dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
dont worry tina u'll rock it. nd my prayers are always with u.

update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 22
Sorry guys!i had 2 stdy so I ws offline'nw em bck wid a dazzling update..hope u like it!!i had planned the update differently bt it ws getting monotonous so I made few changes in the concept ov this update..hope u like it'
We ll b startng wid swaron sequence'ok...
Sh:ok I thnk we had enuff..z nt it??nw we ll fall sick if we ll b out tat long
Sw:alright lets go'bt hey u r 2 wet..wud u like 2 go 2 ur hostel all drenched??
Sh:do I hav another option??
Sw:ya!u cn come 2 ma apartment,dry ur clothes n then go bck
Sh:ya sure
N they went 4 his apartment'
Swayam opened the door n turned on the lights'sharon shrieked'
Sh:yuck!!its so messy!!!
Sw:oh!actually it's a bachelor s room u knw'
Sh:ya!i cn c tat!!bt its real pathetic..
Sw:oh come inside..lemme bring smthng 4 u 2 wear
N he went inside'sharon quickly started cleaning the room..he came out wid a towel gown'
Sw:oh!wot r u dng??leave it..it ll b f9..u go n change into this n hav a bath cx we had so much rain bath'n aftr tat change into ma tracks n I ll try 2 dry ur clothes'
Sharon took the gown n tracks n went inside'she had a bath n came out'he came 2 the room 2 give her coffee...she ws in his towel gown n her open wet hair were driving him crazy..he saw her n ws mseumerized wid them'he started 2 come closer 2 her..she backed off..he came more n more n more closer till she reached her'her heart beats got faster n faster'she ws havng goosebumps'.
Then he pulled his hands out 2wards her waist..she closed her eyes in passion'n then'he tied the knot ov the gown'(wot were u thnkng naughty grls??eh!!!)
N then she opened her eyes'swayam smirked'
Sw:u shud hav tied the gown or else it ll show off!!!
Sh:oh sorry!!
Sw:ok this is coffee 4 u.u change n come out quickly..me w8ng 4 u in the lobby!!!
Sh:ok..
N she came out in his tracks..she ws looking super hot'
Then they had coffee 2gethr,she changed into her clothes n he drove her bck 2 her hostel'
Morning'
Kriya woke up 4m her bed n in her mid sleep she said
K:happy birthday teddy!!
N then she remembred whr she ws'n evrythng wot happened 2 her n her teddy n tears rolled dwn 4m her face..just then her phone rang up'
K:hi eagle!!u up so early??
R:BC!u dint wish me n made a sad face
K:wish 4 wot??
R:gud!so u dnt even knw tat!wot a grlfrnd I ve got??
K:wot happened??
R:its my birthday sweetheart!
K:oh really??so r u scorpio??
R:yup honey!!
K:HAPPY BRTHDAY JAAN!!
R:thnks ma deary!!bt just a wish??wont u gimme sme gift?
K:hmmm'wot do u wnt??
R:well I wnt'ummm'.anythng u cn giv
K:ok!bt aftr clg'
R:ok!love u baby!!
K:love u 2!
N then she went 2 her college'all day she kept thnkng wot 2 giv him??n it ws a coincidence tat both men in her lyf had birthday on the same day!!
Aftr clg,rey ws thr 2 pick her up...she went wid him 2 his apartment n asked him 2 bring candles n othr decorations...
R:wow!tats awesome..ma birthday n I ve 2 do work
K:cmon na!i ll mk cake 4 u
R:cake??really??wow!!yummy!!
K:ok wich cake u d like 2 hav??
R:ummm..chocolate fudge..its ma fav
K:n mine 2!!n his also!!
R:his??whose??
K:n..no...n..nthng!!ok I ll make it 4 u!!
He brought the thngs tat she asked him 4m the recipe on her cell phone internet...
R:dear!y u watching recipe?
K:cx I nvr cooked in the kitchen..
R:then y u mkng it??cmon its ok
K:no I wanna make the 1st ever cake 4m ma own hands just 4 u wid ma own hands...
R:love u baby!!u r so sweet!!
N THEN SHE WENT INTO THE KITCHEN..REY HEARD SME FALLNG UTENSIL N RUSHED 2 THE KITCHEN'
R:wot happened BC?
N he saw kriya all in floor 4m head 2 toe'
K:nthng baby!actually I ws tryng 2 make the dough!!n it fell upon me...
R:oh!lemme do it 4 u!u just go n change...
K:no I ll do it!
R:ok lemme help u!!
(nw we knw tat rey z an awesome cook n kriya z nt)
So rey came n held her hands n started kneeding the dough wid her...his fingers were entwined within hers...
PRECAP:
Scene continued...

CHAPTER 23

So sorry guys!!cant update more..em contt being scolded by mom bt I tried hard n made this update...hope u bear wid me...

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
*Res*

Same problem mummy scolding me...I will giv u long comment tmrw..
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing udate shonu!!!!!!!!! i thought u would give some swaron romance but he went close to her to tie the gown it was unexpected nyc...n awww poor kriya completely in flour n wow kriyansh baking cake together luved it...n dont worry u'll pass wid gud result in ur exam...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
the start of reys birthday is awesome ...looking forward to it
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
well i em writing the baking n bday scene...
n swaron s sory hasnt yet started...well build it n then u ll love it!!
n r u guys interested in ViHa story or nt???
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsomme man tina damn i wanted 2 read on even oh well cntinue soon lolll listen 2 ur mum 1sttt hahha
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum prt tina...
swaron scene ws unexpectd...
poor kriya...
kriyaansh baking cake 2ogether ...wow...
ur result wil b gud...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update tina.
]that was awesome.
Continue next part soon.
wow both making cake 2gether dats gud.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update tina..lovd it..wat a coincidence...evn i love chocolate fudge cake

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