About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37**

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

An amazing update...u never cease to amaze me as a story-teller...brilliant..👏

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Very, very emotional and much needed chapter. My question is this: What will I do IF you ever end this??? This is like my morning coffee. I guess I will just have to...

read it again & again & again & again!

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Lovely1

@Lovely1

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

👏Loved it!

True portrayal of what a woman will feel - no matter how much ready Khushi is to forgive Arnav, the little prick inside her heart will keep coming back from time to time... So well written - I do not want to say as usual - because these gutwrenching moments cannot be written easily without feeling the character's pain. Kudos to you!

And - I love Arnav Singh Raizada in love - with tears in his eyes - that's best apology Khushi can get... No words can describe it! BTW, he is sooo understanding - it amazes me!

I want to sob...sob...sob... with a relief on face and a happy smile...for both of them!

Edited by Lovely1 - 13 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

thanks for the pm...

this is wonderful. you capture the emotions so...wonderfully 😆 i know redundant but there you go.

have you thought about writing with commercially?

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Loved the follow up.

Especially the 'salwar kameez' as a metaphor for what is 'cheap' in Arnav's thinking. Very good use of the analogy.

Now, now we finally come to the crux of the matter in the last part. Is Khushi strong enough to deal with the brutal hurt such a revelation has caused her?

Can't wait to see how you will proceed. *salivates*

Keep them coming!!

Thank you for your promtness in updating!

P.S: If you feel the need to read the author I recommended, I have all her ebooks. I can send them to you, if you so feel inclined.

Edited by Dinarochka - 13 years ago

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

AWWW... KHUSHI'S FEELING IS SOO JUSTIFIABLE...

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Vansuckville24

@Vansuckville24

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

It's an emotional update but showed a glimpse of the bond they share now.

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

awesome part

congo for new thread

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: nancy_ipkknd
An emotional update today...Totally justified reaction from Khushi...The sadist in me feels Khushi should not let Mr. ASR off the hook so easy :-)

Nancy

I agree...ASR ki class leni hi chayyiee!! Even in the show...my biggest qualm...one that I cannot accept is that how can he BELIEVE that someone whom he loves and for he has fallen can be so CHEP that she would do something like this? What does that say of you and your LOVE...that you fell for a FLUSY??😡

Sorry for ranting...BUT this is what I don't get. Can someone please shed light on this for me??😕

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christmas

@christmas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#200

i am hooked to this ff. the way you've taken your characters and gone about the story. so very true to them. just the right amount of submissive and controlling/demanding. loved this last chapter. really like the straightforward relationship they have.