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Posted: 13 years ago
that was so awesum..
loved her cutie talks...
maan had to control a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update... loved it...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
they kissed...😍

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n superb part 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 24
nice part...
Geet bhi na...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWWSOME update, Geet all in drunken state, even told Maan about her dream.
And then that kiss...too passionate 😳
Vaise I have one doubt, itna lambi raat me bas kiss hi kiyia 😆 😉
Paar aab morning me kya hoga...will Geet be angry at him or herself?
Eagerly waiting for the next update, do update soon 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it the way Maan asked her to sleep
awww Geet's sweet confessions
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

P.S ALL THE BEST FOR EXAMS
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part..
loved it dear..
thanks 4 pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
awww drunk geet was so cute..
wow they kissed..
wonder how would be the morning after..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
@VALLI: di thank you so much for putting my link to fb...
its asking for my no.for security reasons...i actually entered it but its not taking it...
don't know what to do now???


guys...here s banner for my ff...
credit for it goes to yulz...
do let me know did you like it or not????
and here s next update...

RECAP:he only left her when he felt her struglling for oxygen...
when maan left her he saw her fully flushed...
her eyes were lowered ...she was to shy to face him...
maan felt like eating her alive...
maan pinned her to the bed and over her and again took her lips...
he kept relishing her...even geet snaked her arms around his neck...

they fell asleep at almost morning feeling contended...


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**PART 25**

AS SUN RAYS HIT HER EYES...
she lazily opened her droopy eyes...she looked towards her right and found maan s sleeping form...
she smiled and kept looking at it...she fluttered her eyelashes...
and rubbed them...she then again looked at her right...she found him there only...
just then she felt his hand on her bare wist...
she very slowly removed his hand in order to not disturb him...
she very slowly got up from the bed and rushed to washroom...
she looked at her form in the mirror...
she closely observed her neck...there were no marks...she sighed in relief...

i can never doubt him...he can never be wrong...she thought...
but kal raat hua kya tha??? why don't i remember???? she thought...
but how did we end up like this???? she wondered...
just then meera's words started playing in her mind...
her hand automatically moved to her waist and unknowingly a smile came on her lips...
she blushed feeling his fingers over there...

she then remembered that it was not their place...
she rushed out in order to wake him up...so that they can return...
she came to his side...when she noticed him in deep slumber feeling contended...
she sat besides him...she then noticed him twitching his nose as the rays fell on her...
she kept her hand above his face in order to avoid rays disturbing him...
he opened his eyes slowly and smiled looking at his angel sitting before him...

geet who was staring at him...got up suddenly...
but maan held her wrist and pulled her back...she fell on him...
maan rolled over her so that she was lying below him...
he held her tightly and hid his face in her nape...geet closed her eyes feeling him breathing on her nape...
after few seconds she felt him breathing rhythmically...to which she realized he asleep again...
she smiled feeling him so near...but then she remembered it was yash's place...

maan...she called out softly...
hmm...he answered snuggling more into her...

maan uthiye na pease...she tried again...
abhi nai geet...he moved his face to other side of her nape...
she felt his lips on her nape...she held onto him tightly...

maan please...we are at yash's place...
hmm...thats what he only answered and kept kissing her softly on her neck...
he slowly moved towards her lips...giving her butterfly kisses...
she noticed that his eyes were closed...
he was about to peck her lips when she shouted in his ear...MAANNN...

he got up startled...he then realized their position...
geet couldn't look in his eyes...
wo we should leave for our place...dadi and parth must be waiting for us...
he nodded...
as geet was about to move a severe pain shot in her head...and she instantly held her head...
maan who was about to move noticed this and asked....just two minutes geet...

he rushed out and returned with a glass of lime water ...he made her drink that...
feeling better...she nodded...
but ye...
maan cut her...dev mixed your drinks...
oh no...thats why i don't remember anything...oh god...
did i behave or say something wrong???? she asked innocently while praying to her babajee that his answer must be no...
maa was now in mood to tease her...akhir raat ka badla bhi to lena tha!!!! he smirked...😈

geet wo tumne...nai rehne do...we are getting late...
geet was hell scared now...nai maan please tell me...
geet tumne raat ko...i never expected this from you...
geet was on verge of tears...maan please...
jaan na chahti ho to ye dekho...he spoke showing his neck where her lipstick marks were there...

tears were freely flowing now...maan i didn't mean to...wo to...
maan who just now noticed her crying...pulled her in his embrace...
shh...geet don't cry...
maan am sorry...she was sobbing hiding her face in his chest...
geet you were not at fault...
and jo bhi hua it was mutual...

but ha...thanx to dev...atleast mujhe pta to chala tumhare dil me kya hai???? he winked...
she smiled and hit his chest...

he wiped her tears...and brought his face near to her...
waise geet you seriously don't remember what happened at night????
she shook her head...
k...i will tell you...


he gave a small peck on her lips...her eyes widened in shock...
he smirked...its just a clue...aur btau...she pushed him and rushed from there...
leaving maan laughing behind her...

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~~past~~


it was farewell time for geet and her gang...
geet was all to geared up for buying a saree...
sam and rano finally decided to take her for shopping...
they went to a mall...
she had already seen all the shops there...

sam and rano sighed and took her to another mall...
tudu its last one...it is the best compared to all...
it has the best collection and the most expensive one...if you didn't like now we will leave then...
and then you will have wear some saree from your mother's collection...is that o.k????


geet nodded and went inside...

she instantly liked the collection there...she shortlisted five among them...
she went to changing room...while sam and rano were busy seeing the collection there...
geet was trying to tie the saree but was unable to...frustrated she came out holding the pallu in her hand and all the pleats were messed up...
as she pened the door she was about to shout for her mom...when she noticed maan standing before her...
she called him out...Maan....
hi...geet tum yahan...and then his eyes fell on her messed up form...
he started laughing like anything...

geet cutely pouted looking at him laughing like this...hs lo ap bhi mujh pr...
pehli bar saree pehn rahee hun...
.
she complained...
aur tumse pehni nai ja rahee...he completed the sentence...she nodded...
chalo i will make you wear it...
apko ati hai saree kaise pehnte hai????
yup...after all i am The MSK...the perfectionist...and he winked...
chalo...he asked her to move inside...
geet just followed him...and he closed the door...

maan was here with his mom to buy a saree for her...
sawitri was changing in the next changing room...
she came out wearing the saree and called for maan but he was not there...
she came out and was calling for maan...when sameera noticed her...

kya hua aunti ji??? why you look so worried???

savitri told her everything...
sameera smiled and introduced herself...
sawitri instantly liked her...while sam helped her in selecting the saree...
sam then introduced her to rano...
they instantly clicked together...she actually forgot about maan with them...

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PRECAP: geet and maan in changing room...
you guys are free to imagine...

so how was it??? do press likes and leave your comments...
my fb account is still not working and am not getting
time to see into this...thanx for cooporating people!!!

P.S:fill the pages quickly so that we can start with a new thread!!!😃

NEXT UPDATE:PART 26
PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 24

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago

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