SwaRon FF : ADLAA BADLI Chap 13 Pg 93 *3rd oct'12 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ash.
it was superb cute.
Swaron detention was cute.
update next part asap.

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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..!! a beautiful update...loving swayam n sharon dis way 2... wonderful...do pm me fr sure d next update hmm..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi

*Res*


**Unres** ( This is the first and the only one - I couldn't stop myself )

Firstly, so happy on being the first one to like and comment. *pats her own back and dances around like crazy*

And now the update, gosh this was awesome.
Kya likhti ho app di. Maan na padega. Simply fab.

Detention part - Cute ! I mean Swayam admiring Sharon but still it was like Aw !! Apna majnu yaad aa gaya ! 😍

Sw: ( in his head..)...dude...yeh tune kya kiya...waise y did u follow her... - I was like rofl over here. Stupid Swayam Sharon ko nahi follow karega toh aur kisse karega. Lol ! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

sw : vahi jo mujhe karna cahiye - Again I was like - Yay yay !! Ab aayega scene. But you ditched me. *sob* 😛 😭

sw : oye behenji i noe ki me bohot HOT hu! but iska matlab ye nahi ki tum is baat ka undue-advantage lo! - This one again was a great punch. Gosh Tannu toh ek smile de de bas woh hi hum sab ko paagal karne ke liye kaafi hai. He's so cute and so hot ! ☺️😍

Sharon in mini skirt - Finally we get the real Sharon back - she must be looking as beautiful as ever. No wonder Swayam got a shock at that one. 😉

Sw: HAWT!!! - Here I was again rofl !! Gosh, one second he's the saty-away types and the other second he's lost in her. Well, anyone would lose their senses seeing Sharon like that. 🤣

Sw: I wtd to c Kria... - Ahahahaha ... Kya bahana banaya .. Way to go Swayam !! He's so cute ! 🤣 🤣

Sw: i am sorry!!! And left... - Finally. For a change attitude choda isne apna. 😳

Hope to see more of Swaron ( this one also had - but you know na what I mean 😉 ). You know na thoda sa lovey-dovey episode. 😆 I loved it to the fullest. 😊

Update soon. 😊

I know I've commented for the first time. But this won't be the last. 😳


ohh so u comented !!!! hmm..u seem a realy big fan of dis ff !! thnxx re...nd pls muje ye sb bolke sharminda na kro yaar...dis chap is nt ritten by me !! well i dnt remember hu ol had written it...i actually dnt emember bt dat HAWT portion..m damn sure abi has written it..me uski updates chutki me pehchan jati hu...haha v r realy gud frnz na dazz wy..nd diii???? gal r u nuts?? m 14 !!!! so dnt col me dii m sure u ll b elder hehehe...i no u mst b shockd noeing my age 😆
btw thnxx for likin 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. Swayam's PoV and reactions were a treat to read. Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...
*unres*...

Firstly,i thank god ki finally u updated ash madem !!!😆

Secondly,coming to ur update~
hmmm...wat do i say...just pretty Fab !❤️
loved the part where swayam couldn't resist being close to sharon...😳
hayyyee...they are sooo adorable !😍
sharon with full on anger ...their detention...kya yaar...kuch bhi nahi..just fights...no intense scene ?💔
i ws expecting here !!!u are quiet unpredictable dear...😲
well...koi nai...next time we want *intense scene* for sure nai toh u'll regret my dear buddy ...😆

I really loved ur update to the core...infact it was just amazinnn !!
👏
so,continue writing...nd pls thoda jaldi update nai toh next time jhutte nd chappals se comment start krungi...😆
Mark my words dear...😉

Thirdly nd lastly,u did not comment on my FF *angry*🥺
😭


Edited by mEgical_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and i loved the update :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

thanks for the pm and i loved the update :D


Nikki <3


ur most welcm nd thnx 4 likin d update !!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: marauder

Awesome. Swayam's PoV and reactions were a treat to read. Loved it.


aaah !!!!! thnx sirish..arrgghh dats ur name rite?? lol i jst took a guess...its smthin lyk dat i no...😊...btw thnxx for likin d update !!!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wah Bhabhi ji...kitna sundar likha hai..i loved it...
i loved how Swayam apologised and how sharon was hesistant to wear short skirt...ha ha..
continue soon...
thanks for the PM...
Edited by swaron95 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme update.. jst lved it... and thnx fr the pm



ab jaldi se nxt update kardo...:))

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