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aishwarya_rox

@aishwarya_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Uh !! The moment I read the word slap I gt goosebumps ...do continue waiting for the next part eagerly :D

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Oh dear did u just ask shud I continue?? 😲 of course u shud 😊 when I was reading the last line it said anji slapped him n next line 'the end'.. Immediately I gave a 'what the' expression 🤣 waiting for the next part...

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ardis

@Mirza1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Good! Anjali slapped Arnav👏. It was high time that someone put Arnav in his right place.

Edited by sidra786 - 13 years ago

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mana2

@mana2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Nice OS plzz continue n do pm me the nxt part

Edited by mana2 - 13 years ago

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: mannymo
Nice one...for a change Anjali slapping ASR, good one ,please do continue...

ya i so badly want dis 2 happen in our serial too...itz high time somebody gives asr a hard time..

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: polly2312
Loved it. Seems like Khushi fainted because of the stress caused by Shyam's advances, but the doctor and Anjali think it is because of the pain Arnav has given her. Looking forward to read more of this story. Please continue!

thnx alot...yup dtz true...shez completely stressed out cuz of shyam...ya ll dfntly pm u on nxt partz 😊

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Good start - please continoue

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Lily2011

@Lily2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

ya shld cont. and pm me?

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

CHAP 2 - TROUBLE IN SIS-BRO RELATIONSHIP

arnav enters his room n SLAP...
anjali slaps arnav "tumne khushiji par haath utaya???

kaise karsakte ho tum ye chottey?wo tumhari patni hai...tum...humein yakeen nahi ho raha tum hamare chottey hi ho"

arnav- di maine kuch nahi kiya...maine to bas
anjali...hum se jhoot bolne ki koshish bhi mat karna chottey...hum ne tumhari aur doctor ki baat suni hai...AKAASSHH
arnav- di plz meri baat suniye
akash- di apne bulaya..kaisi hai khushiji ki tabiyat??
anjali- akash plz hamari help kariye...khushiji ko hamare room mein shift karne mein
arnav - what???di plz...
akaash - lekin di...
anjali- akash...kuch mat pochiye plz...chaliye..

akash took khushi to anjaliz room...

anjali - hum khushiji ko tumhare saath bilkul bhi nahi chodenge...tumhare saath rehkar unki aur tabiyat bigar jayegi

arnav ve decided nt to say anythng as he dint wanted 2 upset her further...

anjali reached d door...she turnz arnd...tears rolling down her cheeks...chottey aj tum humein arnav singh raizada nahi...arnav malik dikh rahe ho...n she leaves d room

those last words just pierced arnavs heart...he ws stunned dt his di wud hurt him so much...di ne kaise keh diye ye...di ne pehle aisi baat kabhi nahi ki mujhse...ye sab is khushi kumari gupta ki waje se ho raha hai...

ANJALIZ ROOM-
anjali is sitting nxt to khushi...khushi is stil unconcious...doc had said it ll take time for her to come back...n when she does make sure khushi stays happy...

anjali- khushi ji humein maaf kardijiye...humein pata nahi tha k ap k saath itna kuch ho raha hai...chottey aise nahi hai ...phir pata nahi kyu...

jst den arnav enters d room...di...
chottey humein kuch nahi sunna hai ...khushji ko araam ki zarurat hai so plz tum yaha se chale jao

arnav is stil standing der...2 most important people of his life...KHUSHI N HIS DI...both r angry n mad at him...n itz more painful since hez nt at fault dis time...

anjali- chottey shayad khushi ji tum ye cheez k liye maaf karde..par hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge !!!!

arnav sinks more...he cant take it anymore...he slowly leaves d room...giving one last look to his khushi...goes back to his room...

anjali is preparing 2 go 2 bed beside khushi ...somebody opens d door
anjali- "ap agaye...hum ap hi ka interzaar kar rahe the "

THE END

so hw ws it???
no prizes 4 guessing who entered d room😆

if only if i write d nxt part so d precap 4 dt is...

precap- devil ll b super xcited 2 c khushi lying on HIS BED...(evil evil evil)

ok srsly shud i cont????

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Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 13 years ago