PH FF - This Love : Chapter 1 - Page 1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well hello there fello deshians! Some of you may recognise me, others may not 😆 I was here like aggess ago, and now I secretly stalk the forum. Its not full fledged posting and all that I'm sorry 😭. Well anyway I am here for my beloved belen wali. A.k.a Hiba! I love her and right now I am going to be her muse 😆. So here is an FF that I have started with ArHi. The first chapter will be the same, but after that it will all change I promise 😃 I am not copying any one elses stuff, its all my own.

So here we go?

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Chapter 1: The Catch and Fall



As Prem held her in his arms he realised that all this fake anger he was showing her wasn't worth the hassle, he could see her eyes widen as his grip on her tightened. She was trying to make a run for it, like she always done when things got heated between them but in the split second that he had held her, he saw the memories reflected in her eyes, he saw the good times they shared and realised that this what their marriage should be based upon. For the first time Prem felt selfish, but somewhere in his heart he knew that the sole reason he had married her was because he couldn't believe she was capable of such evil, and not to save his di. He tightened his arms around her waist and she gasped. He could feel her breath on his face as she begun to breathe heavily. Prem smirked. He had an effect on her.

"Aap hu- hu -hum- " Heer stuttered, he was looking at her with the most devilish smirk on his face.

"Main main kya heer?" he mimicked her stuttering.

"Aap humme chordijeye"

"Ahhh, but I never married you to let you go did I?" Prem said, and inwardly chucked as he saw the furrow in her brow and the confusion etched on her face

"What?" Heer was beyond confused this man was weird, sometimes he was all lovey and then next minute he was shouting at her for being silly. She couldn't keep up with all this.

Prem realised that now it was time to tell her the truth.

"You were curious as to how you hurt me isn't that right Mrs.Juneja?" He said rubbing his nose against hers and smiling in satisfaction as she closed her eyes and moaned a "hmmm"

"Well todays your lucky day" he began

"Huh?" she sparked up " So you're going to tell me?" She beamed.

Unwillingly he unwound his arms from her waist but moved his hands to hers and held them tight.

"Prem I've really hurt you haven't I?" She said looking down at their hands.

There was so much hurt in her voice that it amazed him, he should have never suspected her at all. Without thinking his thumbs began rubbing small circles on her wrists.

"I saw you on the terrace with him" He said.

Heer gasped and paled.

"So you know, about me and him?"

Prem flinched.

"Heer I want to ask you a question" He paused waiting for his statement to take effect.

"Do you love him?" He said, trying to hold back the pain in his voice.

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So how was that? Was it lame? 😆 Let me know, I think I am gonna continue it 😃

-Aashifa.

Do let me know like I said 😃

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ragvir92 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start.Do continue dear.I am happy that I was the first one to comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start ...
can't wait to read more..
update soon...
pls add me to the pm list..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...do continue soon and plss add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept
pls do add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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god ! its good to see an old member of this forum here ... and well it seems everyone nowadays only stock this forum ... anyay if m not wrog u have other unfinished ffs running in the forum too ?? what abt them ??
and hibaaa .. ?? lolz she has disappeared we ppl are madly waiting for her ff and she is likeee god knows here ??

now coming back to ur work here ... we all love IPKND and heer prem in arnav khushi style hehehe mashallah !!
"Main main kya khushi?" he mimicked her stuttering.

ahem ahem .. we need some proof readingg !!! hehehe
so mr and mrs juneja here are talking about who loves whom ... this is gonna be interesting ... angry prem and oh so shy!! heer ... loving this
will love to have pms

tc luv aishu

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bachcha you're mad you know that? 😆 tuaba yeh larki! I so didnt mean that you should go ahead to inspire me! I was asking for some suggestions about how to solve the errors I had made like with Prem's ML and everything in HA that I told you.. Inspiration is something that just comes to you you know.. But this was so sweet of you bachcha! 🤗*ruffles hair* 😛 I am really touched, nobody has been this impulsive and mad for me 😆 I love you!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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isnt it related to khushi story,,,\>>>???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aahhh...atlast sumebody updateddd n plus a new fresh FF👏!!!

the update is super fantasticcc⭐️!!!

i know it willl be full of intense love, sorrow n happiness!!!

so waiting for the updateee😃

please be a regular updaterrr!!!!

and add me to ur PM list!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: repunzell

aahhh...atlast sumebody updateddd n plus a new fresh FF👏!!!


the update is super fantasticcc⭐️!!!

i know it willl be full of intense love, sorrow n happiness!!!

so waiting for the updateee😃

please be a regular updaterrr!!!!

and add me to ur PM list!!!!


how r u now dear..?? xm khatam ho ga ya kya...???
we are waiting for ur twp ff to b updated... esp kavi albida

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