 
Misha whistled 
Gunjan : oh my , meri sister beautiful bhi hai ! I never knew it 
Piya : very funny 
Gunjan : jokes apart , u looking soo beautiful dear 
Piya : thxxx , okay m getting late bye bye 
Misha : best of luck sister blister 


EXOTIC RESTAURANT 

Piya was waiting for abhay at restaurant , then abhay entered and saw piya waiting for him , he skipped his heartbeat seeing how beautiful she looked 
Abhay ( to himself ) : be yourself abhay ! 
He went towards piya 
Abhay : waiting for me ? 
Piya : u abhay raichand ?
Abhay : who else
Piya : hello , m piya 
Abhay : I know 
Piya was stunned to see the the handsome hunk in front of her , and thought tat his eyes were really  hypnotic  
Piya : sooo... U r business man 
Abhay : yep , well what do u do 
Piya : I m a physical therapist in life plus hospital 
Abhay : tats great , soo u kind of doctor huh 
Piya : yaa well , umm abhay can we go somewhere else this place is soo boring and I m really not in mood to eat something international 
Abhay : as  u wish 
Saying tat they went to car sat Inside , and abhay was about startled the car 
Abhay : so piya where u want to go ? 
Piya : ummm beach 
Abhay : beach ?
Piya: yes , btw who r there in your family ?
Abhay : well my parent r no more and relatives visit sometime , my 2 BFF samrat and kabir r my family and I guess u r my new family member ! 
Piya blused and her cheeks became all red 
Abhay : tell me about your family 
Piya : well... Arnab is step father , my mom died when I was 15 and my cousins gunjan and misha are my family and I live with them 
Abhay : well we arrived at beach .

AT BEACH 
piya : abhay remove your shoes 
Abhay : what the hell why ? 
Piya : just do what I say 
Abhay ( under his breathe ) : gosh these girls 
Piya : what did u said ?
Abhay :nothin 
Piya : come with me
Then both started walking at edge of water 
Abhay : it feels good 
Piya : haina ,  whenever I m in tension I come here , I feel relaxed 
Abhay : so hav u ever fell In love ?
Piya : na u 
Abhay : never got time
Piya : waise abhay , mein abhi se bata deti hu , I only know how to cook maggi 
Abhay : don't worry your would be husband knows to cook every type of Dish
Piya : u cook! Wow so u know how to cook bhaji pav ?
Abhay : no 
Piya : dosa ? 
Abhay : no 
Piya : chole bature ? 
Abhay : na 
Piya : phir tumhe Kya ata hai ? 
Abhay : I don't make such things ok , I cook Italian , Mexican , punjabi food , and pizza's 
Piya : that's not every type of dish ok 
Abhay : jo bhi hai , I cook a lot more dishes then u 
Piya : but I make worlds best maggi 
Abhay : wow , it's so difficult to cook maggi , I'm impressed 
Piya: hahaha very funny , so u like dancing 
Abhay: I hav never danced 
Piya:what u must be joking 
Abhay : I m serous but yes I know a lil couple dancing so... Please accept this first dance with me 
Piya : music ?
 Abhay : well I hav samrat's phone I m sure there must there songs 
Piya : why samrat's phone ?
Abhay : well because  samrat forced me to take his phone as in my phone calls come every 20 min 
Piya : Sunday ko bhi ?
Abhay : yep , well which song would u like ? 
Piya : well is there song tum se hi from jab we met 
Abhay : let me see , ya it's here 
He played the song and lifted his hand asking for piya 's hand 
Abhay : please 
Piya : sure 
They started dancing along with tunes of song between small waves of water . Everyone adored the cute couple 
Piya ( while dancing ) : it's soo much fun , u don't dance tat bad 
Abhay : because of the beautiful company I hav
Piya blushed at his statement . Soon the song ended and they took their normal position 
Piya : I loved it 
Abhay : mee too . 
Piya : well abhay let's go I m hungry 
Abhay : ok
Saying that piya wore her slippers which were in beside her 
Piya : where r your shoes ? 
Abhay : i guess it was there were we started walking 
Piya : what u didn't bought them along 
Abhay : na 
Piya : by now I m sure it must hav been stolen 
Said piya laughing 
Abhay: u laughing on me 
Piya : so , what u going to do 
Abhay : wait and watch 
Saying tat abhay took a water in his hand and splashed it over piya making her little wet 
Piya : abhay ! U see what I do now 
She also splashed water on him and this a water fight started . They were running here there making each other wet . Soon they were half wet and laughing with each other 
Piya : now let's go , this hunger would kill me 
Abhay : what u want to eat 
Piya : pani puri ! 
Abhay : ok then 
They reached a pani puri stall 
Piya : abhay let's hav pani puri compition , whoever loses will fulfill 1 wish of winner
Abhay : game is on 
They started having pani puris , they both almost ate 37 pani puris then finally abhay threw  the plate 
Abhay : I can't eat more 
Then piya with difficulty finally ate 38 pani puri 
Piya : I won I won! 
Abhay : tell me whats the wish ?
Piya : I want an chocolate ice cream right now 
Abhay : okay I will bring it , u stay here . 
There was an ice cream shop at small distance . Abhay  went there . Then 2 cheap boys surrounded piya 
1st boy : hey sexy , u alone ? 
Piya : leave okay
2 nd boy : what if we don't 
Piya : I will shout
2 nd boy : oh really, who will save u ? This old pani puri wala aur the very few people walking here 
Saying tat they came near piya to touch her just the abhay came and stand between them like big wall . He gave the ice cream to piya and gave the 1 st boy a tight slap that the boy started bleeding . Then started a violent fight between them but abhay was hitting soo hard tat the boys soon left bleeding 
Abhay (with concern ) : u okay piya , did they touch u ?
Piya smiled and said : u were on right time 
Saying that they moved towards the car , piya was eating the ice cream 
Piya : u wanna hav some ? 
Abhay : sure 
Saying tat he bent a lil and had some ice cream which was in piya's hand . Then they sat in car . Turned on the radio and started driving . Then the song ' piya o re piya ' from tere naal love ho Gaya came . Piya started singing along and soon abhay joined her and when words piya o re piya came , abhay sang at the top of his voice 
Piya : stop it abhay 
Abhay : no I won't 
Piya : u know abhay u should never sing 
Abhay : why ? 
Piya : u sound so bad , my ears r gone 
Abhay : like u hav a sweet voice 
Piya : much better then u 
Abhay : I don't care 
Saying tat he started he singing Loudly irritating piya till they reached her home 
Abhay : I had the most beautiful day of my life 
Piya : mee too , bye
Abhay : bye 
Piya started walking towards home
Abhay : piya 
She turned around 
Piya : yes 
Abhay : can we meet again ?
Piya : sure 
Then abhay move towards piya and kissed her rosy cheeks and sat in car leaving a highly blushing piya , piya moved inside house and abhay left house 
As soon as piya moved inside misha and gunjan came running towards her 
Misha : how was it ?did u like him and why didn't u called 
Piya :  it was wonderful , and sorry I forgot to call 
Gunjan : so is the marriage on? 
Piya blushed and said : definitely on 
Gunjan : wow , oh my god I m sooo excited 
Misha : what happened today ? 
Gunjan : we want all details ! 
Piya : well ...

Precap : our darling T's entry and preparation for abhiya's marriage ?


So how was it guys? Hope u liked it and I know abhiya's meeting was not so extraordinary but hoped like it . Please hit the like button and do give your lovely comments TC guys 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updt
abhiya meeting was superbπŸ˜ƒ
hope T doesn't create any problem
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally abhiya mil hi gaye...πŸ˜ƒ
...loved their meeting...😊..So the shaadi is on hun..
Waiting for their next meeting...😍
I hope ab yeh T koi naye probs na khade karde..🀒
Continue soon...
Edited by qwerty-sonu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...such a romantic ud...Wonderful...Abhay jaisa sadku bhi enjoy kar sakta hai...πŸ˜†...So shaadi is on..bt y T.. ??? Throw her in the dustbin...πŸ˜†...Loved the ud...n update soon..matlab soon...πŸ˜†...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Abhay and Pia's first meeting was amazing! 
it was a cute update!😊
loved itπŸ˜›πŸ˜›
continue soonπŸ˜›
Edited by abhiya0006 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it dear.
Abhiya convo was really sweet specially the cooking and music one.
loved abhiya first meeting.
omg t's entry, hope she doesn't create any problem.
lovely ff dear.
pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.
tc.Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yupieee abhiya met ...
loved their all conversation...
specially the cook one and dancing scene,and now u r my family member...
lovely piya blushing scene...
abhiya look so perfect na...
ohhh that t ntry hope she didnt do any harm to abhiya relation...
in next part abhiya marriage scene...
waiting 4 abhiya next meeting...hehheheh
cant wait
cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!
Abhiya moments were really cute...
So pia is starting to like abhay and he also seems to like her after meeting...
Waiting for abhiya marriage...
I feel T will bring problems...
Cont soon n thx for pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update... abhiya moments were adorable...dancing wid d waves ...wow!!!!!!!!!!! thx 4 pm:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow cute abhiya date. and now miss T is coming to create problems, but i hope abhiya deal with her properly πŸ˜ƒ