Virman SS - Love vs Destiny Part 1 (page 1))

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Everyone! my name is Mona and I am a silent reader. i am a huge virman fan and I have read all their FF's, SS's and OS. And each of them is just brilliant. I have this idea in my mind for quite few days so i thought of sharing it with you. I know it is not very good but i just want to give it a try. I am writing it for the first time. So everyone plz all kind of comments are welcome. And this is my own idea so if it is similar to any of the others then i am sorry because i don't know about it.Thanks.


PART 1

It is after virat goes to airport along with manvi to stop maya and finally they are together again.

Manvi: thinks- * finally i succeeded in my mission Maya Virat. Virat have accepted Maya again now everyone will be happy and especially Swamini bua. This was the hardest mission of my life till now, that chep is really stubborn. But I am happy, infact really happy because everything is good now, Virat was hugging Maya. Suddenly i felt something wet on my cheeks, was it raining . No, the sky is clear then what is it? I touched my cheek to see and it was my tears. My tears how, am I crying? But why? I should be happy, today my partner got his happiness back. This must be the tears of happiness and joy after all I worked so hard to bring them together and now finally it's done. I looked up to see Virat and Maya and my heart clenched. Virat was kissing Maya, at that moment i don't know why but it felt like as if someone was snatching my life away. NOOO, this is wrong i should be happy for my friend but then why am i not? Why am I crying? I don't have time to think about all this crap right now, Virat and Maya were coming towards me. I quickly wiped my tears and put a smile on my face.*

Virat: * Finally i decided to give Maya another chance and it's all because of that letter that she wrote and Manvi. I think i am happy and i know so will be everyone else and especially Manvi, after all she tried so hard to convince me. I looked at her standing outside the door, but i didn't expected what I saw. That Bandariya had tears in her eyes and when she saw us coming towards her she quickly wiped her tears away in order to hide it from me.*

-Virat And May goes to Manvi-

Maya: Thank You, Manvi for helping me to make Virat realize that i have changed and that i really love him. It's all because of you.

Manvi: Nahi Maya why r u saying thank you, i did all this for my friend and after all he is my partner, so how can i see my partner sad. And now u r also my friend. Right Chep?

Virat: *with a smirk on his face* Oh, really?

Manvi: Oh really.

Virat: But seriously Manvi thank You for all u did for me. By the way r you alright?

Manvi: Of course, why?

Virat: No, I thought I saw tears in your eyes?

Maya: *with confused Expressions* Manvi u alright?

Manvi: Oh yeah nothing, it's just that something went into my eyes.

Virat: u sure?

Manvi: Yeah, and chep are you deciding to become a detective because u r asking so many questions. Yaar, u should take Maya out for a date after all you guys have lots to catch up.

Virat: * Manvi today u made an excuse to get away but i know u were crying and i will talk to u later about the reason cuz right now u r right as always i should take Maya out somewhere*

Virat: Sure, and Manvi why don't u join us?

Maya: Yeah Manvi plz join us. *but in her mind: Manvi plz say no, i want to be alone with Virat*

Manvi: ThankYou for the offer but no, u guys go alone, I don't want to be a 'kabaab mein hadi'. So plz carry on and i will go directly home and i also have to do packing.

Virat: Why, Are u going some where?

Manvi: Chep what happened to u, Don't u remember that i am going back to Rishikesh tomorrow with beeji. Aur kal tak to woh tum hi the na jo chahate the ke main jald se jald yahan se chali jaun aur aaj tum hi bhool gaye.

Virat: *with a sad face* Nahi woh sab to main ne kal ghusse main kaha tha but i din't mean that. Sorry for that.

Manvi: I know, i was just kidding why r u becoming so emotional.

Virat: Nahi bas aise hi. OK then i will go home with u and we will spend time together as u r going back to Rishikesh tomorrow. And i am sure Maya will not mind. Me and Maya can go some other time. Right Maya?

Maya: *who was listening to their conversation was now little bit jealous, with a red face* yeah of course.

Manvi: thinks * i don't know why but for some reason i was happy that Virat wants to spend time with me because I my self don't know when we will meet again after tomorrow or whether we will ever meet again or not as I have cancer. And a sudden thought of going away from Virat and Jeevika di brought back fresh tears but i stopped them before Virat could notice. And why am I thinking all this, he is just me friend.* Nahi Virat tum or Maya jao, akhir tum dono ke liye aaj bahut hi khushi ka din hai. Aur waise bhi main kal shaam ko ja rahi hoon to hum kal bhi to baat kar sakte hain na.

Virat: True, so I guess I will take Maya on a date today. *i don't know why but for some reason i din't like the thought of Manvi going back to Rishikesh so soon. But i was the one who told her to leave immediately yesterday. But i was angry i did't mean it. I wanted to spend time with her today but she is right I should go with Maya after all now I also have a responsibility towards Maya too. but i Don't know why i am not feeling good about leaving manvi alone today, as if something wrong will going to happen. What am I thinking, everything will be fine. Lagta hai mujhe bhi is bandariya ka asar ho gaya hai.*

On the other side Maya was really happy from inside and thought *thank God , at least Manvi ko itna to pata hai ke Virat ko aaj mere saath waqt guzarna chahiye*.And before virat could change hos mind Maya quickly said:

Maya: Bye Manvi, Chalein Virat?

Virat: OK, then Bye Manvi, See you soon.

Manvi: Bye guys and enjoy. See ya.

After their goodbyes Virat and Maya left in Virat's car for a date and Manvi took an auto to go home. Manvi and Virat both went in opposite directions not knowing when they will meet again or may be not. But in all this one person was really happy and that was none other than Maya but one thing that she didn't knew was that her and Virat's relationship was not based on love but it was because of destiny. But if their relationship was destiny than who's relationship was based on love. And who will win Destiny or Love?


This is the end of part one. All type of comments are welcome. I know that it's not good but i still hope u guys will like it. And i will only continue if you will like it otherwise this if the end. Thank You.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!! this is really your first SS??
its sooo good!! loved it!!
please continue soon! and PM me :)
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👏😊I was so happy to see a Virman ff on this fan fiction forum...since all the ff's are pretty much of MG or Arshi...thank you dear for this wonderful ff...will be waiting for the next update...it will hopefully be soon...😉
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It is perfect please please please continue soon...!!!

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