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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
thank god maan arrived there
but seems like maan is hiding some truths abt sam as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
helllooo people...
thanx for your lovely comments...👏
i really loved all of them...
and yes i love to see you all confused...🤣
so here s the next part...
and i expect long comments from you all after this update...
so here it goes...⭐️




RECAP:he rushed to her room...when he found it locked!!!
he banged it open to be shocked by the sight in front of him!!!

he rushed inside and pulled dev with his collar and threw him aside!!!!
he took geet in his arms and hugged her dearly!!!
geet tum theek to ho na...to which he only heard her mumbling...
maan mujhe bacha lijiye!!!!
he was shocked and then looked towards dev!!!
you b*****...you mixed her drinks!!!!


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**PART 23**

han...i mixed her drinks...so???
whats your problem???


my problem...you are asking my problem????
damn it...she s my wife!!!!!..
.he spoke raising his voice...
his attention to then went to geet who was lying in his arms and continuously mumbling...
he softly made her lie on bed and pecked her forhead whispering i am here only geet!!!
you are safe now...am sorry for leaving you alone!!!!


when dev who himself was trying to get up from the floor spoke...
wife???? your wife????
hun...i don't believe in this relationship of yours...
it was not from her consent...you forced her to marry you!!!
must say a great plan Mr.MSK!!!


i didn't force her!!!! maan spoke getting up from the bed and charging towards him!!!
it was by her consent!!!! he spoke holding dev by collar and making him stand...
it wasn't from her consent!!!! she was emotionally blackmailed...
and you knew her weaknesses...thats why you used that to make her marry you...
thats why she married you!!! or else she would have never married you!!!\
she has always loved me and will love me only...


deeevvv... he punched him on his face...
how dare you speak like this about my wife????
she never loved you!!! it was always you who assumed that she loved you!!!
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dev whose nose started bleeding...wiped the blood with his thumb and spoke...
must say nice plan Mr. MSK...how come i never realised your plan...
may even i was a fool to think of you as an innocent person who genuinely wanted good for me...
but you...you set up natasha...and she mixed my drinks...


oh come on dev...even you are not that innocent...
it wasn't like you were not attracted to natasha...
yes i did set her up but it was mutual...
and yes she mixed your drinks but i have seen you drinking earlier also...
you never get high on this little intake...
if you would have been loyal you could have avoided that...
you were more focused on your career than your relation...
so stop this nonsense...
and how dare you try and touch my wife with your filthy hands?????

why...why can not i touch her????
she s mine and will always remain mine...i have all rights to touch her!!!

nooo...
you don't have any right on her!!!!
even earlier she never allowed to touch you...and even after knowing that she s my wife you did that...

and there came another punch...and dev fell on ground...
she s mine...always was mine...and will always remain mine...he kicked on his stomach...

acha if she was yours then why don't you guys share a relation that every husband and wife does???
thats none of your buisness and who told you...
if i am right you witnessed what happened before everyone few minutes before...
after that also you will say that??
? he smirked...
and yes we share that relation that every husband and wife shares in your terms...
and i won't like to give any more details because its too personal
and he winked...

dev got furious and pushed maan...
maan stumbled back but quickly balanced himself...
dev you are such a coward...you mixed her drinks and then tried to...how dare you???
he charged towards him and kicked him again...
he pulled him up again and then banged his head with the wall...
his head was bleeding now...
maan punched him again and he again fell down...
he then kept kicking on his abdomen and dev now started vomiting blood...

just then everyone rushed inside...when they saw maan kicking dev...
yash and vicky rushed towards dev and tried stopping maan...
jiju chod dijiye isse...he will die....they p[leaded him...
while meera rushed to geet and saw her trying to get up...but was falling againa and again...
she was holding her head...while her face was tear sticken...she was calling out for maan...

just then NT rushed inside the room and fell on maan's feet...
please maan chod dijiye inhe...even he s drunk...
tears were falling from her eyes...next month hamari shadi hone wali hai...

just then maan stopped and realxed a bit...
vicky helped dev to get up while yash was about to ask maan when meer interuppted...
maan jiju geet is calling you...
meera me and geet are leaving right now...

jiju please...geet ko iss halat me lejana won't be right!!!
just stay here for tonight and can leave early morning...no one of us would ask anything else...
please jiju..
.maan nodded...
to which meera and others qiuckly left the room...
maan went and locked the door...

just then he saw geet calling him...he rushed to her and held her...
ha geet mai idhar hi hu....he picked the glass of water and made her drink...
geet ab tum so jao...mai fresh ho kr ata hun...
with this maan went inside the washroom..
few minutes later he heard her laughing...
he rushed out and saw her laughing just like that standing near the window...
maan came to her and before he could say anything she spoke...maan ap bahut ache hai...
she tiptoed and kissed his cheek...and she again started laughing...

maan touched his cheek that was kissed by her and asked...ye kissliye???
ap bahut nai baahhhuuut she spoke while enacting by her hands...ache ho na...iss liye..she spoke making a cute face!!
but then she started crying suddenly...pr wo dev...he s very bad....she spoke pouting...
maan wiped her tears...han baba wo bahut ganda hai...ab khush...
nai ap pehle usse maro...ussne pta hai ap ko burra kaha...
he smiled looking at her..arrey maine usse abhi bahut mara...
pr maine to nai dekha...she spoke scratching her head...
nai pehle ap usse mere samne maro!!!!
maan looked at the ceiling...babajee help me!!!

geet you are drunk ...you are not in your senses...so you better sleep...
nai pehle ap usse maro...she spoke stubbornly
oh god..with this leaving with no other option he scooped her up and slowly kept her on bed...
geet all the time was not facing him...ap ache nai ho...she spoke turning her face to other side...

maan sighed and sat besides her on the bed...
geet so jao please...naai sona mujhe...she turned to other side and lied down...
her saree was not giving him a hull view of her bare skin and the silver waist chain...
his hand on their own went towards it...
mujhse koi bhi pyar nai krta...sb gndae hai...she pouted...
while maan stopped his hand in air only...ye mai kya kr raha tha...he mentally slapped himself...
geet...he spoke while trying turning her...
he made her face him...geet...
abhi to dev ghar chala gya hoga na...he spoke sweetly as trying to convince her...
hm kal subah uske ghar jaenge and then we will beat the hell out of him...happy...
pakka...she spoke like a little kid...
promise...and he kissed her cheek...ab to so jao...she smiled and nodded...
goodnight...
goodnight geet...as he assured she was fine..he stried getting up ...
when geet held his hand...ap kahan ja re ho???
wo...am sleeping on the couch...
kyun??? she asked cutely...he actually wanted to eat her alive...
(ek to she was looking so irresistible upar se ye looks...bechara maan...)

wo yeh bed chota hai na...you won't be able to sleep comfortably...
nai ...hum to 3 friends so jate the...hum to sirf 2 hai...she spoke showing two with her fingers...
he chuckled...geet but....
but what kuch nai...she spoke pulling him and maan fell on her...
syhe started laughing and held her arms tightly around his neck...
ap to gir gae...even maan smiled at her antics...

but aj ap please mere sath soi jao...mujhe aj dar lag raha hai...
she spoke giving innocent looks...
maan understood that after all this dev fiasco she might be scared...
he nodded...and kissed her nose...she smiled...
just then she saw a cut mark on his neck...
maan yahan kya hua???
maan frowned ...kahan???
yahan...she spoke touching to that point...to which maan flinched...
he then thought it must have occured while fighting with dev...

dard ho raha hai...he shook his head...
jhoot...abhi theek ho jaega...with that she started blowing their very sweetly...
he held onto her tightly...
she bend further down...and touched her lips at the cut...
she kissed their...maan closed his eyes and whispered...
geet kya kr rai ho????
she pulled her head up and looked towards him...wo jb mai choti thi aur
mujhe chot lagti thi...then mumma used to kiss their and the pain used to vanish...

with this she again started kissing him at that point with light feathery kisses...
haye babajee...please save me...i don't wanna loose myself...
but ye meri innocent seductress mujhse aj kuch galat krwake hi rahegi...

and with this he again closed his eyes feeling her lips and relishing the moment...

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PREACP:maan please kiss me na!!! maan jb bhi you touch
me...mujhe kuch-kuch hota hai!!!!

now me wondering ki kiss hogi ya nahi????

guys happy now!!!
dev ko bahut peeta!!!
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NEXT UPDATE:PART 24
PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 22


Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
M FIRST...YIPEEE
Superb..pls update soon..me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upate
loved it
dev ki pitai mast thi
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Posted: 13 years ago

yipeee!!!!!!!!!!!

awsome yaar

maja aa gaya dev is gonna beaten up by maan

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg omg poor maan kaise cntrl krega...😆😆
awsmmm updt
precap- yaar ek kiss toh bnta hai...😉😉😳
😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!!! Maan is really sweet!!! Awww!
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Posted: 13 years ago
kiss to banta hai na yaar😉... poor maan uski love lady usko bole kiss me or vo phir bhi na karo to... bahut na insafi hogi ye to ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update..
Loved maan beating dev..
geet too shud beat him..
Talli geet s superb..she s making maan insane..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem good dev ki pitayi love maneet moments

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