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Posted: 13 years ago
hellooo people...
ONE ANNOUNCEMENT...
as my exams are coming near so very very very less updates...
and got 122 likes...thank u sooo much...
so heres the next update...enjoy!!!!


RECAP:geet kya kr rai ho????
she pulled her head up and looked towards him...wo jb mai choti thi aur
mujhe chot lagti thi...then mumma used to kiss their and the pain used to vanish...
with this she again started kissing him at that point with light feathery kisses...
haye babajee...please save me...i don't wanna loose myself...
but ye meri innocent seductress mujhse aj kuch galat krwake hi rahegi...
and with this he again closed his eyes feeling her lips and relishing the moment...

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**PART 24**

SHE AGAIN BACKED A BIT AND LOOKED TOWARDS HIS FACE...as his eyes were closed!!!
Maan..abhi bhi dard ho raha hai??...she asked in concern...
hmm...that was all he could manage...'
hmm?? kamal hai...mera dard to itni der me theek ho jata tha???
maan...maan you listening??
she asked shaking him...
hun...ha...ha am listening...
ha bahut dard ho raha hai!!!

abhi bhi???
hun...nai wo ab theek ho gaya...dekho magic...he laughed nervously...trying to normalise himself!!!
dekha...i told you!!!!...
hanji...chlo ab so jao...am here only...maan released himself from her grip
and rolled from her to lye besides her...
ok...goodnight...

about 30 minutes later...
maan ap so gae???? she asked raising herself on one arm and looking in his direction...
maan who was trying to sleep from half an hour but failed because of her closenesss...
nai geet am dancing...he spoke without opening his eyes...

maan please bataiye na....she spoke poking at his chest
haa geet...am sleeping...he tried not to laugh...
acha chalo phir so jaie...she said feeling all sad sad types...

after another 30 minutes...
maan opened his one eye and peaked in her direction...
when he saw her...looking towards ceiling and smiling...

geet kya baat hai...am observing from last one hour that you are not sleeping why so????
he finally asked getting irritated...
iska matlab hai apne mujhse jhoot bola that you were sleeping...she looked accusingly towards him...
he rubbed his temple and tried to be polite while answering...
dekho geet you were not sleeping...so i thought if i will pretend to sleep then you will also fall asleep but...
but am not feeling like sleeping!!!...she pouted cutely...

geet you are not trying sleeping otherwise you wouldn't have been awake...
nai...i tried sleeping...pakka...god promise...she spoke pinching her neck...
but.. mujhe neend aa hi nai rahi....
maan sighed....acha start pronouncing tables loudly...start from 2's table...
but why 2 and why not 1???
acha baba...start from 1???
ok...and with this she started counting the table...
1*1=1
1*2=1
1*3=3
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and it went so on...when she was ay 3*2=6...waise maan...
han geet...aj ap bahut ache lag rahe ho...and she giggled...
thanx geet...he smiled...
oho mai kahan thi...now i will have to start again....she again started...
1*1=1
1*2=1
1*3=3
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again at 4*6=24...maan...
ab kya geet??? he asked looking in her direction frustrated...
ek baat bolu..
ha bolo...
dev is very bad and you...you are very good!!!...she spoke giving a toothy smile...
ha geet he is very bad...
oho...but before she could utter anything...
geet start again...he shook his head...she smiled and started again...
1*1=1
1*2=1
1*3=3
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now at 10*4=40...maan...
now what geet????
ek baat...
ha bolo...he cut her short...
wo wo...i know how will i fall asleep...
how???
she rolled herself came upon maan...
now she was lying entirely on maan...her entire weight was on maan...
maan i wanted hear your heart beats...
she kept her head on his chest and tried listening to his heart beats...
maan smiled at her...but then he became aware of their position...
he could feel her softness pressed on him...he closed his eyes feeling her...

after about 15minutes...geet backed herself...
she folded her legs upwards and started swaying them to and fro as if getting bored...
maan felt a bit of weight being lifted...automatically his hand went to her waist to support her...

as she was swaying her legs...the saree slipped a bit from her legs...giving him a view of her slender white legs...
maan's eyes got fixed on them when he noticed her laughing...
kya hua geet...why are you laughing????
wo its tickling...she spoke pointing towards his hand on her waist...to which maan only tightened his grip on her waist...

maan wo jb ap mujhe choote ho na to kuch kuch hota hai....she spoke fluttering her eyes...
kay???...means what??? he spoke as if not believing...
ha...jb mujhe kiss krte ho yahan...she spoke pointing her nose..
maan smiled and again kissed her at nose...
yahan she spoke pointing her at cheek...he smiled and kissed here there also????

yahan...she then pointed at her lips...now maan was shocked!!
geet...when did i kiss you there????
wo wo...ha mere sapne me you kisse me here....she spoke cutely...now kiss na...
to ab mai tumhare sapne me bhi ata hoon??? he asked...

ha...ab kiss na....she asked again...
geet its getting late...you should sleep now...
nai ....
geet ...he spoke sternly...
geet got up from him...and sat turning her face away from him...
geet he sighed...\
i don't wanna take your advantage in this state...but how to make her understand???? he thought...

he got up and sat down...
he tried touching her shoulder to which she snapped...
he pulled her into his lap...
geet...he spoke making her face him only to notice big big tears coming out...
koi mujhse pyar nai krta...she complainrd feeling dejected...
mai apko achi nai lagti issiliye to ap mujhe kiss nai krna chahte...
aise nai hai geet...he tried to make her understand...
but it was difficult for him to see her in tears...

nai...koi bhi mujhse pyar nai krta...
nai geet aisa nai hai...he tried to interject...
but she was continuously blabbering...
having no other option...
maan held her scalp from one hand and pulled her forcefully till their lips met...
his other hand held her to waist...
he nibbled her lower lip and then moved to her upper lip...
he kept sucking her lips...as if waiting for her to be comfortable...
when he felt her relaxing a bit...
he bit her lower lip to which geet flinched...
and he entered her mouth...geet shuddered feeling him

geet didn't know how to react...she kept following what his tongue did...
maan tasted every corner of her mouth...
geet felt so week...as if she might fall anytime if maan wouldn't have supported her
he favored every hidden secret of hers...
he relished the sweet nectar of hers...

he only left her when he felt her struggling for oxygen...
when maan left her he saw her fully flushed...
her eyes were lowered ...she was to shy to face him...
maan felt like eating her alive...
maan pinned her to the bed and over her and again took her lips...
he kept relishing her...even geet snaked her arms around his neck...

they fell asleep at almost morning feeing contended...

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PRECAP:
the morning after...
and past...

so how was it????
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NEXT UPDATE:PART 25
PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 23
Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome..
superb..
loved d upd. to d core dear...
n ALL D BEST FOR UR EXAMS too...
do pm me d next part plzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
n yes i am super happy to be 1st...on ur ff...
n second place too..🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priti11

n yes i am super happy to be 1st...on ur ff...

n second place too..🥳


D THANX...BUT i took the third place!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm yaar
hayeee poor maan ki sari neend khrab ho gyi
bt no prlmb
uska compnstin b mil gya...😆
arey geet maan ne sapne mai aur kya kya kiya wo b bta deti...😆😉😳
lvd it
agn past...
kitna lamba hai inka past..🤢


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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update love it geet talli poor maan finally kiss



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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the past now.. so badly want to know it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR:)
LOVED IT...SPECIALLY THIS TALLI GEET😉
"MAAN KI CONTROL POWER KI JAI HO"...JO GEET ABHI TAK BACH GYI US SE... 😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

mindblowing...

its amazing...geet behaving like dis...bechara maan...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
pichle update ka kasar iss me poora ho gaya
maan's first kiss with geet but she was not in her senses
now the morning after is gonna b interesting

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