New Abhi Nikki FF - From You to Me-Completed - Page 8

=pra19. He did give her a lot of chances , made his intentions crystal clear , almost confessed to her ; and in the end it all boiled down to humiliation for him .

Its not like he has completely stopped loving her , maybe he does subconsciously, but with everything that has passed between them , that love is definitely lost . And Nikki too has stopped coming in his way almost resigned to the fate of their love story. So wIth time , Abhi setting aside his anger and moving on seems natural .

Abhi was a man of tremendous self respect and more than one occasion , he made a fool of himself on account of Nikki or maybe just for her sake . And that final betrayal of his feelings , must have shattered the delicate world that he had begun to see for Nikki and him .

👏Aapki to explanation bhi aap ki ff ke tarha dhansu hain ! Ha ha Rucha and I both commented onn ur explanation at the same time ... same comment 😉

Originally posted by: pra19

@Nehu , waiting for your Res.

Yeah Pra, I'll edit that soon.I'm having exams this week so I couldn't manage to post my comment though I've read the part and it's awesome. Loved Sid-Nikki-Abhi chemistry.

Smile on Niki's face, i think she cant stop seeing other intern in her shoes :) A bossing around interns like he owns the place :) :)
Obviously it somewhere must be unconsciously registering to her that A is not that much indifferent any more.. That unspoken exchange.. very well portrayed.

A must be so confused.. is that feeling of jealousy because of N is mingling with interns specifically his brother or is it sense of professionalism.. I like it.. confusion makes man pull down those walls :)

A is doing somethings for her and not knowing what exactly he feels about it.. :) Its really great. I loved how this update was about those small gestures where you show that A is mellowing down and the walls that he has built, they are showing cracks..

It was amazing update, but felt it was too small :) you guys need to update soon with bigger one. But i am really liking the way these scenes seem casual and not far stretched.. Well done.

I read your discussion about N's mistake at pool. and couldnt stop writing about my view point :) Its been long time I wrote essay on AN's feelings from my point of view :D

Personally whenever i think about it, i have different opinion each time. Sometimes i feel N should have spoken something, if not saying those 3 words to A, atleast stopping armaan from making such a mess..
But then i think that she did try that, armaan was in no mood to listen that time and A was hell bent on making her talk.. Timing was just not right..
I dont know what N could do there.. N had already told armaan that its nothing like he thinks about A but still he didnt understand, like fool he kept saying you are innocent, you dont understand all these things and what not...
A was on another trip that time.. he just wanted to see N choose him infront of everyone. In some ways i think it was his mistake too.. if he loved N he should have seen how much Armaan means to Niki, he should have tried to see her confusion.

did you notice how each time (think about Kirti sangeet, outside marriage hall just after riots - the almost kissing scene, and then pool scene) he saw armaan coming towards both of them, he kept pushing N to show her feelings even more. he was acting as armaan isnt present there. he didnt matter from A's side but for N it wasnt the case and that always lead to jealousy and unreasonable expectations esp when he knew there was time when N was in love with armaan, He couldnt accept that and N couldnt come to terms with her feelings.

Well in my opinion one can always make mistake. It might be perfectly ok to feel hurt, betrayed but one shouldnt make more mistakes in that anger.. .And in my opinion A did exactly those mistakes when he said those harsh words again and again about her character.. First it was quite ok, for his wounds were fresh, but he wasnt able to heal himself overtime, learn from the way he had to face humiliation. He was in revenge mode and it was really hard to watch him make those choices.. it might be hard to forget, forgive but one has to.. Otherwise life would be full of broken hearts.. I think as a person this should have lead both of them understanding each other and themselves even more..

So after all this thoughts i still dont know if it was A, N or both at fault. I end up tipping either side each time i think about it but most of the times i end up thinking it was both of them and the Timing.

PS: this is all forgetting A's those dreaded words - I am married... I think A would be so so wrong in all these scenes if he was actually married :) So this all talk was under assumption that marriage track didnt air at all :)

Whowww.. This seems like bigger than your upate ;-) :) *hints*

Hey Pri .. the fun of discussion , infact the fun even in writing an ff is that everyone perceives things in his /her own way ... else there would be no discussions and no diffrent takes on a story .

@Jibs (I'll call you that , JIbreen sounds too formal . Hope you don't mind😊 ) , thanks sweetie . Yet again , I am happy that you are loving Sid's character .Abhi Nikkki scenes , yeah , I am bringing them and Sid too will be a party in them, he is an important character here .
And that bunny smiley is SO SO SO COOL . Iam not able to take my eyes off it ... 😍

@Rucha , haa haa . Your comment made me smile , as always . Thanks dear for all those lovely words (bows down with gratitude) . I think I am mature and I always made such a big deal of it that people around me started getting annoyed by that smug self acceptance . SO , now I have stopped thinking of myself as particularly mature and all , you know. No more dikhawa bas apni akal lagaana😉 .

@Mitzi , Humein aur likhne ki idea naa hoti , agar tum naa hote , agar tum naa hote ...
So all the "dhaasuness" is your doing (bows down with gratitude again)

@immayurfan , Hey thanks a lot and what should we call you ?

@Nehu , koi nahi . Take your time sweetie .

@Pri , Yes I wanted to make Nikki a toughie you know , ruthless and all . But Mitzi wanted her to be portrayed as professional and responsible😊 and dil ki softie to wo pehle se thi . So , yes she does feel bad for making the interns do such extended night shifts.
Oh , so glad you liked all the subtle exchanges of understanding that are not at all planned , but still end up happening. And A's jealousy of course , specially when his brother is so interested in trying to know more about the woman he once was so mad about himself . And next update will be big I can tell that you to you right away .Thanks so much sweetie for the lovely and thoughtful comment . As Mitzi said before writer ka plot kisi ko samajh aajaye ... thats the biggest compliment . For you 🤗

@angel_sub, ruch , Trish , Thanks guys . Your likes are very encouraging .

And Pri and Mitzi , it was sheer pleasure reading your POVs . It was like a very well thought out debate , you know , the kind of View/Counterview piece that used to come on TOI many years back (I don't read the paper any more so not sure if it still comes).

wow awesome part cont soon

This one is the bestest part till date although i'm hating abhi right now b/c of his rude behaviour with not onl;y niki but also with sid that was so mean the way he said sid to leave his house 😡but i'm enjoying abhi's jealously 😆loving sid niki interaction 😃loved the last part of the update the most 😳