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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update, beautiful writing, keep up the good work, looking fwd for next updt 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

u guys have high expectation in my ff...hope i keep up that.😃



tu fikar hi naa kar dear. class ke baad batayenge naa ki class kaisa tha and all...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sgumi82



tu fikar hi naa kar dear. class ke baad batayenge naa ki class kaisa tha and all...😉



missing ur OS di
i know i know main hamasha ghum phir kar aapke OS par he aati hoon par kya karun
apke OS pe main fida
uski ( OS ki ) hain hee aisa ada
ke hum na reh pae uss se juda 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Shumi

On this thread after almost a month... As mentioned to you, i am backlogged..
Had to go through the previous 3 parts again just to refresh ... Commenting on Part4 now... Still have 3 more to go...Hopefully would get a chance to go through the remaining parts within this coming week...


PART-4

siddhi was enjoying the cardamom flavor of kulfi ice pop My favourite.. I actually removed pista kulfi i had and started eating to continue reading...

rohit:'😆 may be...'while he was laughing his cell rang.it was raveena calling.

rohit: ' bol ravee...😃'he put the cell in speaker.
These scenes can only happen in you FF though.. Imagining your sweetu Rohit sweetly talking to Raveena...

siddhi stood with dripping kulfi pop in her left hand ,putting her hand down allowing the kulfi to drip on the ground and licking her lower lip ...a kind of cleaning the kulfi sticking on her lip. Excellent description.. 👍🏼

siddhi:'we are not late......hamai thodi patha hai...2nd period is yours...😒' instead of saying sorry she justified her late and stood holding the melting kulfi pop in her hand... This is Siddhi we see even in Parichay of old... No changes...

kunal:' yesterday i send the circular😡...and it is put up on the class notice board too...' he dis agree with her.

siddhi:' hamai nahi patha...😒' she was adamant.

rohit:' sorry...sir...' he apologized behalf of her too.

kunal:'don't waste my time...come in...' he meant it.

Kunal - Siddhi nok-zhok....👏👏

kunal:' miss malikkk...😡' he got annoyed to see the class is getting distracted by her.

siddhi:' i am done sir...' she threw the kulfi stick in the bin and rushed to her seat wiping her hand in her skirt.

Gr8 description again... 👏
kunal:' anand...you do it with her...😊' he thought by paring with anand she can do better.

That was the original pairing in parichay too..
anand:😒...he could not refuse him.

shilpa:'mai jo kuch khaaungi...😛' pani puri appeared in front of her eyes...her mouth started watering. This was hilarious...🤣

siddhi:'...
khaaun gi nahi kahun gi...😡' she corrected. 🤣

siddhi:'mai yeh lambhu chopda ki baat kar rahi hun...😡' she cleared her confusion. 🤣

students:😆...365.2425 days...' few students repeated teasingly.
Good one... 👏👏

siddhi:'par...aaj thak meri client ka suhaag raat nahi hua hai...C-night nahi hua hai...😡' suddenly she yelled at the top of her lungs.

students:😆 what is this C-night?...' some asked as if they did not understand her short forum of Consummation night.

students:'may be Crime night...😆' some answered in law language.

students:' ... C-night ...pati patni are partners in Crime...😆...'

All above sequence...
🤣🤣🤣


siddhi:'me larddd...note all this point...😡...' she said taking a deep breath to calm herself.

kunal:
'... judge tumare har ek bakwas ko note nahi karen gay...😡' he got irritated with C-night discussion.

students:😆...good point anand...' students enjoyed it.

siddhi:'sabooth?...😲😕...' she got confused for a second.

siddhi:' well...my client itself is a sabooth...thay kho mere client kali jaise malik ko!...suhaag raat kay fikr mai na kuch khati hai na kuch peethi hai... kitni dubli pathli ho gaye hai...😭' she was emotionaled.

kunal:' what nonsense ...😡' he could not maintain his patient further.

siddhi:
' nonsense kyun?😡...me lard...suhaag raat!...mathlab C-night har ek shaadi shuda aurat ka adhikar hai😡...iss case mai ek masoom aurat ka abmaan hua hai😡... uss ka adhikar china gaya hai...hindu ritual shaadi kay saath phere ka dishonour hua hai...😡' she spoke non stop.

students:🤣
All above sequence
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 C-night - crime night , dublee patli..
Shumi, you are truly blessed writer with tons of imagination...


anand:'...
my lard ...sustain the objection...😆' he contradicted her.

siddhi:'over rule...😡'

annd:'sustain..😆'

siddhi:'over rule...😡'

annd:'sustain..😆'


kunal:'the court is adjourned...😡...' he got up from the seat.

Good Anand - Siddhi nok-zhok...

rohit:' got it..😛...ravee...you can help us...😃'

raveena:'mai?...😕'

rhoit:'yep...do one thing...leak out
the question paper...😉'

raveena:' kya!...😲...'

raveena:'nahi ...nahi...i can not...tell anand to bring...😒'

anand:' no way...i don't want to get involved in these type of things..😲' immediately he refused...
Rohit, Raveena and anand all very similar in their behaviours as in parichay.. Raveena again Khandaani Chorni with Rohit the mastermind..


kunal:'i was expecting one more gold medalist in our family...gold madel tho kya...plastic ka medal bhi door door thak nazar nahi aara ha hai...😡'
Good one 👏👏

seema:'C-night! yeh kya hotha hai?😕...new mosquito repellent hai kya...😕... good night jaise...😃'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

students:'😃...sir hug has many health benefits too. It has been found that it is essential for healthy social, psychological and physical development.it also helps to build a good immune system, decrease the risk of heart disease, and decrease levels of the stress hormone cortisol...helps to control your anger...😛' they tried to convince him.
Good explainations about reasons for having Hug..👏👏👏

siddhi:' 😕... she stood weak on her feet...she could not move...after few nano seconds...finally kunal came forward , with slight hesitation , slowly put his left arm across her back...circled around her shoulder...hold her upper arm and gently pulled her close to him as a action of cordial hug! his right hand was still in his jeans pocket...primitively she felt his hard chest mussels and strong arms on her shoulder...soon she felt the smoothness of his white shirt and his body odor ...it was her first sensual fragrance for a men! originated a warm fuzzy feeling inside her...she gradually realized that her nervousness was draining out of her and she was melting in the warmth of his hug...as her cheek was sticking to his chest she could hear his loud and regular heat beat...his harmonic heart beat hypnotised her!...it was like speaking to her tiny little heart...saying some thing in her ear...in response to it unconsciously and elegantly she slide her right arm around his hip... it was a SIDE TO SIDE HUG!...she wonder about her own reaction...and it was the wonderful moment of her's.

students:' heart to heart...we want heart to heart hug😛...
.a tight bear hug...😛' they started demanding.

' kaash aaj KISS DAY hota...😍...


Shumi, you are really great in romantic writings... Just reading and imagining what the scenes could be, even the epi around C-night in parichay pale in comparison...

Again, thoroughly enjoyed reading this part.. Will comment on the remaining3 parts as soon as iget chance.. I have no doubt those will be better than the ones so far.. Your each part gets better and better which increases the bechaini on what to expect next...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamrish

Hi Shumi

On this thread after almost a month... As mentioned to you, i am backlogged..
Had to go through the previous 3 parts again just to refresh ... Commenting on Part4 now... Still have 3 more to go...Hopefully would get a chance to go through the remaining parts within this coming week...


PART-4

siddhi was enjoying the cardamom flavor of kulfi ice pop My favourite.. I actually removed pista kulfi i had and started eating to continue reading...

rohit:'😆 may be...'while he was laughing his cell rang.it was raveena calling.

rohit: ' bol ravee...😃'he put the cell in speaker.
These scenes can only happen in you FF though.. Imagining your sweetu Rohit sweetly talking to Raveena...

siddhi stood with dripping kulfi pop in her left hand ,putting her hand down allowing the kulfi to drip on the ground and licking her lower lip ...a kind of cleaning the kulfi sticking on her lip. Excellent description.. 👍🏼

siddhi:'we are not late......hamai thodi patha hai...2nd period is yours...😒' instead of saying sorry she justified her late and stood holding the melting kulfi pop in her hand... This is Siddhi we see even in Parichay of old... No changes...

kunal:' yesterday i send the circular😡...and it is put up on the class notice board too...' he dis agree with her.

siddhi:' hamai nahi patha...😒' she was adamant.

rohit:' sorry...sir...' he apologized behalf of her too.

kunal:'don't waste my time...come in...' he meant it.

Kunal - Siddhi nok-zhok....👏👏

kunal:' miss malikkk...😡' he got annoyed to see the class is getting distracted by her.

siddhi:' i am done sir...' she threw the kulfi stick in the bin and rushed to her seat wiping her hand in her skirt.

Gr8 description again... 👏

kunal:' anand...you do it with her...😊' he thought by paring with anand she can do better.

That was the original pairing in parichay too..
anand:😒...he could not refuse him.

shilpa:'mai jo kuch khaaungi...😛' pani puri appeared in front of her eyes...her mouth started watering. This was hilarious...🤣

siddhi:'...
khaaun gi nahi kahun gi...😡' she corrected. 🤣

siddhi:'mai yeh lambhu chopda ki baat kar rahi hun...😡' she cleared her confusion. 🤣

students:😆...365.2425 days...' few students repeated teasingly.
Good one... 👏👏

siddhi:'par...aaj thak meri client ka suhaag raat nahi hua hai...C-night nahi hua hai...😡' suddenly she yelled at the top of her lungs.

students:😆 what is this C-night?...' some asked as if they did not understand her short forum of Consummation night.

students:'may be Crime night...😆' some answered in law language.

students:' ... C-night ...pati patni are partners in Crime...😆...'

All above sequence...
🤣🤣🤣


siddhi:'me larddd...note all this point...😡...' she said taking a deep breath to calm herself.

kunal:
'... judge tumare har ek bakwas ko note nahi karen gay...😡' he got irritated with C-night discussion.

students:😆...good point anand...' students enjoyed it.

siddhi:'sabooth?...😲😕...' she got confused for a second.

siddhi:' well...my client itself is a sabooth...thay kho mere client kali jaise malik ko!...suhaag raat kay fikr mai na kuch khati hai na kuch peethi hai... kitni dubli pathli ho gaye hai...😭' she was emotionaled.

kunal:' what nonsense ...😡' he could not maintain his patient further.

siddhi:
' nonsense kyun?😡...me lard...suhaag raat!...mathlab C-night har ek shaadi shuda aurat ka adhikar hai😡...iss case mai ek masoom aurat ka abmaan hua hai😡... uss ka adhikar china gaya hai...hindu ritual shaadi kay saath phere ka dishonour hua hai...😡' she spoke non stop.

students:🤣
All above sequence
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 C-night - crime night , dublee patli..
Shumi, you are truly blessed writer with tons of imagination...


anand:'...
my lard ...sustain the objection...😆' he contradicted her.

siddhi:'over rule...😡'

annd:'sustain..😆'

siddhi:'over rule...😡'

annd:'sustain..😆'


kunal:'the court is adjourned...😡...' he got up from the seat.

Good Anand - Siddhi nok-zhok...

rohit:' got it..😛...ravee...you can help us...😃'

raveena:'mai?...😕'

rhoit:'yep...do one thing...leak out
the question paper...😉'

raveena:' kya!...😲...'

raveena:'nahi ...nahi...i can not...tell anand to bring...😒'

anand:' no way...i don't want to get involved in these type of things..😲' immediately he refused...
Rohit, Raveena and anand all very similar in their behaviours as in parichay.. Raveena again Khandaani Chorni with Rohit the mastermind..


kunal:'i was expecting one more gold medalist in our family...gold madel tho kya...plastic ka medal bhi door door thak nazar nahi aara ha hai...😡'
Good one 👏👏

seema:'C-night! yeh kya hotha hai?😕...new mosquito repellent hai kya...😕... good night jaise...😃'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

students:'😃...sir hug has many health benefits too. It has been found that it is essential for healthy social, psychological and physical development.it also helps to build a good immune system, decrease the risk of heart disease, and decrease levels of the stress hormone cortisol...helps to control your anger...😛' they tried to convince him.
Good explainations about reasons for having Hug..👏👏👏

siddhi:' 😕... she stood weak on her feet...she could not move...after few nano seconds...finally kunal came forward , with slight hesitation , slowly put his left arm across her back...circled around her shoulder...hold her upper arm and gently pulled her close to him as a action of cordial hug! his right hand was still in his jeans pocket...primitively she felt his hard chest mussels and strong arms on her shoulder...soon she felt the smoothness of his white shirt and his body odor ...it was her first sensual fragrance for a men! originated a warm fuzzy feeling inside her...she gradually realized that her nervousness was draining out of her and she was melting in the warmth of his hug...as her cheek was sticking to his chest she could hear his loud and regular heat beat...his harmonic heart beat hypnotised her!...it was like speaking to her tiny little heart...saying some thing in her ear...in response to it unconsciously and elegantly she slide her right arm around his hip... it was a SIDE TO SIDE HUG!...she wonder about her own reaction...and it was the wonderful moment of her's.

students:' heart to heart...we want heart to heart hug😛...
.a tight bear hug...😛' they started demanding.

' kaash aaj KISS DAY hota...😍...


Shumi, you are really great in romantic writings... Just reading and imagining what the scenes could be, even the epi around C-night in parichay pale in comparison...

Again, thoroughly enjoyed reading this part.. Will comment on the remaining3 parts as soon as iget chance.. I have no doubt those will be better than the ones so far.. Your each part gets better and better which increases the bechaini on what to expect next...


thank you very much dude for giving me such a wonderful comments quoting the lines.i know it takes more time to comment than to read...i am overwhelmed to see i have male readers too who like my ff...thank you very much for taking your time to read and comment in spite of your busy life .your comments means a lot to me...that doesn't mean that you have hurry in reading my ff...take ur time...i will be more happy if u read my ff only during ur free time...if at all you get😆

Edited by shumi. - 13 years ago
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part-8

it was shiddi-shilpa's study cum bed-room...around 11pm.

shilpa was sleeping on the bed,spreading her hands and legs ,covering three fourth of the bed as if she was drunk...at the left edge of the bed siddhi was lying on her side and trying hard to sleep keeping her eyes wide open.
as she is scared of darkness she never switch off the lights.she was staring aimlessly looking strangely at each and every object of the room as if she is looking them first time.for the past one hour she is trying to close her eyes but could not...as soon as she shut her eyes kunal's face kept appearing proximate to her face ,as intimate as he was in the library!

that was a ever memorable moment for her...she loved the way he said sorry with attitude! in fact he did not said sorry to her...she recollected ,
to find out exactly what he said....' mujay sorry bolna achcha nahi lagta...par mai bol sakta hun ...if necessary...'

'where did he say sorry?😕...he said he can say if necessary...what a attitude!...'that was the best part of him.she liked that.she never impressed by goody goody type guys...like anand, rohit and vikram...they are all like wannabe joru ka ghulams .while she was thinking gradually her eyes got closed...now she could see kunal in close up as he stood in the library...fenced by his arms...his chest was close to her face...she raised her head and kept staring at his face...he leaned towards her face,
looking right in to her eyes
...more close to her face...as close as she could feel his sensational breath...she was puzzled ...his face was so close that his silky hair tickling her cheek ...she was thrilled....why she was not trying to stop him!...she was worrying too...he tilted his face slightly...leaned more close to her face...towards her lips...and a quick peck on her lip...lip-on-lip contact.....innocent and sexy...and sent a message ..."I want to kiss you and hopefully, sometime soon...make out...'' that message was beyond amazing...she opened her eyes with ear to ear wide smile and blush!...it took some time to understand what is what...when she understood she was jolted! ...jerked up from the bed...looked around shockingly...touched her lips and checked...it was her fantasy!...illusion! she sat on the bed resting her cheeks in her palms...'yeh mujay kya ho raha hai...?' she was tensed for a long time...finally when she fall asleep it was around 5pm.

next day when siddhi woke up it was too late...shilpa was about to leave...

siddhi:😲 😡...hey stupid shilpu! ...😡 don't you know that you should wake me up...'she screamed sitting on her bed for no valid reason.

shilpa:' wake you up! haaa...😲...tu tho ghode bech kay sorahi thi...😡' she gave her back.

siddhi:

shilpa: 'waise mai break fast bana di hun...get ready to college...'

siddhi:...😡...' she jumped down from the bed and rushed to wash room.when she came out of the wash room shilpa was already left.

'in hurry siddhi pulled out some cloths from her almirah...' i was planning to dress up nicely today...poora chaupat ho gaya...😡'she was angry on herself. when she reached the college it was 15 minutes left to end first period which was KC sir's class...she almost ran in the corridor ...she removed her sandal , picked them in her hand and ran till she reached her class room door...she stopped for a while outside the class room to calm down, her feet were yet to come to rest...she put her sandal down and pushed her feet in, wiped her face, fixed her hair and dress before she could enter the class, show up to KC!

when she entered the class she got pissed to see a substitution teacher was sitting and chilling, students were chatting and relaxing...

rohit: 'kya hua?... why are you late ?...😃'

siddhi:'😒... don't ask me... sab yeh shilpu kay wajai se...😡' she fall on her seat.

rohit:'haan...haan...kabhi mere wajai se...kabhi shilpa kay wajai se...kabhi KC sir kay wajai se...tumare wajai se tho galati hota hi nahi...😆...'he teased her.

siddhi:' tch! don't nag me...i am upset now...😔' her face was inflated.

rohit:'for what?...😕'

siddhi:'wo ...mai...😃 😛...' when she was about to say ...suddenly her face turned as bright as 100
watt bulb looking at KC at the door!


kunal:'excuse me...😊' he entered the class.students were confused about his surprised entry that too when his period is going to end with in 5 , 10 minutes... the substitution teacher took that opportunity and left the class.

students:😕

kunal:' sorry guys for not taking the class today and tomorrow also i will not able to come to class...this classes i will compensate day after tomorrow...😊' he paused to see students reaction.

students:' day after tomorrow? day after tomorrow is saturday...😕'they were confused.

kunal:'yep ...i need to keep special class to complete my syllabus...by the way i have an important trial tomorrow...i wish you all come to the court to witness my trial...i already got the special permission and made seating arrangements for you all...' he was in hurry while talking to the students.

students:😊

kunal:' like to see you all tomorrow in the court...😊' with that he said bye to the students and left the class room
in haste.

next day:

bombay high court:

the court room was jam packed with final year law students along with the family and friends of the accused.

as soon as the judge arrived the trial was started.

it was a long pending and a closed case of bombay district court, appealed by the accused to the high court for reconsideration.

it was the case of a youth who has been suspected as terrorist as his first name is Mohammed and he is a Muslim...he was arrested under POTA act and was constantly forced / ill treated , humiliated by the police for his confession and admission of his guilt.

government lawyer: ' my lord...it is a crystal clear case, he belongs to a muslim community and most of his friends are muslim,, his grand parents live in pakistan...and one of his great grand father's name is in terrorist list...so he must be a terrorist... he is a terrorist...😡' he said with full confident.

kunal:😊...he stood smiling at him.

government lawyer:' he should not be set free..this type of people will create havoc in the country, revoke the laws of the land, disturb peace, affect fraternal relations...he is dangerous to our country...

kunal:' my lord...i agree that there are a very few misguided youth who have spoiled the spirit of Islam, disturbed the Muslim norms, above all marginalized the facets and tenets of the Al Quran-the holy book...' he paused.

kunal:'...that doesn't mean all muslims are terrorists...😒' he defended.

government lawyer:'my lord...all muslims may not be terrorist but all the terrorists are muslim...' he enforced his arguments.

kunal:'excuse me!😡...i think our lawyer is weak in GK...😆'he said sarcastically.

spectators:😆

government lawyer:'objection my lord...😡...'he yelled in a funny way.

spectators:😆

judge:'objection over ruled...😊'

kunal:'😊...
i think our lawyer don't know that all the terrorist acts were not by muslims...few for example are...

In 1882, Tsar Alexander was assassinated and 21 other innocent people were killed. He was assassinated by a non-Muslim named Gnacy Hryniewhcki.

On 6 September 1902, US president Mc. Kinley was assassinated by a non-muslim anarchist named Leon Czolgosz.

On 1st October 1920, a bomb blast in Los Angeles Times newspaper building and 21 innocent people were killed. The bomb blast was done by two Christians James and Joseph.

On 16 April 1925, a bomb blast in St. Nedelya Church in Sofia, capital of Bulgaria in which 150 people were killed and more than 500 were injured. This attack was done by communist party of Bulgaria and they were non-Muslims. It was a biggest terrorist attack in Bulgaria.


On 9 October 1934, king Alexander 1 of Yugoslavia was assassinated by a non-Muslim gunman named Vlada Georgieff.


On 1st may 1961, the first US craft was hijacked by Ramerez Ortiz who was a non-Muslim.

On 19th April 1995, federal building bombing, Oklahoma City was done by two Christians named
Timothy and Terry in which 166 innocent people were died and more than 100 injured.
does everyone go around attacking Christians? 😡

From 1941 to 1948 after World War II 259 terrorist attacks were conducted by Jewish terrorist by Irgun, Haganah and others.


On 22nd July 1946, bombing of king David Hotel was done by Menachem Begin. It was a biggest terrorist attack against the British history mandate.At that time Menachem Begin was declared terrorist by the British government. Later on after few years he becomes the prime minister of Israel and after few years gets the Noble Prize for peace.

On January 30,1948
Mahatma Gandhi was assassinated by Nathuran Godse who was a Hindu / Brahmin.

On 31st October 1984, Prime Minister Indira Gandhi was assassinated by her Sikh Guard.


On 21 May 1991,Rajiv Gandhi was assassinated
by human bomber and 14 other innocent people were killed with him. this was done by LTTE group from Sri Lanka,

In UK, since hundred years IRA (Irish republican army) is conducting terrorist attacks. They are Catholics but they are not called as catholic terrorists, but as IRA...' he listed in chronological order.

spectators:👏👏👏
👏
judge:' order...order...order...' he made them calm down.

kunal:'...by all these facts this has been proved that terrorism is not the monopoly of Islam. It is prohibited in Islam. why people always try to malign Islam?...😡'

spectators:👏

kunal: ' very sad to say ...over the past few years, there has been a growing tendency to dub Muslims as terrorists...'

recently Bollywood king Shah Rukh Khan ,while he was going to give a lecture at Yale University were he was honoured as a Chubb Fellow, was detained at New York airport ,because he has a Mulsim name.same thing happend to him in 2009 too.

pathetic to say our former President Abdul Kalam was twice
detained at New York airport with US security officials even taking his jacket and shoes to check for explosives,because he has a Mulsim name.

kunal:' my loard...MUSLIMS are not terrorists, they are our friends and fellow citizens...because of few misled , suspecting all Muslims and arresting who ever has the name Khan / Mohammed is goofy!...ridiculous...!😡...'

judge:😊 ...he was continuously noting down his points...

kunal:' ...hence my lord... as we know
Better ten guilty persons go free than one innocent person be punished i request you to release Mohammed Iqbal Khan from all the charges, as there is no evidence against him and he is absolutely innocent ...😃 ...'

spectators:👏

kunal:'...and...and i strongly demand the government to pay highest compensation for he spent one year of his precious life in the jail and the mental trauma his mother went through...😊' each and every point he put forth to judge very clearly with strong points.

judge:'looking in to all the points i consider
Mohammed Iqbal Khan as innocent and release him from all the charges with due respect...' he wrote the judgement.

spectators:'wooo...👏'
their cheer reached the roof.

judge:' ...and i recommend the government to pay him deserving compensation...😊' he ended the judgment and left the court room

Iqbal Khan:' 😭...he over whelmed with joy ...jumped out of the witness box and ran to kunal randomly pushing every one.

Iqbal Khan:'😭...thank you very much sir😭...thank you very much...😭thank you very much...😭...aap ko andaza nahi hai aap ne mere leyeh kya kiya hai😭...aap ne mera career waapa kiya hai...mera pyaar waapas kiya hai...samaaj mai mera sammaan waapas kiya hai.....mujay meri zindagi di hai...😭 ...when i lost all my hopes...you came as an angel to me...😭' he winced with pain.

kunal:'😲 ...mujay angel banane ki zaruri nahi hai😊...mai ne srif mera kaam kiya hai...bas mera nominal fees mere office mai jama karde na...😉' he said in a jovial tone to soothe
Iqbal Khan's out burst emotions.

Iqbal Khan's widow mother:' 😭 ...yeh aap ka badappan hai beta...aap ne mere leyeh bhagwan se bhi bad kar hai...mujay mera jawaan beta waapa kiya...mera budhape ka sahara waapas diya hai...' that illiterate mother was about to fall in his feet.

kunal:' 😲...maaji!... yeh kya kar rahe ho...😲' he hold her shoulder and stopped her before she stooped down to ground.

Iqbal Khan's widow mother:' 😭

kunal:'bas aap dua mai mujay yaad kijiyeh...😃...' he left the court room leaving them behind.


as soon as he came out...

he was surrounded by his students and media people and they bombarded him with non stop questions some are irrelevant to the case...he did not understand who was asking and what?...after answering their question keeping his temper cool he came out of them to get an auto.when he was about to get in to the auto unexpectedly he saw siddhi standing with her friends and seriously discussing.un
til then siddhi was completely out of his mind because of his duty conscious and the media distraction ...he looked at her.coincidentally she too looked at him!

siddhi:'ek minute...😃' she said to her friends and came rushing to kunal.seeing her running towards him, he stopped getting in to the auto... a kind of awaiting for her.she was wearing a light apple green long silk skirt with tiny flowers scattered over the skirt,long matching blouse with short sleeve ,no scarf or dupatta on her shoulder.with a million dollar smile looking as cool as a school girl! his eyes glued at her...he could not stop himself staring at her until she reached him.

siddhi:'congratulation...😃' she was gasping.

kunal:' ...
' he realized that , all at once she occupied his mind.


siddhi:'kunal!😛... you have an amazing command over your profession...long pending case you solved it in just one hearing...terrific!😛...you won against the government!😛...'she appreciated him with all her zeal.

kunal:' thank you...😃'he grinned decently.


siddhi:'congrats...😃'she said again and extended her fair hand with neatly trimmed and polished nails, a solid plane finger ring in the ring finger.

kunal:😊...it was unexpected by him! he kept himself at ease by
concealing his reaction and extended his hand for shake without showing any hesitation.

siddhi:' 😃...she slide her elegant palm in to his and shook gently, her palm was as soft as silk , as light as a feather ,
he felt a chill breeze passed on the back of his neck!...a moment later he realized that he was holding her hand for more than necessary.with a pleasing smile he smoothly took back his hand from her's.soon she left him puzzling and mingled with her friends!


next day satruday! KC's special class day!

as it was not her regular college,instead of her usual skirt and blouse she
wore a cool blue color georgette anarkali churidar with chiffon matching duppatta having tissue lace at the borders,narrow and tight pyjama catching at her thighs and ankles, gave seductive vision...she tied her straight-silky hair as a single pony tail...flowing on her back,leaving front bangs floating on her fore head , big silver ear rings and matching white silver bangles.

it was 945am.government law college:

the class was about to start by 10am.students who came bit early were waiting in the class room restlessly.soon siddhi and others also joined them.

rohit:'..let us go out...' he came out of the class room along with other class mates.
except the final year students other class rooms were empty.the corridors were unusually quite...while students were standing in the corridors and chatting kunal joined them at 9:56am.all the students were looking different with their casual wear.

kunal:' good morning...😃'

students:' good mor...'some of the students could not complete their wish when they saw him ...

students:😛 !...their eyes rooted on him!
he was in blue jeans and half sleeve olive green ,round necked ,spun T-shirt! first time they are seeing him in T-shirt! he was looking 10years younger than what he is!...his body shape and physical appearance together with wide manly, stubble face made him look hot and attractive.

kunal:'chalo...get in... we are already late...😊' he entered the class expecting the students to follow him.

students:'please sir😒... class room mai nahi...' they refused to go with him.

kunal:' then?...😕'he looked at the students with a question mark at the same time his eyes searched for siddhi and confirmed her presence.

students:' we will sit in the open space ...under the tree...😛'they suggested.

kunal:'under the tree?😊...'

students:' ya... ...we don't want to attend our special class in that regular class room pressure...😔'

kunal:'fine...i have no issue...😃' he agreed to them.
soon they all moved to a big banyan tree inside the college compass itself...it is a
52 years old banyan tree with its thick roots rooted to the ground, appeared like cluster of trees...very popular place for the students to hang out with their friends when they bunk the class!

look at the tree!😛



the students quickly pushed the fallen dry leaves with their feet, sat randomly on the ground , in their comfortable posture . kunal stood facing them and gave time for the students to settle down.after they settled he started giving the lecture about Child ponography Laws in India.sitting under the cool shadow of a big banyan tree, sun rays peeping here and there in between the gaps of the branches and leaves... fresh air with plenty of oxygen... the feeling of chill breeze...rustling leaves ...chirping birds...top of all the calm of the quiet surrounding ...students thoroughly delighted by Mother Nature!

it was a real fun for the students to sit on the mud ,with their fingers secretly digging the mud ,crushing dry leaves and twigs, secretly dropping small stones in side the shirts of the other student who was sitting in front of them...

after 45 minutes of his continuous lecture he gave them 15 minutes break on demand.all the students got up dusting the mud from their butt! kunal went to the staff room to rest and refresh.

raveena:'anand ...i am feeling hungry...😔' she made a cry face.

siddhi:' me too...feel like eating some thing...'

rohit: ' par college canteen tho aaj band hai...never mind i will go out and bring some thing for you...😊' he can do any thing for her.

siddhi:' that will be very nice...😊' she send rohit and anand to buy eatables and come.vikram and pinku were absent on that day. by the time rohit and anand back with snacks siddhi want to have fun.

siddhi:'raveena...do you know how to climb tree?😛'

raveena:'no😒...why?...😕

siddhi:'...mujay aata hai...i can...😛...i am going to...' she said looking at the tree trunk.

raveena:'what!😲 ...'

siddhi: ' watch...😉'she threw her sandals,tied the dupatta around her hip,pushed back her bangles, kept the feet on the bark knots ...circled the trunk with her both hands...she climbed the tree by creeping along the trunk...

student:'wow!...😛...' they looked at her with amusement.all the student stood surrounding the tree cheering her.finally ...after a great struggle she succeeded in reaching the lower branch of the tree and managed to sat on that branch safely, hanging her legs down.


siddhi:' yo...😛...it is thrilling😛 ...' she said shaking her legs , looking down her friends.while she was expressing her experience students saw kunal coming back.

students:'hey...siddhi😲...get down...KC sir is coming...'

siddhi:'what!...😲' she thought before kunal could come rohit and anand may come back so that she can get down with their help.

raveena:' jaldi...get down...😲'

siddhi:😲...yo...i don't know how to get down from a tree.....😒.'

students:'omg!😲...' when they were wondering kunal was approaching them.all the students including raveena quickly went back and took their places to attend the lecture as if nothing happend.

siddhi:😲...she sat helplessly on the tree branch itself.

kunal: '...sab log aagayeh?😊...shall we continue...?😊' he asked the students in general.

students:' rohit and anand were yet to come...'they said looking at siddhi sitting on the tree.kunal noticed that siddhi was missing, he thought she might have gone with rohit and anand.

kunal:' never mind...we will start...i want to wind off the class with in half an hour...' he started teaching about Section 377 of the Indian Penal Code where as the students were unable to concentrate on his lecture...they were secretly looking up at siddhi and chuckling without kunal's knowledge.

siddhi: 😔 with no other go she was sitting, biting her nail and deeply thinking how to get down from the tree.suddenly she felt some thing creeping near her hip, may be some insect. she quickly removed the dupatta from her hip to check what it was...while doing so dupatta slipped from her hand and directly fall on kunal's head who was standing right below her ...

kunal: 😲...from his head the dupatta slide on his face ...all the way down to the ground...

kunal:'what...the...😲 😡' he looked at the dupatta and looked up to find where from it fall...

siddhi:😲...she closed her eyes and shut her mouth tightly with her hands.

students:😆 they burst out with laughter...now no need for them to control or hide their laugh...

kunal:' tum!...😲' he was dumbfound to see siddhi high above the tree.

siddhi:😔...she had no guts to open her eyes and look at kunal.

kunal:' what the heck you are doing there?...haan😡...' instantly he lost his temper.

siddhi:😒...she opened her eyes and looked down to kunal.

kunal:'can't you hear?😡...come down...😡' he said raising his head and looking at her. all the students got up from their place and joined kunal in the mission of bringing down siddhi.

raveena:'...she don't know how to get down it seems...😒' she said hesitantly.

kunal:' non sense😡...get down...😡' he screamed at siddhi.

siddhi:...sir...raveena ne kaha na😔...i don't know how to get down...😒' she spoke from the tree.

kunal:'you are unbelievable...😡' he was furious.

siddhi:' believe me sir😒...mai sach kahe rahi hun...😔'
she said keeping her face as innocent as baby.

kunal:😡...he don't know what to do next to bring her down.

siddhi:' sir...will you mind helping me?...😛' she requested.


kunal:' jaldi uttro...'he extended his one hand to her.

siddhi:' thanks...😛' she bend down to reach his hand but could not.

siddhi:'sir...haath thoda lambha kijiyeh...😃'

kunal:'...serial waala magical hand nahi hai mera...to extend my hand as long as you want...huuu...😡'

siddhi:
...looking at her upset face he raised on his toe and extant his hand more close to her...she too bend down little more ...after a long struggle she caught hold of his hand.

kunal:'jump down...😡' he gripped her hand taking care that his grip was not too tight to the extant that it can hurt her.

siddhi:'jump!😲...'

kunal:'then what...😡...'

siddhi:' if i jump i don't think i can reach safely ...😒' she was scared.

kunal:'yeh baat tumai ab samaj mai aaye?😡...pehele tum neeche koodo...
i will take care of you...'he gave instructions how to jump down holding his hand.

siddhi:...she gathered all her strength and guts ...finally jumped on kunal...immediately he put both his hands on her hip to hold her from falling... due to her weight,imbalance jump and gravitational pull he could not succeed in his attempt, he left siddhi to slide on him...he tried to hold her hip to stop...his fingers slide above her hip over her rib cage...she was slipping down from his hold and he was inclining towards the ground.

kunal:😲... kunal could not balance himself. her seductive body sliding over him ..weaken his strength ...he fall on the ground
along with siddhi...siddhi safely landed on kunal rubbing her face with his one day stubble cheek...instantly she turned her face to avoid his sizzling cheek ...in that nano second she felt his quick peck on her lip!...the same lip-on-lip contact!...innocent and sexy!...with the mesmerizing message!...which she felt in the morning...but this time the message was different...'I got it...thank u...😛'.

students rushed to them for their help .they first helped siddhi to get up from kunal and then to kunal.every thing happend in no time.

kunal:'ouch!...'he stood holding his left elbow...when he fall his elbow hit the ground with force and got
bruised on it.

'wow😛...log sahi kahate hai...subha ka sapna sach hota hai...😲...'shiddhi stood astonishing.her morning fantasy came true before evening ! as she thought it was not her illusion,a sign of reality!

siddhi:'sir...aap teek tho ho na?...' she asked him with concern secretly looking at his pain filled face and bruised elbow.

kunal:😡 ... holding his elbow he gave a killer look at her as if he have no perception about their lip-on-lip peck.

siddhi:'sir...aap...😒'


kunal:'😡 class dismissed...all of you go home now...' he abruptly end the class as he can't continue the class with pain
.

by that time rohit and anand were back with hands full of snacks.

rohit:' class dismissed! 😲...kyun...?😕' he don't understand why all of sudden he dismissed the class.

students:😆 ...they giggled looking at siddhi.

rohit:'siddhi!😲...tum!...firse..?😡...' he understood that again she did some mischief with KC sir.

siddhi:'tch! 😔...' she put down her head.

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Edited by shumi. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Siddhi's dream came true lol 😆. Good job 👍🏼 keep up the great work and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey di edited n add something more 😳
first of all



for this superb update di n wow siddhis dream come true i am sorry i am not giving datailed comment but surely ek na ek din jarur doongi now coming to ur ff toh di bolne kee jarurat hee nahi hain u always make me speechless n the details u give i just love them n aapka ff khatam hone tak main thoda bahut law pakka seekh loongi n the info u gave in court scene i read each n every word too good di then the last scene was very funny specially tree scene wow siddhi falling over kunal its like dream only it is more than worth waiting n u r an awesome writer







Edited by sandy118 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM. First of all before going to SINAL- your take on Muslim- 👏 for that - I am not a Muslim and have many Muslim friends whose heads are always down every time the terrorist attack has been declared by Muslim community. So once again it was a pleasure to read your take on that.
Being an Indian Hindus and Muslims always had an issue due to the divide and rule policy by the rulers back then. So to read something secular like this is really a treat.

Your way of showing romance is indeed unique. I can actually picturise each and every scene and had goose bumps reading it.

Way to go Shumi 👏

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