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Posted: 13 years ago


so sad...Pari is in coma and her life can end any time...

now Daadi is also serious...

who are the persons responsible for all this problems on Khurana family...

waiting for next ...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
its lovely yaar do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part.
Pls keep it connected to deewangi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
feeling sorry for maan...
sab mil rahe haipar with kuch na kuch problem ke sath...

a ye sach mai twisty deewangi hai...
har dussre part mai koi na koi twist hai...
bachre maan ka ek bhi din chain se nahi niklta...
maaneet ka romance to kho hi gaya hai...
twist twist and only twist...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome mindblowing update yar 👏
confusin precap😕
waiting for next update yar😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one... loved it...
I really loved the twist and turn of the story...
but at the same time want 😛some co-relation with deewangi...please continue dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MEL..🥳

I realized that we crossed 100 likes in PART 30..😲..


A big thanks to all those who commented and liked...Thank yo so much dears...am very overwhelmed...😳

For all those who felt Maaneet are missing...This update will hopefully fulfill your expectations…..😊
please buddy me for PMs...😳

PART - 32


Maan and Vicky were shocked to see Dadima. Vicky sprang into action immediately and caught her before she could fall on the ground. Maan also recovered from the shock by then and helped Vicky in carrying her to the bedroom.

Vicky immediately checked her while Maan was getting anxious by the second. After five minutes and making sure of everything, he turned towards Maan who had by then started sweating. Before he could say anything, Maan started bombarding him with questions.

"Dadima theek to hai na? Main abhi ambulance bualata hoon... Nahin nahin it's better hum hi unhe hospital le chalte hain... Par achanak unhe hua kya...OMG kahin unhone hamari baatein to nahi sun li... Kahin wo..."

Vicky held Maan's shoulders and gave him an assuring look.

"Chillax dude…. She is absolutely perfect..."

"Phir achanak aise…."

"Nothing just BP suddenly shoot up hone ki wajah se she fainted... Nothing serious..."

"Parr wo phir chillayi kyun jaise ki woh pain mein ho..."

"Well maybe unhe thoda chest pain feel hua hoga... but nothing to worry about... She is completely OK now…."

Maan finally took a sigh of relief and looked at Dadima with tears in his eyes. He loved her a lot; after all she was his mother as well as father throughout his life till now. He couldn't even bare the thought of something happening to her.

"Maan...Mere khyal se tumhe abb ghar jaana chaiyeh….Doll akeli hogi...Mum, dad aur uncle-aunty bhi aaj kisi kaam se bahar gaye hain..."

"Haan Vicky par Dadima…."

"Don't worry dude... Main hoon na yahan…. I will manage everything and take care... I will bring her back when she feels good…."

"Parr agar unhone wo Pari ke baare mein..."

Vicky sighed.

"Humein unhe kabhi na kabhi toh batana hi tha... If she asks anything toh main unhe bata doonga... Tum doll ke paas jaao... Usey akele rehna bilkul pasand nahi hai…."

Maan gave Vicky a grateful look and hugged him.

"Thanks Vicky..."

"Shut up bro…. stop embarrassing me... Aur abb tum apni ….. Ummm... Kya kehte hain... Yaa BHAGYAWAAN ke paas jaao…."

Maan gave Vicky a mock punch to stop his teasing smirk. He gave one last look to his Dadima who was peacefully sleeping on the bed and left.

KHURANA MANSION

Geet was pacing up and down the hall. She had been feeling very uneasy throughout the day and threw up almost everything she ate. She was feeling very lonely and was quite mad at Maan because…. Ummm actually there was NO REASON... Just she was mad at him…. She looked towards the ceiling and cribbed...

"Dekh rahey ho na aap Babaji…. Itni si bhi kadar nahi hai kisi ko meri….. Main yaha par itni pareshan hoon, subah se ek minute bhi chaein se nahi beth paayi aur toh aur main ne pichhle 2 ghante se kisi se baat bhi nahi ki...Nakul bhaiya thhey parr wo bhi 4 ghante baat karne ke baad pata nahi kahan gaye….."

(Hey Babaji... bechara Nakul…. Pagal khane gaya hoga….😆)

That's how Maan found her. As usual talking to her favorite Babaji rather cribbing to him. Oh she looked so adorable, he could eat her up alive right now.

He slowly crept behind her and whispered in her ear while nibbling it a little.

"Good Evening Jaan…."

Geet froze at his sudden action. She blushed profusely and was about to reply to him, when she suddenly remembered that she was mad.

She pouted and turned her face away.

Maan didn't get angry or irritated, as he knew she is getting crankier day by day due to her mood swings ….Though he was a multimillionaire businessman but in front of his queen he was a completely devoted hubby…..

"Kya baat hai meri Meet mujhse naaraz hai…."

"Baby or mamma dono papa se Katti hain…."

"Achchha parr wo kyun…."

"Wo... wo…. wo…. bas Katti hain toh hain…."

Maan almost smiled at her cuteness but immediately controlled himself. He didn't want to rile her up further. He took out the chocolates he had ordered for Geet knowing how much she loved them.

Geet immediately jumped at the sight of her favorite chocolates.

"Mere liye???"

Maan nodded and she snatched them from his hand and started munching them.

Chocolate was all over her hands and face. Maan was drooling over his cute Mishty and he was eyeing her chocolaty lips getting all the naughty-naughty thoughts.

Oblivious to his gaze our Geet kept munching them, as she was quite hungry. Suddenly she remembered something and asked Maan.

"Mmmphhhaaannhh…."

Geet forgot that her mouth was full of chocolate while Maan was confused what was she trying to say.

"Kya..."

She gulped the remaining chocolate and was looking for something to wipe her face and hands.

"Kya hua Geet..."

"Vo mujhe aap se kuchh puchhna tha..."

"Hmmm puchho..."

"Woh main puchhna chahti thi ki kya mein kal se office aa sakti hoon…..Plzzz"

"Bilkul bhi nahi…. Tumhe doctor ne rest karne ko kaha hai…."

"Parr mein aur baby saare din ghar mein reh kar bore ho jaate hain aur abhi toh woh chudeil bhi nahi hai mera entertainment karne ke liye…."

Geet made a baby face and Maan melted. Anyway he knew it was not safe for Geet to be alone till all their enemies are behind the bars. This way he could keep her with him 24x7 and would ensure that she takes adequate rest at the same time….

"Theek hai... Abb hum baby ko naraz toh nahi kar sakte naa... You both can join the office next week..."

Geet got really happy and out of excitement she hugged Maan forgetting that she had her hands full of chocolate...Before Maan could stop her, she had already left prominent stains of chocolate on his waist coat... Ooops….favorite waist coat….

"GEEET…. yeh kya kiya tumne…."

"Oops sorry main woh..."

Geet got very tensed and tried to remove the chocolate thereby putting even more chocolate on it...Maan caught her hands and pulled her to him…. He was about to shout on her when he saw her beautiful terrified hazels...

All his anger went out of the window when he saw tears brimming in her eyes...

"Shhh Geet…. Koi baat nahin…. It's Ok..."

He thought that Geet would begin her sorry speech but he was left amazed when she jumped out from his embrace and ran towards their room.

"Sambhal kar Geet...Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho..."

He followed her to the room only to find her attending a phone call.

He rolled his eyes at his Little Wify's antics and decided to freshen up till she finishes that phone call. But he froze at his place when he heard her next set of words.

"OMG Arjun…. I Love You so much….Ummmah..."

PRECAP

Tu Na Jaaniya AAS PAAS Hai KHUDA...😕


so MEL hope you liked your B'day update😳!!!

As you all requested me will write my twisty thing but with a little dose of Muski di's Deewangi...😳

Glimpse in next 2-3 updates...😉


PREV - PART 31 NEXT - PART 33


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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
are geet ne sirf 4 ghante baath ki nakul se😒
hai babji vo 2 ghate kaise chup rahi hogi😲
n ruchs chocolate fully face pe smeared thi😍
aur maaan ne kuch naughty thing nahi kiii😔
yeh tho badiii nainsafiii haiii😭
bechara maan he couldnt do naughty tricks n upar se waist coat bhi karab hoga😆
n hope ab arjun ko 4 ghathe baathe naa sunii padeee🤣

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