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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb...luved it soo much...cant explain...!! really...jst rocking...the flashbacks wer rocking..
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Part 13

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As Geet came down she was surprised to see Sanchi there along with her husband. Geet welcomed them n said "Arre Sanchi tu kab aayi Delhi??? Tu toh Sweden main thi na???"(Sanchi when did u come to Delhi??? U were in Sweden right???)

Sanchi "Haan Geet hum log Sweden main hi the bas 2 hafte phele aaye hai woh Mummyji ki tabiyat kharab hogayi hai isiliye unse milne aaye hai."(Yes Geet we were in Sweden only. I came just 2 weeks back bcoz my MIL is not so good)

Geet "Woh theek toh hai na??? Kuch serious toh nahi hai na???"(She is fine na??? Nothing serious na???)

Sanchi with pain in her voice said "Tu unke tabiyat ke baare main kaise soch sakti hai jab ke unhone hamesha se tujhe... Chi mujhe toh khete huve bhi acha nahi lagta ke unhone teri saath aise baatein kahi"(How can u think about their health or anything after what they did to u... Chi i feel ashamed to even tell how they behaved with u)

Geet "Sanchi main un sab baato ko bhool gayi hu aur tu bhi bhool ja aur apni mummyji ka khayal rakh bikul waise jaise tu apni maa ka rakhti agar woh beemar hote"(Sanchi I have forgotten all those things n even u forget them n take care of ur MIL like u would take care of ur mom)

Sanchi "Geet tum inti achi kyu ho??? Uss din ke baad toh mujhe tumse nasre bhi nahi mila pa rahi lekin tumne hamesha mera saath diya."(Geet why are u so good??? After that day im not able to meet ur eyes)

"Kyuki woh Geet hai. Sab ka bhala sochne wali aur kisi ke khilaf kuch galat na dekhne wali na sochne wali. Woh Maan ki Geet hai n Im so proud to be her husband" said Maan from behind.(Bcoz she is Geet. Who thinks of everyone's good n cannot see anything worng happening neither can think of doing anything worng to others. She is Maan's Geet n Im so proud to be her husband)

All turned towards Maan n he smiled n went n stood next to Geet n kept his hands on her shoulders. Yash,Meera, Yug,Vrinda, Sanchi n her husband smiled listening to him while Geet was feeling so shy that she hid her face in Maan's chest.

Maan smiled at her blushing face n whispered in her ear "Mishti agar tum aise hi sharmati rahi toh main tumhe abhi sab ke samne kiss kar dunga phir mujhe mat kehne ke Maan bache dekh rahe hai" n smirked.(Mishti if u blush like this then I will kiss u here in front of everyone only n then dont tell me Maan kids are seeing)

Geet pushed him n ran inside. All others laughed seeing her blushing like a new bride n then Maan said "Mahi Shona aap apne kamre main jao aur khelo ok Papa todhi der main aate hai. Ok" n kissed her cheeks n sent her n the other kids to the room.(Mahi Shona go ti ur room n play. Papa will come in sometime ok)

He then turned to Sanchi n her husband n said "Sanchi tum khadi u ho betho na." n smiled at her.(Sanchi why are u standing come sit na)

Sanchi looking down said "Nahi jiju main toh bas Geet se milne aayi thi aur ab ja rahi hu."(No jiju i just came to meet Geet n now we are going)

Maan went towards Sanchi n made her look at him n said "Sanchi tum mujhe jiju sirf khene ke liye hi kheti ho. Tum toh meri baat bhi nahi mann rahi."(Sanchi u really dont mean me as ur jiju na u are calling me jiju just for formality na bcoz u arent listening to me only)

Sanchi "Nahi jiju aise koi baat nahi hai. Main bas aapse aur Geet se apni nasre nahi mila pa rahi uss din ke baad."(No jiju nothing like that. I cant meet urs n Geet's eyes after that day only)

Maan "Sanchi tumhe uss din ko yaad kar ke khush hona chaiye na ki dukhi kyuki woh tumhari zindagi ka sabse ahem din tha tumhari shaadi. Aur shaadi main aise chote mote hungame hote rehte hai"(Sanchi u should be happy when u remember that day as it was ur marriage day the most important day in ur life. N during marriage small issues happen like this one)

Sanchi "Jiju aapko woh chota mota hungama lagta hai. Agar uss din ke baad kuch galat ho jata toh main toh guilt ke wajhse mar hi jaati ke meri best friend ne aisa kadam isiliye uthaya kyuki usne woh sab suna meri shaadi ke din aur main phir kaise je pati."(Jiju that is a small issue for u. If anything wrong would have happened after that day i would have died with the guilt that my best friend took up that step after listening to all those things on my wedding day)

Geet who had come with snacks for the guests said "Main aisa kuch nahi karti Sanchi. Itna toh bharosha rakh mere upar. Maine usse bhi bohut kuch saha hai zindagi main aur main tab kamzoor nahi padhi toh yeh baat se kaise kamzoor pad jati"(I wont do anything like that Sanchi. Atleast trust me that much. I have endured more than that in my life so i wouldnt have fallen weak by that 1 incident)

Sanchi "Geet tune mujhe kabhi bhi nahi bataya kyu nahi teri zindagi ke baare main. Agar main kuch janti hoti toh main uss din tujhe defend toh kar paati."(Geet u never told me about ur life ever. If u would have then I could have defended u that day)

Geet "Sanchi ab uss baat ko yaad kar ke koi faida nahi hai. Tu woh sab chod aur bata tu Sweden kab wapas ja rahi hai???" n to lighten the tension said "Aur hume khush khabri kab suna rahi hai???"(Sanchi now what is the use of remembering those things. U leave all that n tell me when are u guys going back to Sweden??? N when are u going to give us good news???)

Sanchi "Chup kar Geet. Khush khabri jab hogi tab tujhe bata dungi aur Sweden toh hum log kal hi ja rahe hai mummyji aur papaji ko saath leke"(Shut up Geet. Good news u will get when it comes n we are going back to Sweden tmrw with my in-laws)

Geet "Kya tu kal ja rahi hai aur tu mujhe milne aaj aayi hai??? Wah Sanchi tu toh apni best friend ko hi bhool gayi" n faked as if she was rubbing her tears.(What u are going tmrw n u came to meet me now??? Wow Sanchi u forgot ur best friend only)

Sanchi "Oye nautanki bas kar apni nautanki. Main toh tujhe milne phele din hi anne wali thi lekin ghar main bohut se log arahe the mummyji aur papaji se milne isiliye waqt nahi mila ur aaj hum log free the toh tujhe milne agaye warna main tujhe aaj call kar deti"(Oye drama queen stop ur drama.I was about to come on the first day only but there were many guests in house who came to meet my in-laws n so i was busy n today i was free so i came to meet u or else i would just have called u")

Geet "Hawww tune mujhe nautanki bola. Dekha babaji aapki pyaari si phool si bachi ko yeh nautanki bol rahi hai. Acha koi baat nahi. Acha kiya jo tu aaj milne chali aayi."(Haww u called me drama queen. See babaji she is telling drama queen to ur sweet daughter. U did nice that u came n net us today)

Sanchi "Acha Geet hume ab chalna chaiye. Todhi si packing abhi baaki reh gayi hai aur kal subah jaldi flight hai."(Ok Geet we should leave now. There is some packing left to do n tmrw we also have early morning flight)

Geet "Arre lekin tumne kuch nahi khaya nahi. Aise kaise bina kuch khaye ja sakte ho tum log. Jiju aap hi bolye na"(But u didnt have anything. How can u go without having anything??? Jiju u tell na)

Sanchi "Sorry Geet iss baar nahi. Next time aungi tab pakka lunch ya dinner ke liye aungi."(Sorry Geet cant this time. Next time when i come i will surely come for lunch or dinner)

Geet "Theek hai."(Ok) n said bye to Sanchi n her husband. Yash n Meera said that they were going out for dinner n so not to wait for them n the kids were at home only. Yug n Vrinda were going out to meet their old friends.

After they all left Geet sat beside Maan n kept her head on his shoulders n closed her eyes feeling peace. Maan carressed her hairs n smiled seeing her calm face n after few mins said "Geet tum bohut thak gayi ho na. Chalo room main chal ke todha araam kar lo."(Geet u are tired na. Come lets go to room n then u rest)

Geet "Nahi Maan mujhe dinner bana na hai aur bache bhi toh akele hai."(No Maan i have to prepare dinner n kids are also alone)

Maan "Mishti tum chinta mat karo main bacho ko sambhal lunga aur dinner bhi bana dunga tum jaake todhi der araam kar lo"(Mishti u dont worry. I will handle the kids n also make dinner. U go n rest)

Geet "Theek hai main phele bacho ko dekh ke aati hu tab tak aap fresh ho jaye phir main araam karne chali jaungi." n kissed his cheeks n went to the kids room.(Ok i'll first check on the kids till then u freshen up n then i will go to rest)

Maan went to their room n got fresh n then an idea clicked his mind n he arranged for it n wrote a note to Geet n then went to the kids room. 

Maan "Mishti ab tum jao aur araam karo. Main bacho ko sambhal lunga. Chalo main tumhe room tak chod ke aata hu"(Mishti now u go n rest. I'll take care of the kids. Come i'll take u to the room) n took her in his arms while Geet was protesting "Maan mujhe neeche uthariye. Bache dekh rahe hai. Maan aap yeh kya kar rahe ho???"(Maan put me down. Kids are seeing. Maan what are u doing???) but Maan didnt answer anything n took her to their room n as he placed her on her feet he pulled her into his arms n said "Mishti abhi jitna araam karna hai kar lo. Raat ko toh main tumhe sone nahi dene wala."(Mishti rest how much ever u want right now. At night i wont let u sleep only)n pecked her lips n went away with a smirk.

Geet blushed hearing his words n then went towards the bed n say a note. She smiled knowing that it must be Maan who would have written it n read it.

"Uff Mishti tum sharmate huve bohut hi zyada khubsoorat lagti ho aur mera toh mann kar raha hai ke main tumhe abhi kha jao."(Uff Mishti u look so beautiful when u blush that i feel like eating u then n there)Geet hid her face in her palms n then continued reading "Ab aapna chera mat chupao jaan-e-mann. Aur tumhare liye ek surprise hai washroom main jao aur dekho. Aur kaisa laga raat ko batana.

Sirf tumhara,
Maan"(Now dont hide ur face jaan-e-mann. N there is a surprise for u in the washroom. N how did u like it tell me in the night.

Only urs,
Maan)

Geet smiled reading it n kissed his name n kept the letter on the table n went into the washroom n saw that it was filled with candles n rose petals n Maan had filled the bath tub. Geet smiled at his concern n then relaxed in the bath tub for a while n then changed n slept.

Meanwhile in the kids room,
Shriya,Sameer n Mithun were busy playing GTS n poor Mahi was left all alone. As Maan entered he saw the three of them busy in their game n shook his head n then saw Mahi sitting there holding her barbie with a sad face. Now how could Papa she his Shona sad n so he went to her n picked her up n made her sit on his lap n asked "Mera Shona kyu sad hai???"(Why is my Shona sad???)

Mahi "Papa dekho na Mithun bhai,Sameer bhai aur Shriya di aapni game main busy hai aur mere saath khelne wala ko bhi nahi hai aur Mumma bhi nahi hai warna woh mere saath zaroor khelti"(Papa see na Mithun bro,Sameer bro n Shriya di are busy in their game n no one is there to play with me n even Mumma is not there or else she would have played with me)

Maan "Aww meri Shona ke saath koi nahi khel raha. Koi baat nahi Shona ke Papa hai na woh aap ke saath khelenge."(Aww no one is there to play with my Shona. No problem Shona's Papa is there na he will play with u)

Mahi "Sachi Papa aap kheloge mere saath???" with a wide smile on her face.(Really Papa u will play with me???)

Maan "Haan bikul aaj Shona aur Papa khelenge. Chalo hum khelte hai."(Yes surely Shona n her Papa will play. Come lets go)

Mahi n Maan then started playing. They played many board games n puzzles n many more games. After 3 hours of playing Maan said "Shona abhi Papa ko dinner bana hai. Toh hum phele dinner banate hai aur phir khelenge. Theek hai???"(Shona Papa has to prepare dinner now. So we will prepare dinner n then play. Ok???)

Mahi "Papa main bhi aapki help karu???"(Papa shall i help u???)

Maan "Mera Shona meri help karega. Theek hai chalo."(My Shona will help me. Ok lets go)n they went to the kitchen n Maan made Mahi sit on the kitchen slab n said "Toh Chef Mahi aap aaj kya banengi???"(So Chef Mahi what will u prepare???)

Mahi giggled listening to Maan n said "Papa aaj na hum Pasta banate hai. Mumma na Pasta banati hi nahi. Jab bhi main bolti hu toh bolti hai ke kal bana dungi"(Papa today we will prepare Pasta.Mumma doesnt prepare Pasta only. Whenever i say she tells tmrw i will prepare n doesnt make only) n pouted. Maan smiled n said "Aap aise chera banati ho na toh bikul apni mumma ki tarah lagti ho. Meri Shona"(When u make such a pouting face na u look like ur Mumma only. My Shona.)n hugged her n then continued "Theek hai toh aaj hum pasta hi banayenge."(Ok we will prepare Pasta)

Maan started preparing Pasta while talking to Mahi. After the pasta were ready. Maan n Mahi sat on the dining table. Mahi then said "Papa humna ab ghar ghar khelte hai. Aap Papa bano aur main Mumma theek hai"(Papa lets play house-house. U be Papa n i'll be Mumma. Ok)

Maan smiled n nodded. Mahi ran n got a duppatta n wore it like Geet wears n started making some food in her kitchen set. Maan was smiling n seeing his Choti Geet imitate her Mumma.

Mahi then came with a plate of Oreo biscuit n told "Aapke liye khana"(Food for u)

Maan took it n said "Acha bana hai"(Its very nice)

Mahi "Khaye khaye aapke liye hi bana hai."(Eat eat I made it for u only)

Plz see this video n imagine Maan n Mahi
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YfFlaavmqSU[/YOUTUBE]

Mahi then took the oreo piece from him n started giggling. Maan got up n took her in his arms n then threw her in the air n she laughed n then he caught her. As they were having fun they heard a laugh n turned n saw Geet standing there with tears in her eyes n a wide smile on her face.

Maan turned to Mahi n said "Shona aap jao aur fresh ho jao aur Mithun aur sab ko bolake aao aur phir hum dinner karenge ok."(Sho)na u go n freshen up n call Mithun n all n then we will have dinner ok

Mahi ran to her room n then Maan went to Geet n wiped her tears n said "Mishti tumhare ankho main yeh aaso ache nahi lagte. Plz tum purani baato ko yaad karke ro mat"(Mishti tears dont look good in ur eyes. Plz dont remember old things n cry)

Geet hugged him n said "Maan mujhe bhi aapke tarah Papa kyu nahi mile.???"(Maan why didnt i get a father like u???)

Maan to lighten her mood said "Geet main toh ek hi hu Maan Singh Khurana toh tumhe aapne Papa mere jaise kaha milta. Aur agar tumhe mere jaise Papa milta toh tum mujhe nahi milti toh achi hi hai ke tumhe mere jaisa hot n handsome Papa nahi mila" n smirked.(Geet im only one then how can ur father be like Maan Singh Khurana.N if u had got a father like me then i wouldnt have got u so in a way it is good that u didnt a hot n handsome father like me)

Geet waked his arms n said "Acha dinner main kya banaya hai aapne??? Aur aap acha khel lete ho Shona ke saath. Aur sabse acha tab tha jab Mahi ne aapse woh biscuit le liya aur phir aapko Mumma kar ke dara diya. Ha ha Maan tab aapka chera dekhne layak tha" n started laughing remembering his expression.(Ok what have u prepared for dinner??? N u play nicely with Shona. N the best was when Mahi took the biscuit from ur hand n then scared u telling that Mumma is behind u. That time ur expression was priceless)

 Maan "Acha bohut haasi arahi hai tumhe. Haslo jinta hasna hai. Main toh tumhe baad main aaj raat ko dekh lunga" n smirked as he got the desired effect n Geet stopped laughing.(Ok u are laughing so much na, laugh. I will see u today night)

Precap -
Present
Maaneet Marriage Anniversary

Past
Maaneet Marriage
Next - Part 14
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
osm update 
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
lovely update 
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awesome update! Please continue soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

superb

nd i specially liked maan nd mahi's scene

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Awesome update dear!!!
plzzz cont soon
w8ing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome update.
Maan and maahi scenes are so cute.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
the update was so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
niceyyy cutieee cutieee updateee
luved ittt
sweetu sweet maahi with shona's papa 
awesomeee